Its structure is neat, syllables are harmonious, momentum is connected, meaning is clear, and atmosphere is rendered. Compared with the whole sentence, a loose sentence is a group of sentences with scattered structure and uneven sentence length. Its form is flexible and natural, full of changes and avoids monotony.
Whether to use whole sentences or scattered sentences should be decided according to the needs of expression. Whole sentences and scattered sentences are also interchangeable.
Turning a loose sentence into a complete sentence means turning a long and short sentence into the same sentence pattern, or all of them into long sentences, or all of them into short sentences. Changing a whole sentence into a scattered sentence means changing "neat" into "scattered". When rewriting, the sentence pattern is changed, and long and short sentences are interspersed to become scattered sentences.
Second, practice the conversion between whole sentences and scattered sentences. Example 1: Change the underlined sentences in the following text into complete sentences. There are all kinds of flowers in the world.
I have seen elegant peony, noble and elegant chrysanthemum; I have seen graceful daffodils and muddy lotus flowers. I have seen unpretentious wheat flowers and sorghum flowers, and I have also seen glorious hero flowers. However, in my deep memory, it is such a flower that I will never forget; Not in the spring of March, but in the cold winter; It doesn't bloom in a flowerbed greenhouse, but in the ice and snow. It is not the warm spring breeze that welcomes its birth, but the cold north wind; It is the people's tears and painstaking efforts that nourish its growth, not the spring breeze and autumn dew.
This is a flower dedicated to Premier Zhou, an endless flower in Tiananmen Square. Example 2: Modify the underlined part of the following sentence to form a complete sentence with the sentence before it.
(You can't change your original intention, you can change your words appropriately.) Shanghai has quietly appeared the bud of "experience economy": let you experience the rainforest restaurant that feels like entering the tropical rainforest; ① Sightseeing agriculture in sunqiao town allows you to experience field work; An entertainment shopping center with a collective leisure shopping investment of more than 300 million US dollars will soon appear, and a famous tourist attraction like Victoria Harbour in Hong Kong and Sydney in Australia will soon be built ... All these are wise moves to develop the "experience economy". Answer 1 answer 2 for example 1 reference answer: not in the spring of March, but in the cold winter; It doesn't open in the flower bed greenhouse, but it blooms in the ice and snow; It is not the warm spring breeze that welcomes its birth, but the cold north wind; It is not the spring breeze and autumn dew that nourish it, but the tears of the people.
Reference answers: ① sunqiao town sightseeing agriculture can experience field work; ② Famous tourist attractions such as Victoria Harbour in Hong Kong and Sydney Harbour in Australia will also be built. Third, explain the transformation between oral sentence patterns and written sentence patterns. Knowledge points often appear in spoken sentence patterns, which are called spoken sentence patterns.
It is short and pithy, with simple structure, few related words, vivid and natural. The sentence patterns that often appear in written language are called written sentence patterns, which use long sentences, have complex structures and use more related words, so they are rigorous and thorough.
In addition, there are obvious differences between spoken sentences and written sentences in terms of words: spoken sentences mostly use easy-to-understand words, while written sentences are mostly composed of elegant and solemn words. Fourth, practice the conversion between spoken and written sentence patterns. Example 1: According to the language environment, paraphrase the contents of the following written materials in spoken language.
MATERIALS: ① Xu Fan, male, from Nanjing, Jiangsu Province, is a professor at the School of Literature of Oriental University. (2) He is a rising star in China's redology circle, especially in studying the author's life experience.
③ The monographs "Textual Research on Cao Xueqin's Family", "On the Characters in Grand View Garden" and "Introduction" (④ won the Excellent Education Book Award) enjoy a high reputation at home and abroad. Requirements: ① The content is appropriate.
② Appropriate expression. ③ It conforms to the characteristics of spoken language.
④ Write the reported words on the corresponding horizontal lines. When the school invited Xu Fan to have a discussion with the students, you introduced to the students as a member of the literary society: 1234Case 1 Reference answer: Key points of transformation: ① There should be a title after "Xu Fan" and no gender should be introduced.
② "department" and "rising star" must be transformed into "yes" and "research expert". (3) the author's life experience should be converted into Cao Xueqin's life experience or the author's life experience of A Dream of Red Mansions, and "good at
(4) The contents in brackets must be converted into sentences. (5) Explain the knowledge points of transformation between regular sentences and variant sentences. Regular sentences are sentences with normal word order. Variant sentences are sentences with inverted sentence components.
Common variant sentences are: verb inversion, adverbial postposition, Zhuang preposition and attributive postposition. The purpose of variation is to emphasize something.
What's the matter with you? What's the matter with you? We will discuss and solve this problem in the conference room tomorrow. We will discuss and solve this problem in the conference room tomorrow.
Tomorrow, we will discuss and solve this problem in the conference room. He beat Xiao Ming in Class Kloc-0, Grade 2.
He beat Xiao Ming in Grade Two (1). (attribute postposition) 6. Practice the transformation between regular sentences and variant sentences 1 The following sentence transformation is correct: A Everyone knows that Li Bai was a great poet in the Tang Dynasty.
No one can deny that Li Bai was not a great poet in Tang Dynasty in China. They deserve a new life that we have never experienced before.
They deserve a new life, which we have never experienced before. C Against the background of thick clouds, the dam seems to be a big warship moored in the sea, which is even more majestic.
Against the thick clouds, the dam seems to be a big warship moored in the sea, which is even more majestic. The rain came suddenly and violently.
Change it into an exclamatory sentence: let the rain come more suddenly and violently! The topic of explaining the knowledge points of sentence reorganization is generally to change the beginning of a sentence or the object of statement, so that the answer can reorganize the sentence without missing the information of the original sentence. Example of practicing sentence recombination 1. Start with Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, and reorganize the following sentence without changing the original intention.
Su Shi's life and creation are full of contradictions, because he is influenced by Confucianism, Taoism and Buddhism, and his thoughts are complicated. Examples of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism 1 Reference answer: Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism all have influences on Su Shi, making him think.
2. The characteristics of parallel prose in sentence pattern are parallel couple and parallel prose in sentence pattern are parallel couple and long and short sentences (antithesis).
Parallel prose is also called parallel prose, parallel prose or parallel prose; The writing style of ancient people in China was written in pairs. Because it is commonly used in four words and six sentences, it is also called "Liu Siwen" or "Parallel Four Wives and Six". The whole article is mainly composed of two sentences (even sentences, even sentences), paying attention to the neatness of the antithesis and the loud melody.
Parallel prose is a literary style, which originated in the late Han Dynasty, formed and prevailed in the Southern and Northern Dynasties.
It appears alternately with four characters and six characters, and is called "Liu Siwen" in the world. In the Tang Dynasty, scholars were selected by poems, and their fu was a law fu derived from parallel prose. The official documents of the Tang Dynasty are also parallel prose, that is, four or six styles. Parallel prose often affects the content expression by accommodating sentence patterns and piling up rhetoric. After Han Yu and Liu Zongyuan advocated the ancient prose movement, parallel prose suffered setbacks for the first time. After the death of Han and Liu, their influence rose again. Li Shangyin, Wen and Duan are among them, ranking 16th, so they are called "Thirty-six Style". After entering the Song Dynasty, under the leadership of Ouyang Xiu and others, the ancient prose movement reached its second climax, with numerous essays and parallel prose gradually declining.
3. The language characteristics of Song Ci and the author's characteristics 1. Linguistic features of Song Ci: 1.
Sentences are not uniform in length, so they are also called "long and short sentences"; 2。 Each tone (that is, epigraph) has its sentence pattern, sentence number and word number; 3。
Each word has a different tone, rhythm and number of rhymes. 4。 Whether it is dual, cohesive and overlapping also varies with the tone of words; 5。
They are all very happy and write lyrics for fun, so they are suitable for singing. Second, the author's characteristics: 1.
Yan Shu and Ouyang Xiu-graceful and leisurely; 2。 Wang Anshi and Su Shi-bold feelings; 3。
Huang Tingjian, Chen Shidao, Chao Bu Zhi, Maogu-elegant and chic; 4。 Banquet a few roads, Li Zhiyi, Qin Guan, Zhang Lei-beautiful and graceful; 5。
He Zhu, Zhou Bangyan-elegant and generous, doing things with rhythm; 6。 Song Jiang and Evonne-comely and meaningful; 7。
Zhu and Li Qingzhao-North-South transition, emotional; 8。 Ye Mengde, Zhang, Yue Fei-passionate; 9。
, Chen, Qing xiu; 10。 Fan Chengda and Yang Wanli-fresh and sparse; 1 1。
Lu You and Xin Qiji-heroic; 12。 Cat, Liu Guo, Liu Kezhuang-heroic and tragic; 13。
Jiang Kui, Shi Dazu and Wu Wenying-three cases of elegance and beauty; 14。 Yan Yu, Dai Fugu, Huang Shengcang-pale and handsome, loyal to the rivers and lakes; 15。
Fang Yue, Liu Chenweng and Wen Tianxiang-patriotism and sadness; 16。 , Wang,,, Zhang Yan-sparse metrical words.
4. What are "long and short sentences"? Long and short sentences are one of the formal features of words.
The most significant difference in form between Tang Ci and modern poetry is that it broke the basic sentence pattern of five or seven words in old poetry and adopted long and short sentences, so it was later used as an alias for Ci. The collection of Ci poems in Song Dynasty takes long and short sentences as the topics, including "Huaihai Jushi Long and Short Sentences" by Qin Guan and "Tan 'an Long and Short Sentences" by Zhao.
The uniform verse of modern poetry with five or seven characters can't fully adapt to the uneven score, but the filling of long and short sentences in the tone of words is entirely out of harmony. The length of a sentence must conform to the beat of the score, which has certain standards.
Therefore, the difference between Ci and modern poetry lies mainly in its relationship with music as lyrics, not in the similarities and differences of sentence patterns. Therefore, calling words long and short sentences cannot show their main characteristics.
In the past, some people traced the origin of words back to the Book of Songs, and thought that many poems in the Book of Songs used long and short sentences, which is why they mistakenly regarded long and short sentences as all the characteristics of words.
5. The characteristics of sentence patterns such as whole sentence, scattered sentence and compound sentence, and how to distinguish compound sentence, are an art of antithesis, which requires the duality of words and the harmony of phonology. It is two sentences with similar structure, related content, adjacent writing and equal number of words. Compound sentence can also be divided into neat sentences and untidy sentences, and untidy compound sentence may not fully meet the requirements in terms of structure and number of words. Parallel prose is a kind of poetry, which is relative to prose sentences and parallel prose. It can also be said that all sentences except compound sentence are prose sentences.
A group of sentences with the same or similar structure are called whole sentences, including parallel sentences, antithetical sentences and other similar sentences. The whole sentence has a neat and symmetrical structure and harmonious syllables, which can be used to render the atmosphere and strengthen the language potential.
As opposed to the whole sentence, it is a loose sentence. Loose sentences are a group of sentences with staggered structure and interactive use of long and short sentences. It is free and lively, although scattered but not chaotic. First of all, in writing, the whole and the dispersed phase are generally combined to make the language flexible and beautiful.