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Writing: Rewriting Mulan Poems

Author: date of accession: 06- 10-03

Writing: Rewriting Mulan Poems

■ Echo, Jiangsu Binhai Road

Mulan Poetry tells the story of Mulan disguised as a man and joined the army as her father, and created the heroine image of Mulan. For thousands of years, the story of Mulan has been widely circulated among the people, adapted into operas and cartoons by artists, and put on the stage and screen.

Mulan's poems are adapted into stories, which can be used as reference. The topic is self-made and the number of words is unlimited. Pay attention to the following points when writing:

1. The story and characters are basically consistent with the original.

2. Some plots, such as Mulan's military life, can be developed according to the original imagination and written in more detail.

3. The language should be as lively and vivid as possible.

◆ Look at the map

Hua Mulan, an ancient heroine disguised as a man, became popular all over the world with her cartoon Mulan. Mulan Poetry is the representative work of Yuefu folk songs in the Southern and Northern Dynasties, and it is the hymn of the legendary heroine, which shows us a witty, brave, hardworking and kind female image. Let's walk into Mulan again and listen to her heart: "Everything in my life is ideal, but the world in my heart is different. I hesitate, too, and I will lose my way. I am not as strong as you think. "

◆ Theme article

Jiamu Storm (continued)

After Mulan came home from the army, the fact that Mulan was a girl immediately spread in the army, and it became an anecdote in the people's homes after dinner. It can be said that it really set off a storm in the city. So it soon reached the ears of Khan and his ministers. According to the military law, women can't enter the military camp, and those who violate the order are "capital crimes".

Khan called the ministers to discuss how to deal with Mulan. Everyone thinks it's not easy to do. Hua Mulan has violated military orders and king laws, but Hua Mulan has made outstanding achievements and made great contributions to the country. However, only one answer can be chosen between the king's law and meritorious service, and ministers hold their own words. Some people think that military law is like a mountain, which is an unchangeable fact. If we don't pursue Mulan, how can we explain to the Lebanese people? How can you convince people with the royal method in the future? How will this country be governed? More people think that Hua Mulan is guilty, but she has made great achievements in many wars. Although Mulan is a daughter, in every war, her heroism is unmatched by ordinary men. For more than ten years, despite the cruel war and fierce fighting, Mulan never complained and never backed down. Mulan is also good at talking with ordinary fellow soldiers, and at many critical moments, she has also played a role in stabilizing the morale of the army-in short, Mulan's contribution to the country is enormous, which is also an indelible fact.

Ministers have their own reasons, and Khan has been indecisive.

The discussion between Khan and the ministers soon reached Mulan and Mulan's villagers. When Mulan learned about this, she was as cool as a cucumber without fear. The villagers all came to Mulan's house when they learned about it. The villagers said to Mulan, "Mulan, you are our hero and we support you. If Khan wants to kill you, he is a bad king! " Mulan was moved to tears and excitedly said to the villagers, "Thank you, folks! But after all, it still violated the military law, and the king was ruthless. If I die, it's fate. Khan executed me to protect the king's law, and I died with dignity. " By this time, Mulan's family was in tears.

In the palace, ministers were still discussing when a sergeant came in and reported that many people knelt in front of the city gate and begged Rao Mulan Khan not to die. Khan and his ministers came to the wall, only to find it was dark, and almost all the people in the city were here. Seeing Khan coming, a young man said loudly, "Mulan has been fighting alone for the peace of our people for more than ten years." It is really unreasonable to kill her now! " At this time, people shouted like this. An old man over half a hundred years old said, "Mulan is the pride of our nation. You can't kill her! " "Even a three-year-old child said," Sister Mulan is our hero. Whoever kills her is a bad person! " " ……

People at the gate are in high spirits. Khan and the ministers smiled knowingly. Khan said to the man at the gate, "You are right. I can't kill a man who has contributed to the country for nothing. I will obey public opinion. " Then, Khan also named Mulan as a "heroine" on the spot. Khan also said: "Mulan is the first heroine in China to go to war. I will revoke the military order not to allow my daughter to go to war. In the future, all women with high martial arts can go to the battlefield. " At this time, the people at the gate cheered. People praised Khan's wise decision.

This story has been passed down to this day, and Hua Mulan's patriotic spirit has become an example for people to learn, and her deeds will be immortal.

Comments: Through the study of Mulan Poetry, the author reasonably imagined the development of Mulan's situation after returning from the army, and dramatically showed a storm caused by Mulan women's violation of military law when they joined the army. The conception of the article has children's psychology and unique writing personality. The ending of the story is just right and logical, which makes the theme of the article clearly presented.

Mulan, heroine (rewritten)

● 4 1 class Xiaowenqing of Chuanshan Experimental Middle School in Hengyang City

At night, it is very quiet. The bright moonlight shines on the earth, and everything is so beautiful and quiet. The stars are still shining in the sky as usual, and the evening breeze is blowing slowly. However, Mulan always sat by the loom and sighed, and the sound of weaving was sparse.

Mulan leaned back on the loom in a daze, preoccupied. Last night, a military order broke the peace at home: there were twelve military books, each urging my father to go out again. Mulan's tears burst out at once. The father is old, Mulan has no brothers, and the younger brother is young and underage. It is her duty to protect and defend the country. She made up her mind to join the army for her father.

The next morning, Mulan went to the street to buy horses, saddles, reins and whips. She was busy for a long time, prepared her combat suit, then said goodbye to her parents, disguised as a man and left without looking back. In the morning, she said goodbye to her parents. In the evening, Mulan stayed by the Yellow River. She didn't hear her parents calling her daughter, only the sound of the Yellow River flowing.

The next morning, she bid farewell to the Yellow River, and stayed at Heishantou in the evening.

After more than ten days' long journey, Mulan finally came to the foot of Yanshan Mountain, and she heard the shouts of Hu people's military forces. Hua Mulan swears: For her parents and the country, she must go all out to defeat the enemy!

"Kill-"the gunfire on the battlefield, the screams of war horses, the shouts of soldiers, the thunderous sound of horses' hooves and the clang of swords and swords resounded through the whole earth, with yellow sand all over the sky and rivers of blood. On the battlefield, the bodies of the enemy were scattered all over the floor, and many soldiers were injured. Hua Mulan, who has been promoted to general, led the soldiers forward. The sound of fighting came from the cold wind, and the bright moon shone on the real clothes. Many soldiers fought many battles and died for their motherland. After more than ten years of fighting, the warriors finally returned home in triumph.

After fighting for more than ten years, Mulan came back with a victorious army, and the emperor held a grand celebration banquet for her. At the banquet, the emperor proposed a toast to Mulan who made great achievements in the war: "You have made great achievements. Can I make you history? " "no!" Hua Mulan smiled and shook her head: "It is right to pay for the motherland. I don't need to be a minister. Thank you for your kindness. But can you give me a swift horse and take me home? " The emperor looked at Mulan enviously. "Well, since you say so, I'll give you a swift horse. If you want to go home, I won't force you. " With that, he asked his men to take out a beloved swift horse from the palace and give it to Mulan. Mulan thanked the emperor with clenched fists and rode away.

"Da-da-da", Mulan ran home, and the soil around her rose. At this time, Mulan, who was anxious to go home, was so excited that she wanted to fly home at once.

My parents were ecstatic when they learned that Mulan had come home. They hobbled outside the house, holding each other's hands, staring at the city gate, staring at …

"Dad, Mom-"Mulan's parents looked in, and Mulan rode on a horse and waved to them at a gallop. Mulan's parents suddenly trembled with excitement. First they were taken aback, and then they staggered past. Mulan pulled the horse and couldn't wait to get off. She opened her arms and hugged her parents tightly. Mother touched Mulan's face and said, "Laner, thinner, but more and more beautiful?" "Come on, it's getting late. It's good for Laner to go home! " Father patted Mulan's mother on the shoulder while leading the horse. Hua Mulan's family and her comrades who accompanied her home walked home, talking and laughing. Mulan thinks everything is so kind and beautiful.

"Sister is back, sister is back!" The younger brother cheered, and then the younger brother took the knife and went back to the kitchen to kill pigs and sheep, busy cooking food for his sister.

Hua Mulan, who came home, pushed open the door of the East Pavilion, sat on the bed of the West Pavilion, took off her shirt and put on her old clothes. Looking at the old things in the room, she felt kind and warm. She sat down, put a yellow flower on her forehead in front of the mirror, and combed the black hair on her temples.

"Zhi-"The door opened and Mulan came out with a smile: "Thank you for waiting." Said and sat down.

"Ah?" Soldiers, look at me, I look at you, dumbfounded: "I didn't know you were a daughter after more than ten years of battlefield life!" " "Ha ha ha ..." A burst of laughter broke out in Mulan's home ... (from Hunan Daily)

Comments: This paper adapted Mulan's poems, added some of my own imagination, and highlighted the image of Mulan. The slight deficiency is that the article is too rigid in the original text.

Join the army instead of father, be a heroine among women (rewritten)

It's dark on a summer night. In this silent night, I suddenly heard someone sigh slightly. Who is sighing? After a while, the sigh rang again, mixed with deep melancholy. Looking closely, it turned out that Mulan was weaving against the door. Strange! Why can't you hear the sound of weaving, only Mulan's sigh? I guess Mulan must have something on her mind. Ask your daughter what are you thinking? What do you miss? Come on, tell mom. Mulan said quietly, "Mom, my son didn't think of anything and didn't miss anything. Last night, I saw a proclamation posted by the army at the city gate, saying that the emperor would recruit soldiers and attack the Huns. There are many volumes on the draft list, Mulan. I have read it carefully, and almost every volume has my father's name. Hey ... My dad doesn't have his eldest son Mulan, and I don't have a big brother. After all, my father is too old to go to war. My son is willing to buy a pommel horse for this and go out for my father! Mother was silent for a long time, raised her head and looked at Mulan for a long time, then said with a heavy voice, "Mulan! You joined the army instead of your father, so be careful everywhere! \' ......

The next day, just before dawn, Mulan said goodbye to her parents and set off. Mulan ran around preparing for her departure, and the only thing she didn't give up was her parents! "Dad, mom! Take care! It is unfilial for a son not to take care of his parents around! " Facing the rolling Yellow River and mountains, Mulan couldn't help crying.

Mulan went to the battlefield not far from Wan Li and flew over the pass and mountains. The harsh climate in the frontier changed Mulan's delicate skin. Many inconveniences and difficulties in life did not make Mulan fall. She remembered her father's instructions: "Son! Serve the motherland well! The folks all over the country are looking forward to your smooth return with the soldiers! " "For my elderly parents, for my hometown, for my country, I must win this battle! ! "

Murder after murder, battle after battle, Mulan used her wisdom and courage to survive this battle. Ten years of fighting is hard, but it's also worth it-Mulan and the soldiers came back victorious! ! !

Mulan's triumph delighted the emperor and excited the people of the whole country-the motherland can finally restore peace! The emperor immediately sent Mulan to see Shu Lang. Mulan just laughed and didn't answer. The emperor smiled and asked Mulan what reward she wanted. Mulan said, "As far as rewards and official positions are concerned, I am not as homesick as the minister. May the emperor allow me to send my minister back to my hometown and reunite with my family! " "admire this!"

Mulan rode a swift horse, majestic and eager to return to her hometown. Outside the city gate, parents helped each other to meet their beloved daughter whom they had not seen for ten years. My sister is dressed up and is also in the welcome team. My brother picked up a sharp kitchen knife to kill pigs and sheep, ready to meet his sister. Mulan returned to the boudoir, and everything in the room was so familiar and strange. Put on your own clothes and restore your daughter. Dress up properly and look in the mirror: I am no longer the little girl who was ashamed of flowers ten years ago, but a weather-beaten woman! "Ten years! ! I am ten years older! It' s really' time waits for no one'! " Mulan has a sense of loss. Go out and see comrades in the same trade. They are all drinking and having a good time. Mulan was surprised to see her dressed as a daughter. Living with Mulan for many years, I didn't realize that Mulan was a girl? Everyone was surprised and couldn't help feeling: Mulan is really a heroine among women, which is admirable! !

The male rabbit's feet are constantly scratching, while the female rabbit's eyes are often narrowed, which is easy to identify. But when the male rabbit and the female rabbit run together, who can tell which is the male rabbit and which is the female rabbit?

Singing through the ages:

"Join the army for my father,

Brave and invincible,

A heroine among women,

But so is Mulan! ! "

Mulan Poetry (New Edition)

After hee hee hee, the pretty girl is on the plane;

I can't smell the dial tone, only women sigh.

Ask the woman what she thinks and what she remembers;

Women have nothing to think about, and women have nothing to remember.

I was really shocked when I went online last night;

Twelve letters from my sister were all invited to meet under the net.

The beautiful girl is married and has taken someone else's surname;

The purpose of surfing the Internet is to entertain ourselves and make new friends.

The eastern version is idle, and the western version writes autobiography;

South to talk about heart songs, north to talk.

Face up to the internet and connect at dusk;

I can't hear my husband calling his wife, but I keep hearing bugs.

But quit the chat room and go to the boring version;

I can't smell insects, but I see invitations flying all over the place.

Seeing her husband offline, her husband burst into tears;

If you only care about Internet addiction, you are in debt.

Asked where the woman wanted to go, the pretty girl frankly worshipped her parents;

Take a thousand miles to go to an appointment to tell your heart.

Hearing the news of my daughter, I was anxious to hide everywhere.

Sister-in-law heard that she was coming, and quickly locked the doors and windows;

Hearing my sister coming, I climbed up the east wall in a panic to open my old door and move your arhat bed.

Open my old cupboard and search your password box.

When counting money at the window, go to the airport immediately;

Seeing netizens thousands of miles away, their eyes sparkle;

I've been online for a month, and I don't know what a beautiful girl looks like.

Dinosaurs are shy, and pretty girls are proud.

Chatting online, can Ann tell me what kind of person I am?

The Return of Mulan (Rewrite)

When Mulan read her father's written military order that he must be a soldier, she couldn't help but stop knitting and sigh, because her father was too old and weak to stand such a long battle. So Mulan decided to join the army instead of her father. She crossed the Tiger Mountain and bypassed the Yellow River. After many battles, she resigned and went home.

In my hometown, when the villagers learned that Mulan was going back to her hometown, they all worshipped Mulan and went to the county to welcome her. Early in the morning, Mulan's parents helped each other to the county seat. Sister and brother stay at home. What are they doing? Sister started dressing up early in the morning and decorated Mulan's room as before. She wanted Mulan to feel at home as soon as she entered the door.

Dude, he's sharpening the blade to make it shine. He will kill pigs and sheep with this sharp knife, and then make delicious dishes to meet his favorite sister.

In the county town, when people were waiting eagerly, the sky suddenly became foggy. There are several long Ma Si in the fog, getting closer and closer. The fog became less and less, and in a blink of an eye, two bordeaux horses appeared! Ah, it's Mulan and her companions!

Everyone was so happy that they hugged Mulan and shed countless laughter all the way!

When she got home, Mulan immediately embraced her family. Although she said nothing, how much she said! Mulan entered her room and immediately felt the warmth of home. Mulan happily sat in front of the dresser, took off the uniform that had accompanied her for many years and put on the beautiful clothes of the old days. She sat shyly in front of the mirror and combed her long black hair slowly and carefully ... Then she went out of the room and her companion asked Mulan's father, "Grandpa, I didn't expect you to have a beautiful daughter! She must be Mulan's sister? " Mulan's father laughed and said, "She is Mulan!" "Huh?" The companion looked at Mulan again and said, "It's really Mulan!"

"Ha ha ..." There were waves of happy laughter from Mulan's home.

Textbook drama Mulan Poetry

Hushan Road Junior High School, Xiaoshan District, Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province/Class KLOC-0/03 Wang Huifang

The first act decided to change the logo.

Time: one day

Venue: Mulan House

Characters: Mulan, Mulan Niang

Qi Mu

A humble house, a loom, a stool, a table and four stools. There are teapots and teacups on the table. There is also a big bed beside the table, and there is a dresser on the right side of the bed. The loom faces the door. ]

Mulan: (facing the door sadly while knitting) Hey!

Mulan Niang: Daughter, why are you sighing?

Mulan: Mom, I have nothing. I just saw the military orders last night, and I couldn't help but feel flustered. The emperor is recruiting troops on a large scale, and his father's name is on the bulletin board in the village. Dad doesn't have an eldest son, only I have a daughter. Dad is in poor health. How can he be a soldier?

Mulan Niang: Yes!

Mulan: I think I am the only one who disguised as a man instead of my father. (excitedly) Well, that's settled. Tomorrow, I'm going to buy horses and ride necessities.

Curtain falls

Act II Buying Horses and Harnesses

Time: the next day

Venue: East, West, North and South Expo

Character: Mulan, all the harness dealers.

Qi Mu

Backstage lines: I heard that horses in the East City are the best, so Mulan came to the East City. The market is bustling with people coming and going, and all kinds of goods are really dazzling. Mulan didn't buy ordinary daily necessities, but came to the horse market specially. Mulan came to the stable.

Mulan: How much is this horse?

Horse dealer: Thirty taels of silver.

Mulan: It's a little too expensive. Can you make it cheaper?

Horse dealer: Twenty-five taels then.

Mulan: OK, I'll take this horse.

Backstage lines: I heard that Xi Shi's saddle pad is the best, so Mulan came to Xi Shi. The market is as lively as the East Market. Mulan came to the saddle pad stall.

Saddler: (loudly) What a good saddle pad! Cheap value, come and buy it!

Mulan: (selecting for a while) How much is this? I want to buy this.

Saddle vendor: Girl, I want to buy twelve taels of silver for this saddle pad. Seeing that you are a woman, it's only eight taels.

Mulan: OK, I'll take it.

Backstage lines: I heard that Heather's riding skills and reins are the best, and Mulan came to Heather again. The bustling scene of heather is the same as that of Dongshi and Xishi. Mulan came to the harness stall.

Harness dealer: Seeing this girl leading such a good horse, she must buy a good bit. Come on, I'll choose the best one for you.

Mulan: These two are perfect. I'll take it.

Backstage lines: I heard that whips in the north city are the most popular, so Mulan naturally came to the whip stall in the north city.

Whip dealer: (Far away) Oh! Here comes a beautiful girl who definitely wants to buy my whip!

Mulan: (Approaching the whip stall with joy) Your whip is really good. I'll take this one.

[Mulan traveled all over the world, bought all kinds of necessities for riding a horse, and rode home on a swift horse. ]

Curtain falls

The third act saw me off at the entrance to the village.

Time: the third day

Location: intersection outside the village

Character: Mulan, Mulan's family.

Qi Mu

[Mulan's parents and brothers and sisters see her off at the crossroads outside the village]

Mulan: Mom and Dad, I have to go. Don't worry. I will return home in triumph. Don't worry about me.

Mulan's father: Mulan, be careful on the road. Don't be disfigured, especially in the military camp. Don't forget!

Mulan: Don't worry. Dad, I'll be careful. It is getting late. I should get started. Parents, take care!

Mulan Niang: (examining her eyes with a handkerchief in tears) Have a good trip, Mulan!

Curtain falls

Act iv going to war

Time: After Mulan went to war.

Location: On the way to the war.

Character: Mulan

Qi Mu

Backstage lines: Mulan left her family and set off with the army. After a busy day on the road, in the evening.

Mulan: (to herself) How fast we are marching! Say goodbye to parents in the morning and come to the Yellow River in the evening. I can't hear my parents calling me, but I can only hear the sound of flowers in the Yellow River.

Backstage lines: Another day has passed, and Mulan's army has reached the border.

Mulan: (to herself) Our March is really fast! Leave the Yellow River in the morning and come to this black mountain in the evening. I can't hear my parents calling me, I can only hear the enemy's war horses chirping.

Curtain falls

The fifth act is to reward returning to China.

Time: After ten years of war.

Venue: Palace Hall.

Characters: Mulan, Khan, eunuch, etc.

Qi Mu

Backstage lines: In the following days, Mulan experienced one bitter battle after another. Their troops covered the distance near Wan Li and flew over the gates and mountains. At night, the northern cold sends the sound of bullets, and the cold moon shines on the soldiers. Many soldiers died heroically. With her wisdom and courage, Mulan finally returned home in triumph after nearly a hundred battles.

Backstage lines: Mulan has made great contributions, and Khan will personally meet and reward Mulan.

[Palace hall, magnificent style. Khan walked into the court and sat in a chair. ]

Hello! Mulan!

Eunuch: Send Mulan to see you!

Mulan went to the main hall, arched her hands and bowed to the emperor. ]

Mulan: See the emperor. Long live the emperor! Hooray! Hooray!

Khan: Love will level off, and I will repay you well today.

[Khan motioned the servant to give Mulan the reward. ]

Mulan: Thank you, your Majesty!

Khan: Mulan, you have worked hard. I want you to be Shang Shulang!

Mulan: No, Your Majesty, Mulan doesn't want to be Shang Shulang. Please let me ride a swift horse and go back to my hometown.

Khan: OK! I allow you to go home because you have contributed to your country.

Curtain falls

Act VI Returning Daughter's Cosmetics

Time: When Mulan came home.

Location: Mulan's hometown

Characters: Mulan, Mulan's family and peers.

Qi Mu

[Mulan's house is decorated with lanterns, people are coming and going, and firecrackers are ringing. Mulan's parents, brothers and sisters have been waiting there for a long time. Mulan got on the boat with several colleagues. ]

Mulan: Mom and Dad. The baby is back.

Dad Mulan: It's good to be back, dear boy. You are really dad's good boy!

Mulan Niang: Go inside quickly! Tired on the road.

Brother Mulan: (running home quickly) Sister is back, and I went to kill pigs!

[Mulan and her family and colleagues come to Mulan's house]

[Mulan opens the door of the East Pavilion, sits on the bed of the West Pavilion, takes off her wartime gown, puts on her old dress, cuts her hair in front of the window, trims her hair in front of the mirror post, and then goes to the living room. ]

Colleague: (Panic) Ah! So Mulan is Lang's daughter? We've been together for twelve years, how come we don't know anything about it?

Mulan: (Laughter) The male rabbit's feet are complicated, while the female rabbit's eyes are blurred. Two rabbits, male and female, are running side by side. How do you know which is male and which is female?

The curtain falls (the end of a play)

Comments: It is more difficult for poetry to rewrite the textbook drama, but the young author dares to challenge the difficulties and has the courage. After reasonable imagination, this textbook drama has added some content appropriately, and connected the relevant plots with "backstage lines", which is just right in content arrangement and structural treatment.

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Appreciation of couplets

☆ Mulan joined the army, and she didn't want a man; Beauty is not necessarily a curse when Zhaojun goes to the fortress.

Note: Since ancient times, it has been said that beauty is a curse, da ji, Shi, Zhang Lihua and Feng Xiaolian are all disasters of national subjugation, and Yuhuan is the cause of troubled times. However, Zhao Jun, as a weak woman, married the Huns far away and lived in peace for half her life, which was a disaster.

☆ Mulan joined the army, and she didn't want a man; Sun Shan's reputation is unmatched.

☆ Mulan joined the army, and she didn't want a man; Gaozu returned to China, and the hero Mo Wen was born.

Note: Gao Zu returned to his hometown, taking Yuan Zaju "Gao Zu returned to his hometown".

(2) Ancient female heroes

☆ The three most famous female generals in ancient China: Qin Liangyu, Liang Hongyu and Mulan.

☆ The earliest women in ancient China were good women. A famous female general in Shang Dynasty, one of the wives (concubines) of Wu Ding in Shang Dynasty, and the first talented female commander in chief in China.

☆ Premier Zhou Enlai once praised Mrs. Xian as "the first heroine in China". Mrs. Xian was born in Gaoliang County (now Maoming City). She was the leader of slang people in Lingnan area during the Southern and Northern Dynasties. After three generations of Liang, Chen and Sui, she devoted all her life to safeguarding the reunification of the motherland, assisting the imperial court in cutting off local separatist forces and upholding national unity, which greatly promoted the social, economic and cultural development of Lingnan.

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