(A) Wang Wei's "Autumn Night in the Deep Mountains"
Original poem:
The empty mountains are bathed in a new rain, and feel the early autumn at night.
The bright moon shed clear light from the cracks and cleared the fountain on the rocks.
The bamboo forest is sonorous, the washerwoman returns, and the lotus leaves are swaying to get on the canoe.
Spring spring might as well give it a rest, and the autumn sun can stay on the hills for a long time.
Version:
After a burst of autumn rain, the weather in the mountains is chilly and autumn is strong at night.
Moonlight shines on the pine path through the pine leaves, and crystal stones are sprinkled on the stream.
Hip-hop is in the bamboo grove, the washerwoman goes home, and the fisherman comes back rocking the boat.
Chunfang is dead, and autumn scenery in the mountains can also be enjoyed. Why not stay?
(B) Li Shangyin's "Falling Flowers"
Original poem:
Visitors to the High Court have been competing to leave; The spring flowers in the small garden are dancing in the wind.
The flower shadow is confused by the winding path; Overlooking the petal dance reflects the afterglow of the sunset.
My heart is too small to sweep away the fallen flowers; Looking forward to spring, but returning in a hurry.
Flower lovers who love flowers will naturally blame spring for leaving too early; When spring comes to an end, flowers and flowers only shed tears.
Version:
In spring, the tall buildings are empty, and the flowers in the yard are flying in the air, which makes people sad.
The path is full of flowers. What's more, it flies far away to bid farewell to the old sunset.
Flowers fall all over the ground, who has the heart to sweep them away, just looking forward to returning to the branches.
Beautiful flowers will eventually fall with the spring, leaving only tears on the skirt.
(3) Du Fu's "Guest Arrivals"
The north and south of the thatched cottage are all springs, and the flock of gulls flew in.
The old lady didn't sweep the flower path for the guests. Today, it's only for you. Chai Men hasn't opened it for you yet, but it will open it for you today.
Too far from the city, too far from good food, too thin family background, only old wine.
If you are willing to invite the old man next door to drink with you, he will drink his cup through the fence!
Version:
Before and after the house, surrounded by a piece of green water, seagulls often come.
The flowers and plants in front of the door are greeted before they are finished sweeping, and the door is open for you.
The mountain is high and the city is far away. Poor people have no good food and good wine, only old wine.
If you want a drink, invite the old man across the fence and invite him to get drunk with you.
Publishing House: "May 7th Five-Year" poetry is a unique means to train primary school students' sentence-making and exercise ability in Suzhou Xiaohe composition. Because the content written in the format of "five words+seven words+five words" is like a poem, it is named. At the end of 20 15, I began to contact Xiao He's composition and found it very interesting. 20 16 also taught for one semester. This system is not only useful for students, but also touches me greatly. Today, I rewrote the above Tang poems as a souvenir. -2065438+Tianhe on July 27th, 2008.