Appreciation A: Taking "sea" and "wall" as metaphors, I wrote vast expanse, an indestructible forest. Through the glossary, we can understand the author's love and appreciation of the forest.
Example B: "How many years have passed, the wind has turned the surface rocks on the top of the mountain into soil, which is barren and fine; It took pains to bring seeds from the dense forest in the distance and let the rain wake them up. The green seedlings on the slope are loved by the sun, and the sun caresses them generously. "
Appreciation B: This sentence endows the wind, rain, seedlings and sunshine with human spirituality by personification, which makes us feel that the acquisition of life is so poetic, in sharp contrast with the desolation of the canyon, which naturally leads to the following.
2, grasp the content and thoughts and feelings
Every sentence itself can extract certain content, and some of them are full of the author's thoughts and feelings. Content, thoughts and feelings are an indispensable part in appreciating the answers to sentences.
Example A: "The wind roared, air billow was scorching, sand and stones were flying, and magma was overflowing. Suddenly, the sky was dark, and the mountains and the earth were falling, as if the world were ending ..."
Appreciation: This is a description of the initial geological catastrophe. Although there are not many words, it is very vivid, which makes people feel immersive and explains the source of the canyon.
Example B: "You seem to be bottomless and unfathomable. No one has seen your whole picture. Although you have precious trees and priceless wealth of nature, you are silent and indifferent-how unfair, you are a rare underground forest in the world. Where did you fly from? What misfortune have you suffered to sink into this dark abyss and live for so long? "
Appreciation: The author directly expresses his feelings face to face in the second person, and strongly expresses his concern, sympathy, injustice and infinite respect for the canyon.
3, the role of structure
A paragraph often contains several layers of meaning. If the meaning of each layer should be rigorous and complete, then some words or sentences will play a role in this respect. Common ones are: connecting the preceding with the following, echoing before and after, summarizing the above, etc.
4. Analyze the characteristics of sentence patterns
Common sentence features are: combination of long and short sentences, neat antithesis, double negation, parallelism, rhetorical questions, inverted sentences and so on.
Example: Sunshine doesn't like canyons. Don't canyons know that? Is sunshine fair? Don't you understand the canyon?
Appreciation: The author expressed his protest against unfair sunshine with two rhetorical questions and one rhetorical question, and the word "Murphy" made people feel the author's disgust.
5. From the perspective of writing skills
Key points: including bedding, setting off, contrast, symbolism, borrowing scenery to express emotion, holding things to express meaning, restraining before wanting to promote, imagination and association, etc.
Example: "Although the trees there are far less tall than the grass on the mountain, they can proudly declare: I am a forest!" " "
Appreciation: the grass is higher than the tree, not because of itself, but because of the terrain; Trees rely on their own advantages. Here, the author writes the author's appreciation of the underground forest in a comparative way.
The forest is majestic, covering the sky and the sun, and it is endless. The wind is like a green sea, and the night is as quiet as a solid wall.
Analysis: Taking "sea" and "wall" as metaphors, vast expanse and indestructible forest are written. Through the glossary, we can understand the author's love and appreciation of the forest.
How many years have passed, the wind has turned the surface rocks on the top of the mountain into soil, which is barren and fine; It took pains to bring seeds from the dense forest in the distance and let the rain wake them up. The green seedlings on the slope are loved by the sunshine, which caresses them generously.
Analysis: This sentence personifies the wind, rain, seedlings and sunshine with human spirituality, which makes us feel that the acquisition of life is so poetic, which is in sharp contrast with the desolation of the canyon, and naturally leads to the following.
The wind roared, the air churned and scorched, sand and stones flew, the magma was brilliant, the sky was dark and the earth was crumbling, as if it were the end of the world. ...
Analysis: This is a description of the original geological catastrophe site. Although there are not many words, the image is vivid, which makes people feel as if they are there, and also explains the source of the canyon.
"You seem to be bottomless, unfathomable, and no one has seen your whole picture. Although you have precious trees and priceless wealth of nature, you are silent and indifferent-how unfair, you are a rare underground forest in the world. Where did you fly from? What misfortune have you suffered to sink into this dark abyss and live for so long? "
Analysis: The author uses the second person to express his feelings directly face to face, and strongly expresses his concern, sympathy, injustice and infinite respect for the canyon.
2. 1 Appreciate the format of sentences 2. Appreciate the format of adding some words. Take the famous sentence in Wang Bo's Preface to Wang Teng-ting as an example: Loneliness and sunset in Qi Fei, autumn waters * * * the sky is one color, for example: broad vision. The sky is full of sunset clouds, and a wild goose is flying in the sky. Autumn water meets the vast sky and presents the same color. Formed a magnificent picture of heaven and earth. Without a broad mind and tolerance, you can never write such a sentence with a broad vision.
Dynamic and static collocation. Even if the sunset glow in the sky is beautiful, it makes people feel a little monotonous and a little less angry. Lonely people are "flying", clouds are "falling", and only the sky does not move. Although autumn water is quiet, water will not die if it doesn't stop in winter. When the breeze passes, ripples will continue to appear in the autumn water. As soon as the ripples pass, the scenery reflected on the mirror-smooth water surface will be swung open, revealing the underwater scenery: aquatic plants, even fish and shrimp, and so on. This is obviously a beautiful flowing picture.
Scene fusion. Although Wang Bo is young, he is very talented. However, he was frustrated. A deep sense of loneliness has always accompanied him. Qi Fei's "Lonely Bird" is not so much a wild goose as a portrayal of Wang Bo himself, which indirectly reflects Wang Bo's loneliness in the sentence. And from the "sunset", it is not difficult for us to realize the feeling of life that "to see the sun, for all his glory was buried in the coming night". ; "Autumn water * * * sky is one color", where the water meets the sky in the distance, the vast haze, Wang Bo's mood.
To appreciate sentences, we should grasp the key points of chess and input keywords and sentences.
The artistic conception is so beautiful!
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First of all, look at rhetorical methods. If you follow these steps,
Rhetoric method+expressive effect+characteristics of things+emotional expression
Expression effect:
Metaphor: a vivid image
Personification: cordial and vivid
Parallelism: Enhanced Language
Exaggeration: Attract readers and enrich the theme.
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Sentence:
The sun is like a fireball: metaphor
Vividly describe the heat of the sun.
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No feelings.
4. The format of reading excerpts is to copy some of the publications and documents.
Example: This article is very good. I specially extracted a few paragraphs. Here is an article for your reference. Extracting language accumulation is very important for learning Chinese.
Mr. Guo Moruo said: "The chest is full of money, and the pen is full of money." If students accumulate a large number of vocabulary, sentence patterns and paragraphs, they can speak freely when writing, regardless of throughput.
So, how to strengthen the accumulation of language? The author believes that it is an effective method to guide students to extract. Although the new textbook of 200 1 year has paid attention to consciously arranging excerpts in "thinking and practice" in each reading teaching, it is far from enough to practice only a few times in class.
It is also necessary to guide students to extract after class, so that students can develop the habit of extracting over time, accumulating thousands of miles of silicon, and streams become rivers. The author has done a lot of exploration and accumulated some experience in guiding students to extract, which is listed below for reference.
First, to guide the extraction, we must first fully mobilize students' interest. Teachers should not only guide students to extract without increasing the burden of schoolwork, but also distinguish it from extracurricular homework such as copying new words and answering after-school questions in writing, so as to give students free and broad space in content, form and time.
Let students do activities in their favorite way: you can read books, newspapers and magazines; You can read, copy, copy and recite; You can sit in the small study at home and enjoy copying slowly, or you can squeeze out a break at school to read the excerpts quickly. See what you want to see, write what you want to write, and enjoy it.
Only in this way can excerpting become the active demand of students and really promote students' active reading. Second, the guidance excerpts should be planned.
It is best to start extracting from the third and fourth grades. Due to the large amount of literacy in lower grades, according to the age characteristics of students, extracurricular learning mainly focuses on consolidating new words, and there is little time for reading and copying.
By the third and fourth grades, the amount of literacy is gradually decreasing, and students can have time to read, copy and recite without being buried in the pile of words. In addition, since the third and fourth grades, students have become more and more proficient in the use of dictionaries, which also brings convenience to extracurricular reading.
Excerpted content can not be completely "unconstrained", which is not conducive to students' organization and accumulation of language. It is best to organize by semester, stage and classification according to the teaching materials and teaching facts. For example, writing landscapes this month and writing about human beings next month is targeted and gets twice the result with half the effort.
Third, guide the extraction step by step. If abstraction continues from grade three to grade six, it is necessary to change the requirements for the quantity, content and form of abstraction in order to maintain students' "zone of proximal development" and promote them to learn more effectively.
For example, according to the situation of the students in this class, the author's requirements for grading are as follows: the number and content of grading are as follows: 30-50 words of beautiful sentences in grade three, looking up unfamiliar words in the dictionary, 50- 100 words of beautiful sentences in grade four, notes on beautiful paragraphs in grade five 100-200 words, notes on new words, and appreciation and copying of beautiful sentences in grade six. In this way, different stages have different specific requirements. Even if the abstraction is carried out step by step, it unconsciously cultivates students' good study habits, such as thinking while reading a dictionary. Fourth, guidance excerpts should be combined with classroom teaching.
As the content of Chinese extracurricular learning, it is not completely divorced from classroom learning. On the one hand, we should have our own plans and arrangements, on the other hand, we should always be an assistant in classroom teaching, which complements classroom teaching.
For example, when teaching the article "The Lion of Lugou Bridge", I considered that the historical significance of Lugou Bridge is a difficult point for students who don't care much about history. Therefore, when arranging the preview in advance, I arranged for students to extract the detailed process of the "July 7 Incident" and talk about their feelings.
It not only understands the narrative method, but also the background of the text, and also mobilizes the classroom mood, which has become a powerful supplement to classroom teaching. From this aspect, excerpts also bear the heavy responsibility of collecting and sorting out information for classroom teaching.
Five, guidance excerpt should be combined with recitation requirements. Psychologists' research tells us that the period from 6 years old to 13 years old is the golden age of memory development in one's life. Once a person misses the golden time of memory development before 13 years old, he can't form a lot of rich accumulation of knowledge, emotion and experience, which will leave irreparable regret for his life.
Therefore, let students recite while extracting, that is, let students write down as many good things as possible that should be remembered and make full use of the memory advantages of students of this age, which is in line with the law of students' development. Moreover, memorizing can make the accumulation of language thicker.
Of course, in order to truly implement the extract, inspection is essential. But if you ask for excerpts and send and receive corrections every day, the effect will not be very good.
Because as long as the excerpts are written in the exercise book, there won't be too many mistakes. Therefore, as long as there is a group leader to register at ordinary times, teachers can conduct unified inspections every week, minute and month, and check at ordinary times.
In addition, the inspection of recitation is also a big project. So I adopted a combination of spot check and mutual check. Five minutes before each class, randomly ask several people to recite, and other deskmates recite each other, which not only plays a role in communication, but also ensures the effect of inspection.
In short, students should be guided to extract persistently, so that they can gradually form good habits that affect their life, so that every student can study hard and accumulate diligently, and through constant internal and external absorption, improve their understanding and application ability of the language and characters of the motherland. 2. Some excerpts I found for you (excerpts from myself) 1. Paragraphs and sentences: ① Autumn is a season of maturity, harvest, enrichment and indifference.
It has experienced the prosperity of spring and summer, and is no longer proud of being praised and loved. It is isolated from all the praise and affection of Qiu Guang, but it is willing to be a leisurely, distant and elusive autumn.
Rain should be the messenger of spring. There is no good weather in spring in memory.
Rain will fall unconsciously. The idea of dripping all over the sky seems to have no weight.
The breeze is blowing obliquely, which casts a hazy veil over everything that wakes up quietly. Rain brings some fresh breath, some.
5. Pupils' good words and sentences and autumn scenery's appreciation.
The chirping cicada has disappeared from the forest, the green trees have changed into golden pajamas, and the whistling west wind has come in a hurry. This scene tells us that autumn has arrived.
Whenever this autumn comes in a hurry, purplish maple leaves fall everywhere along the river and roadside; In the sky, flocks of migratory birds and swallows are flying to the warm south.
In the golden rice fields, hardworking farmers are tirelessly harvesting golden ears of rice, hoping to have a good harvest this year.
The bright moonlight accompanied me into the night. Every Mid-Autumn Festival, I always think about the autumn scenery and eat sweet moon cakes.
Ah, this beautiful autumn scenery is really a good season for reading. I want to praise it and use it.
Autumn scenery
"Quite critical", fallen leaves become a scene in autumn.
The autumn wind blew away the "wet" in spring and the "stuffy" in summer, bringing a little coolness. People say the autumn wind is dry. I don't think so. I like the feeling of mixing noodles in the autumn wind, which can make people clear-headed; Can make the dust on your body fly far away; Can bring our souls into autumn. When the autumn wind flashes, Wanshu will welcome warm applause and graceful dancing. The scene is as grand as the lively scene of a grand party, and butterflies are flying all over the sky. The sound of leaves colliding seems to be good news for Mother Earth. Children who leave home will return to the embrace of Mother Earth. The excitement is beyond words, and there is no need to express it, because the autumn wind has quietly informed the earth.
Autumn leaves take away the "green" in spring and the "shell" in summer, bringing a moving scene of flying all over the sky. Every leaf is the end of one life and the beginning of another. Fallen leaves dance gracefully in the wind, sometimes falling, sometimes turning in circles, and sometimes walking with the wind. They wore yellow shirts and said goodbye to the tree with the most beautiful dance. Thanks to the kindness of Mother Dashu. Autumn leaves cover every corner of the world. As soon as they pass by, they seem to be playing beautiful piano music. One after another, they have the momentum of "pouring pearls of all sizes into a plate of jade", and "the reverberation lingers for three days".
The color of autumn brushes off the "colorful" in spring and the "fiery red" in summer, and dyes it with a layer of dark brown. Brown is the main color in autumn. With the arrival of autumn, everything in the world welcomes it. Brown makes people daydream. I don't like "colorful", "fiery red" and "white", but I love brown. It represents a kind of solemnity and calmness, and it is also a piece of "amber" in people's hearts, and transparency is wrapped in a kind of bitterness. At the same time, brown is also the painter's favorite when depicting autumn scenery. The colors in autumn are very simple. Not elegant, not artificial, conquered me with simplicity.
The sunshine in autumn covers the warmth in spring and the heat in summer, bringing a little coolness. The autumn sunshine wakes up late and disappears quickly. It's also called "going out late and returning early". But it does not hinder its quality and beauty. It shines not only on everything, but also on the depths of human hearts. I think the sunshine in autumn is to know the secret of my heart, and I don't have to tell anyone. Because the autumn sunshine has told all things in nature that they will share joys and sorrows with me.
Autumn wind, autumn leaves, autumn colors and autumn sunshine make up a wonderful Qiu Jingtu. There are many secrets buried in the picture. As long as we are good at finding them, we can uncover them. There are many philosophies of life in the picture, which we can understand as long as we actively seek them. The picture shows many colorful lives. As long as we have a correct attitude, we can have them.
Autumn scenery-Wonderful Life Planning.