Reminds me of Liu Yong's Yulin Chills.
Original: I am sad, Changting is late, and the shower begins to rest. Farewell outside Kyoto, but not in the mood to drink, reluctant to leave, the people on board have been urging to start. Holding hands and looking at each other, tears swirled in my eyes until there were no words at last, and a thousand words stuck in my throat and I couldn't say it. Thinking of returning to the south this time, this journey is another road. Thousands of miles away, it is misty, and the night sky is a vast night fog.
Since ancient times, the most sad thing for sentimental people is to leave, not to mention the bleak autumn, how can they stand the sadness. Who knows where I am when I am awake tonight? Fear is just the edge, facing the sad morning wind and the setting sun of the waning moon. This is a long time, people who love each other are not together, and I even expect to be satisfied with the good weather and scenery in name only. Even if it is full of emotions, who can enjoy it together? (Good Scene 1: Beautiful Scenes)
Yulinling is Liu Yong's famous masterpiece. This poem was written when the poet was frustrated in his official career and had to leave the capital (Bianjing, Kaifeng, Henan). It is a very representative article, which shows the feeling of wandering in rivers and lakes. This word is written in parting feelings, reaching the artistic realm of scene blending. The main content of the ci is to set off the bleak and desolate autumn scenery and express the inseparable relationship with the lover. Frustration in official career and parting with lovers are intertwined, which makes the poet feel more bleak and uncertain about the future.
The whole word is divided into two parts.
Uptown is mainly about a pair of lovers' inseparable feelings when they are about to leave.
Start with "cold and sad". For the pavilion, it was late and the shower began to rest. It is pointed out that the season is bleak and the autumn is cold, and the location is the pavilion outside Bianjing City. The specific time is the cold evening after the rain. But the poet does not describe the natural scenery purely objectively, but through the description of the scenery, the rendering of the atmosphere, the feelings come out of the scene, and the meaning is deep. In autumn, the scenery is bleak; And the value of the day is late, and the twilight is gloomy; After the rainstorm, it was followed by chilling and sadness: what the poet saw and heard was bleak everywhere. In addition, the syntactic structure of the sentence "Late in Changting" is one, two and one, which is extremely frustrating and swallowing, and more accurately conveys this bleak situation.
The last two sentences "drinking at the door" are to write farewell. Outside Beijing, he ate and drank, secretly frustrated in his career and broke up with his lover. "No clue" means that you can't think of a clue, that is, "if you keep cutting, you will still be confused." Wrote some thoughts that I can't bear to leave. "Homesickness, Lanzhou urges." When we were inseparable, the boatman laughed and "reminded". Reveals the cruelty of reality and the poet's inner pain.
"Holding hands and looking at tears, I was speechless." It is necessary to have other scenes. A pair of lovers, holding hands tightly, looked at each other with tears, and no one could say a word. These two sentences vividly describe each other's feelings of sadness, attachment and helplessness. A pair of lovers' hearts are broken, and they are on the paper. This is a line drawing technique, as the saying goes, "the language is not strange, the meaning is not dense."
"I miss it. It's a thousand miles away. It's heavy and vast." Write down the expectation of missing after parting. The gloomy mood of the hero in the poem casts a shadow over the sky and the water. A word "read" tells readers that writing the following scenery is fictitious. "Go" means to go further and further. The word "I don't want to go and have to go" is extremely well used and contains infinite sadness of leaving people. As long as the Lanzhou ship sets sail, it will go further and further, the dusk will be deep, the smoke will be Wan Li, and finally it will float to the vast south. The sadness is beyond words. Don't hate it. Judging from the structure of words, these two sentences have changed from real writing to virtual writing, which has the function of connecting the preceding with the following.
The next part focuses on the sad scene of imaginary parting.
The next film, first of all, makes a general discussion, from the individual to the general, and draws a philosophy of life: "Love hurts and leaves since ancient times." It means that parting is not from the beginning, but from ancient times. The word "since ancient times" has been promoted from a special phenomenon to a universal and extensive phenomenon, expanding the meaning of this word. But then again, the phrase "neglecting the autumn festival is even worse" emphasizes that he suffered more and more than ordinary people and the ancients. Jiang Yan said in Beppu: "Those who are ecstatic just leave!" The author melts this feeling of the ancients into his own words, and adds layers of code to create new ideas.
"Where to wake up tonight? Yang Liuan Xiaofeng has a broken moon. " This is the state of mind after waking up, and it is also his feeling of wandering in the rivers and lakes. The beauty of these two sentences lies in writing feelings with scenery, which truly achieves the homonym of "scenery language is love story", "Liu" and "Liu", and writes feelings that are hard to give up; Xiao Feng chilly, write chilling after parting; The waning moon is broken, and then it is difficult to write the meaning of a circle. These scenery words fully and truly express people's feelings of sadness and loneliness and create a unique artistic conception. No wonder it was praised and became a famous sentence.
From then on, the long-term vision: "This past year should be a good time to exist in name only. Even if there are thousands of customs in Qian Qian, who should I talk to? " These four sentences further speculate on the miserable situation after parting. How can I stand the long and lonely days after that? Even if there is a good time, it is equal to no, because no one you love returns it with yourself; To say the least, even if you can feel the beauty, who can you tell it to? In a word, everything is boring. These words depict the poet's thoughts and sadness to the extreme, and also convey the feelings of mutual concern. The ending sentence is in the form of a question, which makes the feelings stronger.
Yu Linling's whole ci is conceived around "sadness and parting". Before writing farewell, it is important to outline the environment; Writing parting moments focuses on describing modality; Goodbye after writing, imagine and portray the psychology. No matter how to outline the environment, describe the modality and imagine the future, the poet pays attention to the care before and after, coexists with reality and reality, so as to go deep into each other, describe incisively and vividly, blend scenes, read like a flowing stream, and see no trace in the ups and downs. The emotional appeal of this word is too sad and low because of the portrait, but it vividly depicts the poet's depressed mood and the pain of lovelorn. Throughout the ages, people who have the pain of parting will have a strong * * * sound when they read this song "Lin Yuling".
I hope I can help you. Thank you. I hope it will be adopted.