After the rain, the river in the southwest is clear and blue, with a hint of Wei Yun lying motionless on the beach.
The feathers of the twittering birds standing on the wall are still wet, and there are several low thunder sounds from time to time in the distance outside the building.
Take advantage of the coolness after the thunderstorm to have a good sleep and sing some strange poems to repay the new sunshine after the rain.
No one can enjoy this wonderful scene tonight, so I will enjoy lying and watching the Milky Way until dawn.
Make an appreciative comment
These seven methods describe the natural scene after the hot summer and thunderstorm, and express the poet's comfortable and happy mood of feeling the new cool after the rain. ? [5]?
Both the first couplet and the neck couplet describe the scene of rain or shine, and the first couplet writes about the sky. "The sky lacks a clear southwest river, and the thin clouds do not move." In Southwest China, the sky in the southwest is blue, which means "sunny" and "clear river", and the clear blue in the south of the Yangtze River is a metaphor for the mysterious color in the southwest sky. "Thin clouds don't move", write that white clouds don't move. The word "small beach horizontal" inherits the saying of "clear river surface", which means that a cloud crosses the river like a small beach. The first four words of these two sentences are rough descriptions of the real scene, and the last three words are metaphorical descriptions of the real scene. The two metaphors take care of each other, so that the scenes of the two sentences are integrated into one, forming a complete picture with vivid images, bright colors and strong three-dimensional sense. ? [2]?
Zhuan Xu "The clothes on the wall are still wet, and the thunder outside the building is not flat." In the poem, the poet's line of sight naturally changes from looking up to looking up, and the description changes from form to sound. "Still wet", that is, writing Chu Qing after the rain, also shows the lively and lovely mode of magpies. The next sentence is based on "residual thunder" in a low voice, with the description of form and sound as the main part and the writing of sound as the main part. Lei, written in the words "angry", doesn't want to disappear immediately. In this couplet, magpies can talk but convince, thunder can cripple and anger, and personification is used to make the poem full of life. Crisp magpie language and low-level thunder set each other off in harmony, interweaving into a song of nature on rainy and sunny days.
Neck couplets "try to take a little coolness to sleep, and search for strange sentences to report new sunshine." Expressing the joy of Rain Eye with narration. The coolness after rain makes people sleepy, and the new sunshine after rain affects poetry, but poetry is better than sleepiness. The six words with modifiers such as "take", "seek", "cool", "sleep", "strange sentence" and "clear" make these two memorable poems tangible. The word "for" is naturally written for people. The word "Bao" describes the return of man to nature and the harmony between man and nature.
Tail couplet "Tonight is definitely better than no one * * *, lying and watching the Milky Way." The two sentences are still narrative, with scenes and scenes. The sentence "Enjoy the Milky Way" is translated into Du Mu's "Look at Petunia and Weaver Girl", but Xiao Du's poems are not lonely, but full of interest. The word "do your best" not only depicts the Ming Che of the Galaxy, but also gives life to the Galaxy, making it shine fully and rewarding the new eyes after the rain.
In the whole poem, the poet captured the moment when the natural scenery of Chu and Qing changed after the rain, and formed a multi-level and multi-angle magnificent landscape with clear sky, fluttering white clouds, noisy magpies and low thunder. Although there is no love word in the poem, there is a joyful drought between the lines of the scenery description, and the whole poem is beautiful and vigorous, full of curiosity.
original text
Qing Yu
What about Chen? Song dynasty
The sky is short, the southwest river is clear, and the thin clouds are still.
The clothes on the wall are still wet, and the thunder outside the building is not flat.
Try to sleep with a little coolness, and search for strange sentences to report new sunshine.
Nobody can win tonight. Lying and watching the Milky Way.
To annotate ...
Lack of days: after the rain, the clouds open, revealing the horizon.
Thin cloud: thin cloud. This refers to the high cirrus clouds after the rain in summer.
Small beach: like a thin cloud.
Language Magpie: Language Gull: A chirping bird magpie.
Clothing: Feathers similar to birds and magpies.
Remnant thunder: a low thunder that is about to disappear.
Supply: provide. Sleep soundly: Sleep soundly.
Repay: Repay, repay.
Unique sound: a wonderful situation.
Galaxy: The Milky Way in the sky. Do your best: enjoy yourself.
Source of the work: Collection of Jane Zhai
Literary Genre: Seven-character Rhyme
Review of past dynasties
He Shang, a poetry critic in the Qing Dynasty, commented: Chen Jianzhai's poems are very interesting, but I don't know what is fascinating, but I can't hide my handsome spirit. For example, the poem "Sunny Rain" wrote: "The rain on the wall is still wet, and the thunder outside the building is still flat."
Modern writers commented: In many of Chen's poems, we can often see novel, exquisite and natural features.
Professor Peking University's Chinese Department commented: After the demise of the Northern Song Dynasty, Chen's poetics Du Fu changed to a vigorous and gloomy style with a clear tone; The antithesis focuses on the internal relationship between the upper and lower sentences. Rain Clear is his early work, which has the obvious characteristics of careful observation and vivid description.
Creation background
In A.D. 1 123 (the fifth year of Xuanhe), Chen became a doctor in imperial academy and was highly valued by the emperor. Maybe he thinks he can display his talents, so his mood changes slightly. Facing the late summer and early autumn, the weather cleared up and the showers stopped, so he wrote this poem "Sunny Rain".
Brief introduction of the author
Chen (1090- 1 138), Han nationality, originally from Jingzhao, moved to Luoyang from his great-grandfather, and was born in Luoyang, Henan Province in the Song Dynasty. Yuan You was born in Song Zhezong in the fifth year (1090) and died in Shaoxing, Song Gaozong in the eighth year of Southern Song Dynasty (1 138). At the end of the Northern Song Dynasty and the beginning of the Southern Song Dynasty, he was an outstanding poet and also wrote lyrics. Although there are only more than ten existing ci poems, they are unique in style, especially close to Su Dongpo, with superb meaning and rhyme, brilliant brushwork and natural style, and the author of "Collection of Jane Zhai".