(1) Land has its own characteristics, and different environments have different characteristics. Therefore, it is necessary to observe the scenery carefully, grasp the characteristics, and write specifically, so that people feel immersive. Please look at the following clip and think about how the author grasps the characteristics of the landscape.
1. Show me "At noon in summer, white clouds are floating in the blue sky of Wan Li. Some of these white clouds are connected together, like silver waves rolling in the ocean, like mountains and mountains. Sometimes there are clouds of different sizes and shapes floating on a large silver-gray cloud, just like coral flowers blooming on an island reef. " The author of this clip describes the shape and size of white clouds.
Please read the following clips to see how these authors grasp the characteristics of the landscape.
(1) "The flaming clouds in this place vary greatly, from red to gold, from purple to yellow, from gray to lily. Grape ash, pear yellow, eggplant purple, these colors are all in the sky, and some can't be said or seen. " The author of this clip captures the colorful features of luminous clouds and describes them, thus embodying the beauty of luminous clouds.
(2) "In the distance, several oak trees did not move, and herds of antelopes and ostriches walked around. A winding river flows slowly southeast, and clusters of beautiful flowers are blooming on the shore. " The author of this clip captures the number of oak trees, antelopes, ostriches, rivers and flowers to describe.
At night, frogs croak and woodpeckers peck at tree trunks. Beetles buzz. Yanko lay by the river and listened quietly. "The author of this clip captured and described the sounds made by frogs, woodpeckers and beetles, reflecting the young musician Yanko's love for music.
3. Besides describing the shape, size, color, quantity and sound of the scene, what other aspects can be used to describe the characteristics of the scene? You can also grasp the charm and dynamic changes of the landscape to write.
For example, it is the season of lush foliage. This big banyan tree seems to show us its life. There are so many green leaves, one on top of the other, leaving no gaps. Green is shining before our eyes, as if there is a new life trembling on every leaf, this beautiful southern tree! "The author of this description captures the charm of the big banyan tree in its lush branches and leaves, which makes us feel that she is full of vitality.
② Fragments of the "burning cloud" described above. The author has grasped the characteristics of many and rapid color changes in a short time, reflecting the beauty and strangeness of glow clouds.
(3) "In the early morning, the river is extraordinarily calm, blue waves are rippling, silver light is flashing, seagulls spread their wings and fly on the river. At this time, I always like to stand on the river bank and look at Wusongkou in the north. The endless river is connected with the water and the sky. As soon as the breeze blows, I take a breath of fresh air and feel relaxed and happy. In the Woods beside the river bank, the clear calls of birds come and go. A group of old people were walking by the river, hitting Tai Ji Chuan ... When the sun shone all over the river, the river began to boil. You see, boats of all sizes only come and go. The motor sound of motorboats, the whistle of big ships and the impact of river waves are intertwined, playing a magnificent symphony. A whistle of "whoops". The 10,000-ton ship is from far to near. Wherever it goes, there are two rows of huge waves in the shape of eight, like two white dragons rolling on both sides. The waves beat against the rocky beach by the river, splashing clusters of white flowers ... In the evening, the sunset reflected the river red. At this time, my friends and I always like to catch crabs on the rocks by the river. You can catch twenty or thirty in one night. At night, the boiling river was calm again. At this time, the 10,000-ton ship docked on the dock was brightly lit, reflecting the stars in the sky and making the river beside the ship red. The gust of river wind dispelled the summer heat. " The author of this clip captured the changes of the river from morning till night and wrote the unique beauty of the river.
There is a tunnel between our classroom and playground, and there are two rows of buttonwood trees on both sides of the tunnel. Spring breeze gives it branches and leaves, a little yellow and a piece of green. In summer, a leaf is a green slap, holding a burning sun. A tree is a beautiful sunshade, and the breeze is blowing gently under it. The Indus River is beautiful in autumn. Every day after the Mid-Autumn Festival, there are several autumn rains. Several autumn winds dyed the leaf rust red. At this time, the software center of Blue King Horse Computer Company is high above, the autumn sunshine is faint, and the white trunk and red crown of the phoenix tree are particularly quiet, enchanting, elegant and solemn. Walking in this aisle, I am immersed in painting and in a comfortable atmosphere. It's a pity that the northwest wind blew away all the leaves overnight. Isn't it a symbol of this golden harvest season? In winter, the thick trunk and bare branches of the phoenix tree stand there tenaciously, fighting the cold and snow. Seeing it, people who shrink their necks and raise their hands will stand up and stare at its figure, and they will feel respected. The author of this clip captures the different characteristics of buttonwood throughout the year, which reflects the author's love and praise for buttonwood on campus.
Second, summarize several methods to grasp the characteristics of scenery and write well. Students, these clips tell us that to write a good landscape, we can describe it by grasping the shape, size, color, quantity, sound, charm and change of the landscape. Only in this way can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery and let readers feel immersive. Of course, we should not use the above description method when writing every scene. We should choose the description method according to the characteristics of the scene and develop rich associations when writing. In addition, we should pay attention to describing the scenery layer by layer in a certain order. Some write according to the distance of the scenery; Some write by orientation; Some are written according to the relationship between the whole and the parts, and so on. But you can't write down all the scenery like a list, you should grasp the characteristics and write with emphasis. Finally, I want to say: No matter what scenery you write, you should write your own true feelings.