It seems that just after the Spring Festival, it's too late to do anything. It's already a long summer, and people are lazy like cats. Before the family's summer clothes were ready, suddenly Hosta's bulging white stick stuck out from the crowded and wide green leaves. I was surprised at first, and then disappointed. When this flower blooms, it will be beginning of autumn in a few days. After that, it will be hot summer, autumn equinox and cold dew. After the first frost, winter will begin. Really? Come on!
This kind of flower has a strong vitality. If you plant it casually, it will live forever. I don't choose the ground, I don't choose the soil, and I especially like to give sunshine to others in the shade. Very modest. It is said that petals can be used as medicine. Others come to beg for leaves, and they want to smash them to treat beriberi. I say it's a downward comparison in life and an upward comparison in work, which is a kind of Hosta spirit.
I like flowers, but I have no leisure to play with them. Because of self-knowledge, I dare not invite famous flowers to live. I just want to order all kinds of grass flowers. There is a kind of sunflower, also called immortal, which is colorful in bloom and looks good in the grass. I planted it several times and it didn't work. "Even if you can't die, you will die." We often laugh at ourselves like this.
Hosta flowers, on the other hand, never need someone to take care of them, but thrive on their own. On both sides of the Yuedongmen path in the backyard, a few shoots were transplanted casually, and in the second year, there were green leaves and white flowers, which dotted the scenery in late summer and early autumn. There is a small piece of land outside my door. The original two rows of flowers have now formed a green row, completely covered the ground. In the morning or dusk, a white flower with a handle is held high, vaguely like a white sail on a green wave, and I don't know where to go. Some plants hide some small creatures in the lush branches and leaves, which is frightening. Hosta flowers are always clean Probably because of the smell, insects are not allowed to approach each other.
Bloom has bought more than a dozen flowers, which are full of fragrance. It is not the fragrance of lilacs, the sweet fragrance of osmanthus, or the fragrance of lotus. It has a strong fragrance and seems to have a refreshing effect. Pick a few flowers and put them in a stone basin, and there will be a fragrance floating in the room, which will reduce people's laziness and alert people that autumn is coming.
Autumn is the harvest season, but my hands are empty. One year, two years have passed, always in anxiety and anxiety. Who is to blame? It's hard to answer.
My brother who has lived in a foreign land for a long time likes poetry in his spare time. The day before yesterday, I sent Xijiangyue to Zhu Dunru, a poet of the Southern Song Dynasty:
Day after day, when that glass of wine is full, I will sing and dance freely and talk and laugh in front of the blooming small garden. There are several spring dreams in history and many wizards in the world of mortals. Never mind and arrange, go and get it now.
I have repeatedly recited the phrase "the present receives the present", and I feel that this is a leisurely state. In fact, you don't need to fill a glass of deep wine, and you don't need to have a small nursery in full bloom. You just need to hold it in your heart and you will be happy.
Receiving one's own share is also a taste of playing and getting something. Then, get autumn, get winter, get four seasons and get life.
Appreciation of Bao Qiu's artistic techniques
Bao Qiu is a literary and aesthetic essay. The application of contrast is the outstanding artistic expression of this article. (comment)
Sunflowers are also known as "immortal", but "immortal" means "planted dead"; Hosta flowers, on the other hand, "never need to be taken care of, just thrive." (Syria) This is the first comparison. This contrast reflects the vitality of Hosta. (analysis)
Hosta flowers that report autumn do not choose the environment, and they have strong vitality and will always be clean. Autumn has come, bloom is bright and fragrant, and it is calm to report autumn. But "I" is always in a lazy state of mind. In the autumn of "harvest" of life, I have nothing but "anxiety and anxiety". (Syria) This is the second score. This contrast is not only a regret that time flies and I have accomplished nothing, but also an expectation that life should make a difference. (analysis)
Zhu Dunru's attitude towards life is "a glass of wine every day is full, and bloom faces the small garden", which is a negative attitude towards life; (Analysis) However, the author realized from Hosta flowers that "there is no need to pour a deep cup of wine, there is a blooming nursery", and it is a positive attitude towards life to take the initiative to "live". (Analysis) This is the third proportion. This ratio reveals the theme of the article, and points out the attitude towards life that people in completely different times and environments from Zhu Dunru should have. (analysis)
The above three layers are compared and promoted layer by layer. It is through comparison that the author constructs the article and highlights the main idea. (comment)
An Analysis of the Theme of Bao Qiu and Its Forms of Expression
Bao Qiu clearly reveals the author's mental journey by taking the author's emotional changes as a clue. We understand this process and touch on the theme of the article.
This process is divided into three stages: first, the opening of Hosta makes Mr. Wang feel that time flies. First, he was "surprised and then disappointed"; Secondly, the tenacious vitality of Hosta gives Mr. Wang a strong feeling. In particular, this kind of flower "doesn't need to be taken care of", "doesn't pick a place, doesn't pick soil" and "grows casually", and the flowers are overflowing, but Mr. Wang has been in anxiety for the past two years. Finally, my brother sent me a message to make my husband realize that "you don't need a cup of deep wine, you don't need a blooming nursery, as long as you get it in your heart, you are carefree."
This course is clear. Hosta flowers seem to be the author's reference, conforming to nature, growing freely and full of vitality. And the author himself? Sigh that time flies, sigh that Qiu Lai got nothing. From this, the author realized that "receiving a copy also has a fun taste". At this point, the theme of the article suddenly becomes clear, that is, time is fleeting. We should cherish time, seize the present, seize every moment of life, do something, and don't waste time.
On the Conception Skills of Holding the Ball
Zong Pu's Bao Qiu is divided into two parts: Bao Qiu and Qiu Zhi. These two parts are paved layer by layer, linked before and after, and the structure is rigorous.
In the first six paragraphs, write "Autumn Newspaper" and deduct the word "Love". At the beginning of the article, I saw that the flower "sticks out from the crowded and wide green leaves", and the sentence "first surprised, then disappointed" leads to the following. Why am I "surprised" that "this bloom has been in beginning of autumn for a few days"? At the same time, the author skillfully set a stage for readers to find out why I was "disappointed". In paragraphs 2 to 4, we try our best to describe the profound impression of Hosta Hosta Hosta: Hosta Hosta Hosta blooms in the early autumn when all flowers are dying, showing great vitality. Only this "flower with strong vitality" will make the garden in early autumn fragrant and remind people that "autumn is coming". Therefore, the fragrance of Hosta flowers in the fifth paragraph is refreshing and problematic.
In the face of this very vital Hosta, the author will look at himself: autumn is the harvest season, but I am empty-handed. "This is the reason why I am disappointed. At this point, the first part has become an organic whole.
The last three paragraphs of the article write "knowing autumn", highlighting the word "enlightenment". In the process of reciting Zhu Dunru's Ci, "I" understood the connotation of "accepting the present". Realize a "carefree realm". At this point, "disappointment" quietly disappeared, and the true meaning of life was naturally realized, so at the end, the main theme of the full text was "get your share" and "get life".
Appreciation of Bao Qiu's artistic techniques
Bao Qiu is not long, but it uses a variety of artistic techniques comprehensively.
The blooming of Hosta is the starting point for the author to understand life and life, and make a comparison between flowers, flowers and people, and people. Hosta flower is different from other flowers such as sunflower, with strong vitality and vigorous growth. When I was in bloom, it was full of fragrance and calmly "reported autumn"; But when the autumn of my life comes, I am "empty-handed" and "always anxious". The difference between flowers and people has aroused the author's thinking and realized his different attitude towards life from Zhu Dunru. It is these contrasts that bring about layers of thinking. This "contrast" technique is well used.
The work not only describes the scenery of bloom, but also expresses the feelings of self-emotion, and then quotes ancient poems to think deeply about life. The whole article combines scenery, feelings and thoughts, things and poems, description, lyricism and discussion in one furnace. This "three-dimensional" technology is well used.
At the beginning of the article, it is said that seeing Hosta blossom is "first surprised, then disappointed". Why "disappointed"? The author didn't answer immediately, set a suspense, and then spread out his pen and ink to write Hosta flowers until the sixth paragraph. After this "suspense" was lifted, the article seemed to end there, but the author unexpectedly started another pen and wrote down what Zhu Dunru got from his brother. And it is this word that lifted the "disappointment" and came to an end. This technique of "ups and downs" is well used.
The use of various artistic techniques makes the article like an autumn Hosta, emitting a strong fragrance.
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Appreciation of Bao Qiu's artistic techniques
I think the biggest feature of Holding the Ball is the clever use of contrast. The article says, "Even the dead can't die" and "Hosta flowers are different and flourishing". By comparing the growth habits of Hosta and sunflower, the strong vitality of Hosta is highlighted. Some plants "will hide some small creatures" and "Hosta flowers are always clean" to highlight the nobility of Hosta flowers; Compared with other floral scents, the floral fragrance of Hosta Hosta highlights the uniqueness of the fragrance and its characteristics of "reporting autumn". Hosta flowers have so many characteristics, it is no wonder that the author chose Hosta flowers to "report autumn" among the thousands of autumn scenery. More importantly, these characteristics of Hosta Hosta are just in contrast with my past attitude towards life and the present situation of "empty hands", which further enables the author to understand life and put forward the philosophy of "accepting life calmly", thus completing the disclosure of the main idea of the article.
Autumn is the season of harvest, with a change of pen, from flowers to people, from flowers to life, and then quoting Xijiang Moon sent by my brother, it leads to "receiving the present" and "receiving life", which causes people to think about the realm of life, with a clear theme and deeper thoughts.
The article also uses a variety of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification, such as "the white and round wooden sticks of Hosta flower protrude from the crowded and wide green leaves" and "a white flower with a handle is like a white sail flying on the green wave, and I don't know where to go", which makes the image of Hosta flower more vivid and concrete, and also makes the spirit of Hosta flower more prominent.
Comments: This appreciation essay starts with the rhetoric of the original, has its own theme and time, and strives to be comprehensive and clear. "Comment", "narration" and "analysis" are well combined, with clear levels and fluent language. But although the second paragraph is an analysis of the article, it is not "artistic technique" or "appreciation", which deviates from the topic. It can be seen that writing "appreciation essays" is the same as writing other articles, and we should also pay attention to closely following the "theme".
An Analysis of the Theme of Bao Qiu and Its Forms of Expression
Bao Qiu, with its simple language and thought-provoking philosophy, shows the author's profound understanding of life to the fullest. By describing the flowering of Hosta Hosta in the yard and introducing its living habits and efficacy, the author embodies a quality and a spirit. Later, from flowers to poetry, the theme sublimated to the level of accepting life.
Bao Qiu has to make us think about the bits and pieces of life. Time flies, we can't stop, and life moves on. With a humble and dedicated dedication, just like Hosta, with the spirit of Hosta, we can be enriched in the fleeting time and enjoy life in a carefree realm.
Comments: As an appreciation article, we should pay attention to the organic combination of narration, analysis and evaluation. This article has "analysis" and "evaluation", but it lacks the necessary "narration"; Since we are discussing the theme, we should draw a convincing conclusion on the basis of analysis, otherwise there will be no pertinence, the article will be "empty" and the theme will be unclear; The second paragraph of the article is the author's own perception of life, which belongs to the feeling after reading and should be deleted. In addition, because of the serious lack of words, it is impossible to make the point clear.