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The most serious injury is the cold weather at night, and the skinny people are miserable.
Inviting wine to ruin the intestines, three cups of drunkenness, seeking fragrance and dreaming, five more cold.
There were tears in Feng's eyes, so I didn't have a chance to spend them.
The lonely heart and the moon in the small building are as hard as hooks and circles.
It was first included in the eleventh chapter of Ma Ji Biography: Laughter on Earth published by 1995, with untitled poem title, written by modern Ma Dong. Degang Guo regards it as a fixed poem in stand-up comedy.
Translation:
Sadness is strongest in the lonely and cold late autumn, and the haggard people can't bear to sigh at this time. After only three glasses of wine, I got drunk and suddenly woke up in my dream to find a beautiful woman. It's already cold and sad at night.
When I woke up, I seemed to feel that your eyes were full of tears and your cock was crooked. Now the flowers (representing the last hope, spring has passed) have withered. I know there is no reason. On this cold night, I woke up alone in this lonely building. At this moment, my heart is like the moon on a cold night, just too beautiful and round.
Untitled appreciation;
Judging from the artistic conception of the poem, it is indeed an imitation of Li Shangyin's untitled poem. The opening of the first couplet is amazing. The saying that it is cool in the evening is not originated by modern people. It began with Li Yu, the ci emperor, and was used by many nouns in the Song Dynasty. "Pain is killing me" comes from Zhang Huiyan's "Water Tune Song Tou" in Qing Dynasty, and it is more appropriate to fill in the word "four people".
The second couplet of the seven laws is the most visible, and "three cups of drunkenness" is also intentional compared with "five colder". It's really elegant to invite wine to find fragrance and express the artistic conception. Everyone must know the story of a decapitated phoenix in the necklace, which is about Lu You and Tang Wan. "Camellia" in the last sentence is also a common image in ancient poetry. Camellia is called a beautiful flower, and scholars in Ming and Qing dynasties love to chant it.
Although this poem is not as good as the works of sages, it also has some irregularities, but it is still difficult for ordinary modern poets to write such a standard. Judging from the wording, although it is slightly piled up, the wording is still accurate; In terms of artistic conception, hazy beauty, he wrote his inner sadness incisively and vividly. It can be seen that when Ma Dong wrote this poem, he really felt it, which is why it can touch people's hearts.