2. Altair is rewritten as narrative. The mountains are far away, and the mountains and rivers are far away. You are herding cattle and I am herding sheep. Look at the stars herding sheep [original]
Distant Altair, Jiao Jiao Hehan girl.
Skillful hands, make a loom.
There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down.
What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one?
Between water and water, there are no words.
[translation]
Altair, so far apart, the white weaver girl on the other side of the galaxy is looking forward to you.
She waved her slender soft hands, and Sol Zaza kept passing through the loom.
She can't knit a piece of cloth all day long, and tears of lovesickness fall like rain.
The milky way's flowing water is clear and bright. At first glance, the Weaver Cowherd is separated by this little distance.
But it is that clear water that separates us, and we can't be together without talking.
3. Rewrite All the Altair into a fairy tale article, All the Altair, a China girl by the Jiao Jiao River. Skillful hands, make a loom. There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down. What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one? Between water and water, there are no words.
Comment and analysis
Morning glory and Weaver Girl are the names of two stars. Altair, or Hegu II, lies in the east of the Milky Way. Vega, also known as Tiansun, is located in the west of the Milky Way, opposite the morning glory. In China, the folk stories of Petunia Guantian and Weaver Girl originated very early. Xiaoya Dadong wrote a poem about Penny and the Weaver Girl, but it only wrote two stars. "Spring and Autumn Yuanmingbao" and "Huainan Zizhen" began to say that the weaver girl is a goddess. In Cao Pi's Ge Yanxing, Cao Zhi's Luo Shen Fu and Jiu Yong, Petunia and Zhinv became husband and wife. Cao Zhi's "Nine Odes" said: Petunia is the husband and Weaver is the woman. Next to the river drums everywhere, the star of Penny the Weaver will appear for a while on July 7. This is the clearest record at that time. This poem "Far Morning Altar" in Nineteen Ancient Poems describes the separation of the morning glory and the weaver girl. Its era was in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, slightly earlier than that of Cao Pi and Cao Zhi. Comparing this poem with the works of Cao Shi brothers, we can see that the story of Petunia and Weaver Girl was finalized from the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty to the Wei Dynasty.
This poem is about a couple holding a cow and a weaver girl in the sky, but the point of view is on the ground, which is to observe the parting pain of their husband and wife with the eyes of a third party. Switch between the two places and put pen to paper, saying that the cow is far away and the weaver girl is bright. Titiao and Jiao Jiao have different views on each other, so we can't be persistent. Morning glory is not bright, Weaver Girl is not far away. They are all so far away and so bright. However, it is easy to think of a wanderer far away from home with a petunia belonging to a distant relative, and it is also easy to think of the beauty of a woman with a weaver girl belonging to a distant relative. In this case, it seems that they can no longer be interchanged. If it is intertextuality, the interest will be reduced by half if it is replaced by a beautiful morning glory and a distant river girl. The subtlety of poetic language can be seen here. The purpose of calling Weaver Girl Hehan Girl is to make up three syllables and avoid using Weaver Girl in three words. The former sentence always uses Altair, and the latter sentence refers to Vega, which is neither rhyming nor monotonous. Hehan women are more energetic. Hehan woman means a woman on the edge of the galaxy, which is more easily associated with a real woman, but ignores that she is a star. I don't know if the author took such pains when writing poems. Anyway, different writing methods have different artistic effects. In a word, the arrangement of the ten words "Altair" and "Han woman of Jiao Jiao River" can be said to be the most ingenious arrangement and the most muddy effect.
The following four sentences are devoted to the Weaver Girl, saying that although she knits sweaters all day, she can't knit a horse because her heart is full of sadness. Delicate hands means delicate hands. In order to compete with the next sentence, the structure of the sentence has been changed. Those pull, draw, draw, close to reaching out. Zaza is the sound of a loom. Rafts are shuttles on looms. The poet used a word here. "The Book of Songs, Xiaoya's Four Cadres": Naisheng is a female, with a back tile (spinning)
4. Misreading the composition "Altair" and "Altair", Altair, Jiaozhihe Han female.
Skillful hands, make a loom. There is no chapter all day, and tears are pouring down.
What's the difference between a clear river and a shallow one? Between water and water, there are no words. I learned this poem recently, and I was deeply touched, so I began to write this article, which is similar to a misreading article.
Let me introduce first, this is nineteen ancient poems selected from Selected Works compiled by children in the Southern Dynasties. This poem is the tenth. Originally there was no topic, and later generations took the first sentence of the poem as the topic.
The author is unknown, and the age is about the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty. When I first read this poem, I thought it was not well written.
It can be said that there is neither Li Shangyin's vague meaning nor Liu Yong's graceful aestheticism. But after the teacher explained the complete poem, I began to fantasize again and my thoughts gradually left the classroom.
At the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, there were wars everywhere in the Central Plains. A rich lady met a teenager with unfulfilled ambition, just last year's Lantern Festival.
Little beauties fall in love, have no regrets and ignore family barriers. The woman and her lover made a wish by the river.
It is agreed that he will marry her after the war. Live a plain and happy life.
Women frown, but my father is against us, Mr. Lang. What do you think I should do? I will join the army, and when I get ahead, I will marry you with my daughter! You must wait for me.
A woman's eyes are full of tears of happiness. In fact, she is worried that you will never come back, and there will be no return. Tomorrow I will pack my bags and join the rebels.
Will you come? Will definitely come. I later thought that the woman's father should have imprisoned her at home and kept her from going out, so I didn't see her for the last time.
Think about it, which rich family would let their daughter marry a poor man whose life and death are uncertain? I think some people will wonder why I am sure that woman is rich. The evidence must be there. The meanings of "slim hands" and "slim" are very clear, and slender describes being small or slender and feminine. Think about it, if it weren't for the daughter of a rich family, would her hands be so good? Moreover, the complete explanation of this sentence is "the weaver girl raises her soft and white hands."
Look, soft and white hands, how well maintained they are! People nowadays may not have such good hands! Uh-huh ... that's beside the point. Besides, since she is a weaver girl, that person must be a cowherd. Since she is a cowherd, her family is definitely not that rich. Of course, she won't leave a cow ... it should be ordinary people.
This poem, I feel a little sad, "What's the difference?" This sentence is like complaining about a person, just like a woman complaining about her lover. You and I are just separated by water. Why can't you see me? Of course, it may be written by a man from a woman's point of view, and I have no objection. In fact, I don't think a good girl will be happy with someone who has no financial resources. Dear daughter can't do anything, and his soft white hands will become thick and old, right? If that person succeeds, I don't know if he will come back for her. Maybe he will have fun somewhere. In a word, I don't think that woman will be happy if she marries that man. After all, life is rice, oil, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea, not a few poems. A few words can make her happy all her life.
5. The poem "Cowherd Star" is selected from "Nineteen Ancient Poems". There are many anonymous ancient poems in the Selected Works compiled by Xiao Tong, the king of Liang Zhao in the Southern Dynasties, which are called Ancient Poems. Most of these poems were written between the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty and decades before Jian 'an, and most of the authors belonged to middle and lower literati, mainly reflecting their lives, thoughts and feelings. The content can be roughly divided into two categories: one is to describe the depression and sorrow of frustrated official career, and the other is to write about the pain of wandering wives missing each other. Specifically, the parting, frustration and impermanence of life are the basic emotional contents of Nineteen Ancient Poems. Therefore, later generations often regard it as a whole, and it is named after its Nineteen Ancient Poems.
This poem tells the story of Cowherd and Weaver Girl. The title is Cowherd Star, but the hero of this poem is not Cowherd but Weaver Girl. The image of the weaver girl originated from folklore. In people's minds, the weaver girl is the embodiment of hard work, beauty and affection. This poem focuses on the sad and unfortunate side of the Weaver Girl.
At the beginning of the poem, the cowherd star leads to the girl of Hehan, and the scene of the weaver weaving is led by the "hand-in-hand loom", but this is not the focus of this poem. The sentence "Tears fall like rain all day" is a link between the preceding and the following, which suddenly pushes the lonely, sad, painful and unfortunate Weaver girl to the readers and misses her day and night. This is really "sad and pitiful", which makes readers sigh.
The reason why this poem has a long history lies in its profound connotation. On the surface, this poem is about the love story of Weaver Girl and Cowherd, but in fact it is to express the parting of the lovers who are far away from home. The feelings of parting in Nineteen Ancient Poems are homesickness and homesickness. Some wanderers are deeply homesick and miss women's boudoir thoughts and worries. The shining double stars in the sky and their beautiful love legends make it easy for women who have lived in boudoir for a long time to stay up all night and touch their full parting. This poem clearly writes fairy tales, secretly writes about real life, and expresses the sentimental feelings of boudoir women tactfully and tortuous.
6. Rewrite a composition according to the 200-word essay Altair.
A 200-word essay adapted from Altair
I'll answer it
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"All the way Altair, JiaoJiaoHe han female. Skillful hands, make a loom. All day, tears poured down. The river is clear and shallow, with many differences. Ying Ying is easy to water, and his pulse is silent. "
Morning glory and Weaver Girl meet so far away and so bright. Weaver stretched out her white hand and fiddled with the loom. Listening to Zaza's voice, I feel lonely. I've been thinking about Cowherd. I spent the whole day not knitting cloth and cried like rain. Petunia and Weaver Girl are not far apart, but separated by a clear and shallow galaxy. Their hearts are so close, but how far apart? Just across a clear Tianhe, I can only look at each other, but I can't say the pain in my heart ... My silent eyes are moist.
7. Expand the Altair in the night sky. There is an Altair, and opposite it is a white and bright Vega.
These two stars are more shining and moving in the dark night sky. Weaver girl looks handsome, and her watery eyes and cherry mouth make her look beautiful and lovely.
Her bright black hair makes her more attractive. She slowly waved her gentle and slender hands and began to weave on the loom, but where was her heart? She thinks about Cowherd all the time: Cowherd, Cowherd, how are you doing now? Have you lost weight? Do you still love me so much Many, many questions, but no reply ... Weaver girl thinks all the time, and as a result, she can't knit cloth all the time.
The more she thought about it, the more sad she became, and finally she cried. She kept crying, so that the originally beautiful starry sky was infected by the sorrow of Weaver Girl and became extremely sad.
The Weaver Girl has a hope. She looked at the Milky Way day after day, hoping that one day God would allow her to meet the Cowherd. Separated by two stars and one water, the distance between them seems very close and far. The weaver girl looked at the long-lost cowherd and said nothing. The Cowherd saw the Weaver Girl and said nothing.
They just stared at each other, and they had endless words to say to each other, but they couldn't say a word ... Weaver girl's tears crossed her white face and suddenly ran to each other, hugging deeply! They have been hugging each other and become the brightest point in the sky. Their love story will be passed down to the world forever, and their love will never stop and last forever.