(2) Poetry is written in a straightforward Chen Qi way. On the surface, it seems simple and straightforward, lacking symbolic meaning, but in fact it is meaningful. There is such an atmosphere and charm in the poem, which is the most fascinating to readers.
(3) In Autumn, the poet described farm life in the most concise language. Every poem is a picture, and three verses make up three composite pictures. The combination of pictures creates a special atmosphere, which is both smooth and integrated.
This is a colorful rural area in Qiu Jingtu. The poem is not long, only three verses, but it captures all kinds of scenery, valleys, farmhouses, fishing boats and shepherdess. This is a poetic autumn, living in a farmhouse, playing on a fishing boat and dreaming in the eyes of a shepherdess.
The morning dew falls,
The sound of logging jingled in the valley.
Put down the sickle full of fragrant rice,
Use a basket to put rich fruits and vegetables between bamboo fences.
Live in a farmhouse in autumn.
The first painting is "Farmer Harvest figure".
The image of "full skin" is distinct. The word "gone with the wind" is apt and vivid. Images such as logging sound, early morning sound and dew sound constitute a clean and moist sound painting. "Xiang Tao" makes people feel happy. "Full" is a scene of bumper harvest, which is anthropomorphic. "Fat melons and fruits" also see a bumper harvest. The last sentence is always tied, making the finishing point. The word "habitat" is meaningful and anthropomorphic.
This is not about a farmer, but about general farm activities. Two scenes were written, one was logging in the valley, and the other was carrying melons and fruits between fences. Valley logging is placed at the beginning of the article, and Tintin's voice floats far away, resorting to hearing; Shocked by the cool dew, he turned to vision and touch. It is really a landscape of the world, which reminds people of distant impressions. There is no such thing as "cutting trees and singing birds" in the Book of Songs. From the valley to the tree " Gone with the Wind and The Valley often appear in He Qifang's early poems, but they are both fictional, using figurative meaning and extended meaning, but here they are realistic and have a unique charm. The poem does not specify the mood and expression of the farmer carrying melons and fruits, but the reader can think that he is cheerful and smiling. "Habitat" was originally used to describe creatures, but now it is used at the end of this poem to summarize the autumn situation in farmers' homes, visualize nothingness (autumn) and create a relaxed and quiet atmosphere.
Drop a round net on the cold fog on the river,
Put away the shadow of Chinese tallow leaves like a herring.
The reed canopy is covered with frost,
Shake the parked paddle gently.
The autumn sports meeting is held on fishing boats.
The second painting is "Fisherman Qiu Jingtu".
"Cold fog" sets off a hazy poetry, which coincides with the season. The metaphor of "the shadow of Chinese tallow leaves is like a herring" seems clumsy, but it is actually intriguing. Returning to the berth not only describes the scenery, but also hints at the time, which echoes the above Morning. The word "game" is both false and true.
The picture also includes a series of activities: casting nets, fishing and boating. The pictures of these ordinary activities all contain a faint, distant, clear and quiet charm in the poet's pen. The word "gently" often appears in He's poems, as if "handy", which shows the fisherman's carefree mood. Perhaps in He Qifang's early mind, autumn is really so quiet and far away.
The grass is getting wider and wider in the cricket's cry.
The stream dried up and the stones became clearer.
Where is the flute on the cow's back?
The flute hole full of summer fragrance and heat?
Qiu Meng in the eyes of shepherdess.
The third picture is "the girl's love picture".
Crickets are chirping on the Yuan Ye, and the stream is crystal clear. The bleating of sheep came in bursts, and the beauty of autumn was pleasing to the eye, but the shepherdess lost her former liveliness. The flute is very long in summer. Why is the boy who plays the flute missing? Who can guess a girl's heart?
Unique scenery in autumn. Full of poetry and painting. Appear in the form of questions, and the language is swaying. The combination of "full flow" and "fragrant heat" and "flute hole" is full of poetry under the background of "summer night". The shepherdess lives in the farmhouse and plays on the fishing boat. Have you ever seen autumn? Does the flute on the cow's back express or arouse the girl's feelings? Her eyes must be full of autumn scenes, and her heart must tremble with joy and dreams.
In a word, Autumn creates an atmosphere that comes from the world and is far away from the secular world by depicting different scenes and pictures. This kind of atmosphere is quiet, Qingyuan, sweet and soft. It describes the leisure scene after a busy summer, so there is a quiet atmosphere; It describes a paradise-like life, and it has a Qingyuan atmosphere, without any hardships and bitterness of farmers. It is about the hazy and pure love of boys and girls, so there is a sweet atmosphere; Like He Qifang's other poems, it uses soft words to write beautiful images, avoiding noisy scenery and clumsy words, so it has a soft atmosphere. Every painting in the poem, as well as every image in the painting, is harmonious and unified; So this atmosphere is characterized by quiet, Qingyuan, sweet, gentle and so on. You can't be a master at this point. However, when He Qifang wrote this poem, he was still a 20-year-old college student!
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① The order in which the author writes about the scenery: from far to near.
(2) The third section begins with weeds, crickets and streams, which is equivalent to what the ancients called "feeling xing", that is, say something else first, feeling xing from xing, feeling scenery from Jing. Weeds are overgrown and the stream is clear. This is not a human activity, and there must be a continuation afterwards, that is, girls are in love. The noisy summer of nature has passed, but autumn has become quiet. When people are silent, they mostly look at themselves and listen to their inner voices. After listening to "The Flute on the Cow's Back" for a summer, a corner of her heart began to sprout. Writing about love, especially first love, is what she was good at in her early years. This time, he wrote more subtly and brilliantly. There are only five lines in this paragraph, which is about the transition from place to insider, and the transition from writing first love from scratch. The poet chose the specific angle of "shepherdess's eyes". Although the eyes are not clearly written, readers can see the purity and clearness, which are the special eyes of the first love girl.
(3) "Put away the shadow of Chinese tallow leaves like herring" means that herring is like Chinese tallow leaves; On the other hand, the Chinese tallow tree on the river bank has swaying leaves, which are reflected on the river, just like the shadow of Chinese tallow leaves on the internet. Reflect the carefree mood of fishermen with inverted sentences.