Text/A Liang Moon
Poetry content:
In Zi Xi's poem, the author applies two common household items, wheelbarrow and dustpan, to the poem, which gives people a refreshing feeling. In the deep winter, a grain of wheat passes through a lump, sleepwalking in the past and expressing its persistence and resistance to real life.
Emotional transformation, follow one's inclinations
Writing poetry is a difficult and relaxing experience. What is difficult is that it is not easy to write poems that satisfy both yourself and readers. It is easy that the poem that the author has buried for a long time finally flashed out like a wild horse at a certain moment. The first part of the author's poem is calm, and in the middle, his thoughts are flying and exciting: "Thinking of so many years, I am like a wheel/running over the sky, and the sky is full of stars." After the enthusiasm, everything is calm, and all the sighs are just sleepwalking.
Rich in image and unique in vision.
The scab is a quiet stone; "I" is wheat on a stone; Old people are like mothers; And dustpans, rivers, etc. , easy to use. Predecessors often wrote poems with wheat, but the author was good. Wheat is mentioned twice in the poem: the first time is the wheat left by time; The second time is the lifelong belief of most farmers (wheat). When reading this poem for the first time, you may feel a sense of disorder, which is exactly what the author wants to express: a feast of sleepwalking in the wilderness.
Be creative, support and express your wishes.
The text contains the Tao, and the poem expresses the will. A successful poem always expresses the author's attitude skillfully. Symbols, metaphors, parallelism and other writing techniques in the whole poem are freely used, which is worthy of recognition. We are struggling in time, perhaps trapped by tedious work and entertainment, unable to look up at the deep starry sky, unable to watch the roaring river, unable to find relatives around us. Winter is already deep, where is the "wheat" you sow? Life needs to think, not go with the flow.
In fact, I am a lazy poetry critic. I am afraid that I can't read the clues in the author's poems, and I am afraid that my lack of knowledge will mislead others. But I love poetry and met a poem that excited me. This is the best thing.
Time ran over the original site of Yuan Ye, who was empty.
Also known as "rolling shaft", it is an agricultural production tool in China and an animal-drawn farm tool used for rolling. Generally similar to a cylinder, the middle is slightly larger and the two ends are slightly smaller, which is suitable for rotating around a center. Used for rolling grain, leveling the ground, etc.