Looking around, lonely and sad.
It's the hardest to stop breathing when it's warm and cold.
Three glasses of light wine, how can you object to his coming late and rushing!
Guo Yan is very sad, but this is an old acquaintance.
Yellow flowers were piled all over the floor, withered and damaged. Who can pick them now?
Looking out the window, how can you be black alone!
Indus is drizzling, and at dusk, it is falling.
This time, what a sad sentence!
If you rewrite your prose, you'd better write it in the form of a story and write it as a chronicle prose. It is best to write in the third person and call Li Qingzhao her. At first, you can write that she looked out of the window, drank wine to drown her sorrows, and looked at the path flowers outside the window. Then tell the story of the author and her husband bit by bit by flashback and interpolation, including the change of scenery, the description of expression and the subtle description of action. On the whole, keep the sad mood tone of parting and homesickness. Finally, at the end, the author's expectation and sustenance can be described by the scene where the word goose is empty. The main purpose of this article is to be careful not to write a narrative. The difference between narrative and narrative lies in that the narrative is based on the description of events to set off the atmosphere, and the narrative should not be too detailed. As long as the emotional narrative is related to the author's inner thoughts and events, narrative prose should either write a general account of the events or write the details of a certain part of the events, rather than the overall detailed narrative. Prose is based on emotion. The story is based on events. It can be said that the most wonderful thing about this article is that it imitates the narrative prose style of An Yiru's A Love that Swallows Everything.