First, the original sound playback
Write an article "Like a strong wind in spring, it blows at night".
Requirements: 1, customized; 2. Besides poetry, the style is optional; 3, not less than 800 words; 4. No plagiarism or interplanting.
Second, the composition analysis
Chengdu Institute of Education attaches great importance to the "one-visit" exam, and the difficulty and discrimination of the exam questions are generally the same as those of the college entrance examination, and the marking is also equivalent to that of the college entrance examination. Moreover, candidates can estimate how many points they can get in the college entrance examination from the results of this exam. The purpose of diagnosis is not only to test the students' learning situation some time ago, but also to find the students' "symptoms" and attract the attention of the first-line teachers in senior three. As far as Chinese is concerned, the propositions in these two years are relatively good, especially the setting of composition topics, which shows the thinking path of Chengdu Chinese proposition group, which is both novel and speculative. For example, in 2008, the title of the composition of "First Visit" was "Planting Sunshine", and the author made great efforts in the flexibility of words. "Planting" and "sunshine" are both flexible words with rich connotations, which provide candidates with more thinking dimensions. Sunlight symbolizes "warmth", "kindness" and "justice", and "planting" is the action of planting something in a place. In fact, the meaning of this essay topic is to ask candidates to plant "kindness", "warmth" and "integrity" in their hearts. The composition of "One Diagnosis" in 2009 is the same as that of "One Diagnosis" last year, so we still make a fuss about the flexibility of words. The most flexible word in the composition is "spring breeze". If the examinee doesn't understand the word thoroughly, he will definitely take a detour and even go to the opposite side of the road pointed out by the proposer. According to the Modern Chinese Dictionary (2005), page 20 1, the meaning of "spring breeze" is as follows: 1, spring breeze; 2. The elegance of metaphor; 3, the metaphor of joy.
The connotation of the elastic word "spring breeze" is more "warmth", "heat" and "kindness" Therefore, a correct understanding of "like spring breeze, the dead of night" is the arrival of "spring breeze", a kind of "warmth" and "tenderness" The arrival of these things, like the wind caressing the face, quietly. In the writing process, only the metaphorical meaning of spring breeze can appear, because there is a qualifier "such as" in front of "spring breeze", and candidates may make such mistakes in the writing process. This way of proposition is also an innovation based on last year. It draws lessons from the writing style of the test questions in the 2007 Beijing College Entrance Examination, and it is carried out in the way of intercepting poems. In 2007, the composition of Beijing college entrance examination was "I can't see the drizzle and wet clothes, and I can't hear anything when I am free." The composition poem of the "One Clinic" exam in Chengdu comes from "Song of White Snow to Send Tian Shuji Wu Home", and the original poem is "Like spring breeze, night comes, blowing ten thousand pears"
Students should be open-minded when writing, and they can think from three aspects. First, forward thinking. For example, when writing, we can combine the current situation in China and face the world economic crisis. Our government in China has shown an image of a promising government. In the face of difficulties, we actively responded and quickly introduced economic policies, which not only contributed to the national economic recovery, but also set an example for the world to resist the economic cold current. This contribution is like a warm current blowing across the land of China, spanning four oceans and seven continents, showing the image of a big country. You can also think so. With help, encouragement, encouragement and education (metaphorical meaning of spring breeze), there will be a thriving scene. Second, reverse thinking. Generally speaking, people make a fuss about "spring breeze", but we can think that "like the strong wind in spring, night comes" only acts as an adverbial in the whole discourse system, and there are many subtext behind it. Candidates can ask questions along this famous sentence: "Why do pears bloom?"? This turned out to be the result of the spring breeze. Just like the result of spring breeze, what can you express in your composition? For example, China's achievements in the past 30 years of reform. Third, the combination of positive thinking and reverse thinking. What is "spring breeze"? Here it comes. What does it bring? Reverse thinking "spring breeze" is coming, what will it look like? How should we deal with it? Draw a conclusion on the basis of positive and negative arguments. It's better to focus on this paper, and don't put too much effort on yourself, but put the thinking point on the position of the country and the nation, so that the article will have a sense of atmosphere.
Third, teachers write in the water.
Like a spring breeze overnight, it comes quietly.
Wang Zhenpeng of Sichuan Xinjin Middle School
Time flows through my fingers, leaving many fragments in my mind. Many things need to be settled, many behaviors need to be reflected, and many thoughts need to be sorted out.
Ask yourself, knock on your heart. A little disappointed, a little sad. How to spend a cloudy day and feel the comfort of "facing the sea and warming bloom in spring"? This is a problem. Many times, I always sing a voice of complaint to myself, but I don't know that this emotion invades the bone marrow like a virus. Reflection is an upward wheel, and only after experience can we know the original ignorance. In the process of pushing stones up the mountain, Sisyphus did not blame Zeus too much for his ruthlessness, but learned to appreciate the flowers and butterflies along the way.
In the aura of collective aphasia in the whole educational environment, I learned to "recognize myself". Personally, you can only be regarded as a passer-by, not a returnee. So, how can we live a full and natural life in this environment? Reading, writing and talking to yourself. Who dares to say that "walking is the fate of life"? Some people say that memory is a kind of beauty, but this kind of beauty has some vicissitudes. Recalling the past days, I was deeply moved by myself.
The law of life tells people that sometimes people should have a spirit of tracing back to the source, choose the right goal and move forward on the spot. At first, I thought that strange-looking bed companion was lofty, what English to study, and wanted to go to college for postgraduate study. Don't pretend to be around me. I laughed at him secretly in my mind, and I couldn't even sleep well. Can I read English? Don't stick your nose in the onion and see how long you can last. Later, that colleague did this every day, and I was completely conquered by him. Sometimes, the madman next door is really noisy, so I talk to that colleague. From his mouth, I learned that he had passed the postgraduate exam in college, but his foreign language was almost the same. He also encouraged me to take the exam with him. I just smiled bitterly. Speaking of foreign language proficiency, I feel like crying. It's a level 4 thing, which tortured me badly in college! After that, I kept pace with the madman next door, which was very irregular and was the main reason for my neurasthenia. Colleagues who take the postgraduate entrance examination are different. His life has a unique pattern. He read under the bean light, and his hard-working figure appeared on the wall. He falls asleep at one o'clock every night, listening to his even snoring. I envy him to death.
The colleague who was admitted to graduate school has become a university teacher in Pengcheng, South China, and I am still at the beginning. Fortunately, we still keep in touch. The day before yesterday, he told the story of being a neighbor with a madman in the email. In his eyes, the madman's torture is not pain but wealth. I see a spirit from my colleagues, that is, the spirit of tracing the source of salmon, a spirit of choosing a target and never looking back. I think he must have been a salmon in his last life. Otherwise, where did he get that kind of hard work? People live between heaven and earth, please don't complain too much about the injustice of life. In the face of difficulties, you should hold your head high and go forward bravely. Remember, when God closes a door, he will definitely open a window for you. Facing life, you should learn to be grateful. My former colleagues are like a spring breeze, warming my heart.
If you are alive, you must rush forward. What are you hesitating about?
The above are all standard examples in various places. I think you may have met them. I'll give you a website, but you need to register yourself to read them:/Downinfo/183061.html.
In fact, to tell the truth, the most important thing in writing is the accumulation of materials. Read more newspaper reviews at ordinary times, such as Minjiang Review of Chengdu Business Daily, which can not only accumulate current affairs materials, but also learn a lot of incisive languages, giving people a refreshing feeling both in content and language. Li Bai, Du Fu and other materials should also be memorized, just write your own style.
I hope it helps you.