How to use China's poems skillfully in composition

The first is to use poetry. The so-called adaptation is to intercept a certain part of poetry and directly turn it into our composition language or interpret the artistic conception of poetry in our own language. For example, the following paragraphs: optimism is a line of egrets, heading straight for the blue sky; Optimism is 10 thousand white sails beside the shipwreck; Optimism is the lush grass floating in the wind on Nautilus Island. Optimism is something that turns into spring mud to protect flowers. -Topic "Optimism" fragment In the numb air where everyone is intoxicated, you choose to be awake; In the evil world where everyone is turbid, you choose innocence. Fade the gaudy clothes, and you choose the clothes with flounces; Out of Beijing, you chose the waves of the Miluo River. -The fragment of "Facing the Choice" comes from the sincere choice of the heart, so that the lush grass on Nautilus Island can be outlined, the breeze and bright moon on the 24 th Bridge can be touched, and the sunshine and purple smoke between the incense burner peaks can be rendered. -"A Good Time" fragment Yes, without glitz and carving, we are like a hibiscus from clear water, emitting charming fragrance. -"Simple" fragment A cloud is floating in the sky, faint and free, you feel good, this is the language; The rising sun shines brightly, and you feel full of vitality. This is Chinese. The bloody sunset reflects half the sky, which makes people feel infinite nostalgia. Don't forget that this is also a language. Language is the majestic Kunlun Mountain, the dew that has refused to drip on the grass for a long time, and the peony that is the old capital of the ancient city. Language is the silent Leng Yue, the quiet lotus pond, the fishing boat in the monstrous white waves outside Qinhuangdao, the egret in the blue sky, the 10,000-point white sail beside the sunken ship, and the bright future of the mountain after heavy water recovery. -The words "Cold fragrance flies away" do not directly quote the poems of Du Fu, Liu Yuxi and Gong Zizhen. Instead, the image in the poem is regarded as an integral part of his composition language or the author boldly describes the artistic conception of the poem in his own language. This kind of passage reminds us of the artistic conception of poetry, and brings us into the poetic artistic conception of deja vu, but we can also feel the composer's voice. It can also increase the literary grace of the article. Of course, the most important thing in writing such a passage is the author's ability to analyze, comprehend and summarize poetry. If you don't understand the artistic conception of poetry and apply it casually, you will "draw a tiger and not be a dog." The first is to imitate poetry. This method is that the author writes another poem in the same form in his own language according to the form of the poem, so as to express his feelings. For example, there is a passage in an essay entitled "Home": I dreamed of coming home suddenly at night, watery and busy fishing. There is no sound everywhere, only the fragrance is cool. It is expected that when I feel homesick every year, on a moonlit night, in Weixi. This composition is a good imitation of Su Shi's poem "Jiangchengzi": I dreamed at night and suddenly went home, dressed up at the Xiao Xuan window. Care for each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears are expected to break every year at the heartbroken place, and the moonlight night is short. Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi" expressed his thoughts on his dead wife, recalled the good old days and looked at the bleak dwarf pine mountain. Only he is "inseparable", how can he not make people think a lot and make people angry! And the yearning for "home" is not the case? Compared with the "four silences" around us, the busy figures and lively labor scenes of hometown folks only have infinite thoughts! It can be said that imitation poetry can not only guide readers into the artistic conception of the original poem with the help of poetry, but also show the author's ability to "apply what he has learned" in writing and make the article brilliant. Not only classical poetry is suitable for imitation, but modern poetry can also be borrowed from "attacking jade". For example, the fragment of the composition "Responsibility" is copied from the poet Haizi's "Warm bloom Spring Facing the Sea", which ends the article beautifully: The poet Haizi said in "Warm bloom Spring Facing the Sea": From tomorrow on, be a happy person | Feed horses and chop firewood to travel around the world | From tomorrow on, care about food and vegetables | I have warm bloom Spring facing the sea. Facing the responsibility, I want to say: from today, be a responsible person, faithfully perform your duties, stick to your post, and care for the environment and others from today. I have a sincere heart, face the responsibility, and the seasons are like spring. Some people say that if your article can't shine like the sun, let it shine like the moon; If you can't have the brilliance of the moon, let it shine like a star; If you can't shine like a star, at least raise a few fireflies to illuminate the article. I think poetry is a firefly. If you make good use of this song "Firefly", I believe it will definitely add gorgeous colors to your composition, illuminate your profound cultural thinking and illuminate the "tired" eyes of reviewers. [Recommended reason] Wonderful language and profound cultural thinking are the main reasons for the success of most articles. Clever use of poetry in composition can increase literary talent, improve composition scores and even hold high traditional excellent culture. The composition of the college entrance examination is wonderful. The ancients often said that "there are poems in the belly". Classical poetry contains profound cultural background and emotional resources. The clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression, highlight the background of the article, and make the article exude a strong bookish and cultural atmosphere. This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition. Then, how to use ancient poetry to add luster to your college entrance examination composition? First, the wonderful quotations of famous ancient poems and sentences are the most common way in college entrance examination composition. Quotation can be divided into partial quotation and full quotation. 1. Local quotation refers to quoting famous sentences of classical poetry in local positions of an article, such as the title, inscription, opening paragraph and ending of the article. These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers. Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences at the title of the article can make the topic look elegant, full of literary interest, dazzle people and promote reading. For example, in 2004, the Fujian examinee's A Storm in Ren Pingsheng quoted Su Shi's Ding Fengbo as the title, which not only closely followed the selected historical figures, but also showed the theme of the article and wrote Su Shi's open-minded detachment. It can be described as "killing two birds with one stone." Embedding poems at the beginning of the article can make the language concise and incisive, let commentators immediately "peek" at the author's cultural accumulation and humanistic accomplishment, and leave a better first impression. For example, in 2004, Shaanxi examinee "Looking for a Happy and Beautiful Life" began: "Walking on the path of falling leaves in autumn. I can't help singing:' There are endless leaves rustling and endless sadness rolling in'. Lament the sadness and misfortune of fallen leaves. In fact, the life of falling leaves may be like this, just asking for spring and colorful autumn colors. Change your way of thinking. Gong Zizhen once said,' Falling in love is not heartless. Turn into spring mud to protect flowers! We should rejoice and enjoy the colorful autumn scenery. " The beginning is from the scene. Du Fu's "fallen leaves are like waterfalls, but I think the long river always rolls forward". Naturally leads to the association of fallen leaves, and then quotes Gong Zizhen's famous sentence, which appropriately explains the connotation of the philosophical topic "Happiness and our way of thinking". This treatment makes the article appear profound and poetic from the beginning, thus avoiding the boring "straight to the point" reasoning. Quoting classical poetry at the end of the article has the effect of making the finishing point, enlightening people, subliming the theme, and receiving endless expression effects, which makes readers hide their thoughts and have endless aftertaste. For example, in 2004, Fujian examinee "Looking at the sea and relying on the sky" ended: "Have you seen how the water of the Yellow River moved out of the sky and into the ocean, and never returned? Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night? Time flies like water, time flies like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the inscription on the tombstone full of words. Perhaps, only history can best interpret Zeng Guofan's words that he wrote down his life's mood when he added bricks to his body in Tianjing City: leaning on the sky shines countless flowers on the sea, and flowing mountains know it. "The three quotations are appropriate and natural, which makes the article colorful, well-founded, profound and dialectical. 2. Full-text citation refers to both the whole paragraph and all paragraphs of the full text. Due to the profound cultural accumulation of classical poetry, a large number of allusions from many places will greatly enhance the cultural taste and aesthetic taste of the article and enrich the inside story of the article. The whole passage is quoted from the excellent composition "The Meaning of Loneliness" in the 2000 college entrance examination: "What is loneliness? Once upon a time There is Li Bai "until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and make the three of us". Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling that the moon is in the sky, the wind is like water, and everything is silent! Once upon a time, Li Houzhu felt speechless and went to the West Wing alone. The moon is like a hook, and the solitary phoenix tree locks the deep courtyard in the clear autumn. Perhaps, loneliness is the courtyard of the palace. Let us worry about our country and our family. Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented: "Before me, where did all those lost times go?" ? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, tears fell down. Perhaps, loneliness is the kind of empty state of mind in which the grass remains the same, the horizon remains the same, and things are different! So ... I asked the moon. Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace told me. Loneliness is the "blue sea and clear sky night heart" of "the mica screen is deep and the long river is gradually falling." What is loneliness? I can't answer that. Quoting five famous sentences in a paragraph as the carrier of emotion and righteousness in the article endows loneliness with profound cultural connotation, which not only adds bright colors to the article, but also enhances the persuasiveness and appeal of the argument, making the article rich in connotation, full of elegant poetry and rich humanistic atmosphere. And the whole article quotes. In 2003, Sichuan College Entrance Examination excellent composition "Only Being in this Mountain" is a model. Based on Su Shi's famous sentences, this paper interprets the topic of "Cognition of Emotion and Things" in the composition very aptly and implicitly. Then quote Cui Hu's poem "Last year today, at this gate, peach blossoms set each other off. People don't know where to go. Peach blossoms still smile at the spring breeze. " Naturally, it leads to the understanding of the relationship between "emotion and cognition" and establishes the main idea of the article: then follow the first paragraph. Li Qingzhao's Dream. Last night, the rain suddenly blew, Du Fu's The Hut was Blown by Autumn Wind, Su Shi's Niannujiao? 6? 1 Red Cliff Nostalgia and Du Mu's "Red Cliff" further elaborated the theme from several angles, vivid and rational: the ending, the full text ended with Su Shi's "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain". Look at the full text, just quoting and embedding classical poems. It makes philosophical thinking and emotional expression profound and profound, and makes the article have a high cultural taste. Second, cleverly set up the structure of ancient poetry. The ancients were very particular about the rules when they wrote poetry and writing. Every poem has its complete writing structure and writing context. Coupled with the simplicity and richness of ancient poetry itself, using ancient poetry to lay the writing structure of the article can not only make the article coherent and clear, but also give people an elegant and beautiful feeling and impress readers in the shortest time. This. In 2004, the excellent composition "Pipa Star's Parents Have Feelings" in Hunan College Entrance Examination gave a good demonstration. This composition directly applies the structure of white poetry, directly extracts poems describing music from Pipa, and weaves the structure of the whole text: "... she turned the tuning pin and tested several strings, and we can feel her feelings. Even before she played," Guan Yingying's words were slippery at the bottom "and" big strings hummed like rain, and small strings whispered like secrets ". Hum, whisper-and then intertwined, like a large and small pearl poured on a plate of jade, "the ice spring is cold and astringent. As if it could not pass; And notes, fade away. Don't be sad, don't hate life. There are more silent complaints than vocal complaints. Before she put down the pick, she ended with a stroke. Four strings made a sound, just like tearing silk, but who cried the most? . Eyes moist (the original poem is' this Jiujiang official. My blue sleeves are wet. These verses are the key verses in Pipa Xing, which connect the content of the poem and weave the lyrical context. They are cited as language symbols of article writing transformation, which not only skillfully string together some life details of parents' concern and education for "I" since childhood, but also make the writing structure of the article open and close. Read a different charm from it. Thirdly, imitating the language of ancient poetry is the first level of the article. The language of college entrance examination composition should not only be as appropriate and accurate as possible according to the needs of the article, but also reflect the color of personality as much as possible. If you have a solid foundation in classical Chinese, you might as well imitate the language of classical poetry and express your modernity with the brushwork of classical Chinese. This is undoubtedly a wonderful move for the college entrance examination composition to "shine". Over the years, there have been successful examples in college entrance examination compositions, such as Death of a Red Rabbit written by Nanjing examinee in 200 1, A Book of Advising Qu Yuan written by Jiangsu examinee in 2002 and A Book of Advising Qu Yuan written by Sichuan examinee in 2003. On the basis of drawing lessons from the language of classical poetry, these excellent compositions of college entrance examination show the author's personal writing talent, profound ancient prose accomplishment and good language control ability. Of course, classical Chinese is the product of the old times, and this language expression itself may not be worth advocating and encouraging. The content of this section is only for reference of candidates. We should know that the success of these excellent compositions depends on "novel stories", "lofty ideas", "exquisite language" and "rich content", which are the key to their success, not just simple classical Chinese. Fourth, rewrite the content of ancient poetry. Good classical poetry is enlightening. It's short and meaningful. It can arouse readers' endless association and imagination through vivid images and nervous expressions. By rewriting ancient poems, I can convey my feelings about life. It can also make your college entrance examination composition attractive and add a little poetry. Of course. Rewriting is not a purely mechanical translation of ancient poetry. It is the re-creation, re-perfection and personalized appreciation of ancient poetry. In 2002, Jiangsu examinee's "Dongpo's Choice" was written successfully in this way. This college entrance examination takes Su Shi's "Thousand Cliffs Fu" and "Nian Nu Jiao" as its cultural purpose. 6? 1 The artistic conception of nostalgia in Chibi focuses Su Shi's life experience on a sad and broad-minded night in Chibi, and writes Su Shi's "spiritual choice", which not only absorbs the charm of the original work, but also gives it a new artistic conception. Rewriting can be to use artistic conception to reproduce the scene of ancient poetry, or to find "gaps" from classical masterpieces and creatively change the content. For example, in 2004, the newly published Biography of Peacock Flying Southeast by Jiangsu examinees made use of classical literature resources and boldly transformed Peacock Flying Southeast into a "new story" according to the title of "Calm Mountain, Smart Water". Actually. The above four methods are not completely separated, and there are more than four ways to use ancient poetry to "give color". In the preparation stage. If you can combine the preparation of ancient poetry with the preparation of composition, pay attention to accumulation and internalize it into your own accumulation, maybe you can find more and better ways to write a "brilliant" composition for college entrance examination. Clever use of poetry to write a good composition The ancients wrote a poem "weathering rain, the mountains and rivers are green", which shows the fresh scene of spring breeze blowing, spring rain like silk, green mountains and green waters, which is fascinating and can be described as a witty sentence. The most beautiful is the word "Hua", which shows the wonder of nature. Without "Hua", there will only be a dull face. In fact, the composition is also the same. A little more "culture" will bring forth new ideas and boundless scenery, which is the use of poetry. China is a country of ancient poetry and prose, and the ancients left us rich spiritual wealth. Famous articles and famous sentences are well known. If used properly, you can express your thoughts more vividly and concisely, add elegance to the article, show your own style, gain the common sense of marking Chinese teachers more easily, and stimulate their emotional singing. First, the topic of poetry is the "eyebrows" of the article, and the eyebrows can best convey feelings. A good topic can attract people's attention and make people admire it. In 2003, there was a perfect composition "Don't be afraid of floating clouds to cover your eyes", which was taken from Wang Anshi's "Reaching the Peak" in the Song Dynasty: flying to the Chihiro Tower on the mountain, hearing the cock crow and the sun rising. As written in a China poem, we are not afraid of dark clouds covering our sight, because we are already on the top of the mountain. The last two sentences are profound, and the examinee took this as the topic, which vividly explained the relationship between emotion and reason, and of course won the favor of the marking teacher. In 2005, Jiangsu examinee's perfect composition trilogy of life was inscribed as Linjiang Bamboo, Rain or shine, and everywhere in the green hills, with novel, elegant and profound ideas. Second, turn poetry into wonderful sentences. This can be regarded as a rhetorical device of quotation. Quoting ancient poems can say what I can't say, convey what I can't say, or convey it more skillfully, and get twice the result with half the effort. For example, in 2002, the college entrance examination composition "The Choice of the Millennium": he chose to "shoot the railing all over", but he dedicated his life to the country in the desolation of "the mountains are high and the mountains are high". Here, Xin Qiji's "life choice" is summarized by quoting Xin Ci, and the patriotic poet's feelings of worrying about the country and the people and desolate life are written. At the bottom, it says Qu Yuan, "He chose' I will be a general without fear, but I will be unconscious for life'", which highlights Qu Yuan's high quality of being straightforward and fearless. These places are not directly described, but flexibly used poems and songs, showing profound literary details and appearing literary. [Transferred from the Iron Blood Community/] 3. Most of the authors who create wonders with poems are good at creating artistic conception. By touching readers' heartstrings with artistic images that blend scenes, I can write my soul in other people's territory and add charm to the article by quoting or using these words. The flowers in the eyes of the Tang people are charming and strong. "At sunrise, the flowers in the river are red, and in spring, the river is as green as blue." The beautiful scenery there is colorful. The flowers in the eyes of the Song people made the Iraqis haggard. "I asked the flowers in tears and flew over the swing." The candles there are all red makeup, red, thin, green and beautiful. Flowers in the eyes of the Qing people, drifting water, "Flowers fade all over the sky, and the red pin is broken?" The flowers there are tender, lovely and beautiful. The above passage is selected from the composition "Flowers are better this year than last year" written by a college entrance examination champion in Liaoning Province. This paper extracts Daiyu's poems from Bai Juyi's Memories of Jiangnan, Ouyang Xiu's Love Flowers and A Dream of Red Mansions, and closely follows the theme, presenting three different pictures, some of which are prosperous and some are bleak. The past and present bloom set each other off, and the historical scenes set each other off with the present scenes, which made a good foundation for the theme. Moreover, my student's exercise "Lonely Shazhou Cold" outlined the environment for Su Shi's appearance: a crescent moon hung on a tall buttonwood, and the night was quiet. At the beginning of autumn frost, the yard is deserted, except for occasional geese passing by, and the sound is broken in the sky. Here, the meaning of the word "Jing Chu is alone when the moon is lacking" is like a freehand painting, which reveals endless desolation and desolation, and sets off Su, who has been demoted to Huangzhou. Although she is broad-minded, she is inevitably lonely. Therefore, when writing, try to put poetry into the text, so as to make the literary talent brilliant, elegant and charming. Confucius said to Kong Li: If you don't learn poetry, you have nothing to say. Although he only quoted the Book of Songs, this sentence gave us a lot of inspiration and inspired us to learn to use poetry. [Transferred from the Iron Blood Community/] There are many ways to use poetry, which can be directly quoted, combined into their own sentences, translated into modern Chinese, and combined with several poems to form a new realm of poetry. The latter three can all be called chemical utilization. It is more difficult to synthesize. Here's a good example: Su Yue sent a lonely boat, only the shadow went with the flow, the family was ruined, and the wine was left everywhere. How can wine be better than night wind disease, phoenix rain and a little sorrow? Going upstairs late alone, I hate to lock my eyebrows, yellow flowers are sparse, and geese are broken. A falling flower is flooding Tingzhou. When will it stop? I wrote this word to Li Qingzhao, who has experienced a lot of wandering. (Excerpted from the college entrance examination composition "Poet? 6? 1 bright moon? 6? 1 Huanghua) Then how do you learn to use it? "The canal is so clear, because there is flowing water at the source. "Reading and understanding poetry is the foundation, otherwise it will not be applied. This requires us to expand our reading after class and get in touch with Tang poetry and Song poetry. In the usual reading, it is also of great benefit to classify the poems we have learned into the following categories, such as philosophical poems, lyric poems about scenery and lyric poems. They are concrete and unforgettable, and will naturally come to us with flashes of light. The charm of ancient poetry is actually the poet's painstaking creation and the source of literary development. Clever use of poetry is a great coup to add color to the article, but it is inevitable to fall into a "set of board" reaction, so the most ingenious way is to innovate on the basis of accumulation and write your own wonderful article.