Teaching objectives (PPT 1)
1. Perceive the text as a whole and grasp the plot of the novel.
2. Appreciate the sentences of scenery description, dialogue description and detail description, and taste the unique language art of the work.
3. Analyze the characters, explore the human beauty and spiritual beauty of the characters, and realize the theme of the novel.
Emphasis and difficulty in teaching
1. Key points: Read repeatedly, taste exquisite language and rich connotation.
2. Difficulties: Understand the lofty spiritual outlook of the characters in the novel and grasp the main idea.
teaching method
Read aloud, ask questions and discuss, study in groups, discuss and explore.
training/teaching aid
multimedia courseware
teaching process
First, the introduction of new courses.
1. Leading design
2. Introduction to the author (PPT2)
Second, the overall perception, grasp the meaning of the text
Arrange for students to preview the text in advance, and think about the following questions first in class: (PPT3)
1. The main character portrayed in the novel is ()
A. aquatic sister-in-law B. aquatic C. aquatic and aquatic sister-in-law
D. the image of a group of ordinary working women represented by aquatic sister-in-law
2. On the basis of overall perception, summarize the story in the form of quasi-subtitles. You can use four words, five words, six words, seven words, or poems and songs, which can rhyme. Personalized words are welcome. Communication and display between deskmates and groups.
Example (1) Farewell between husband and wife (beginning) (2) Exploration (development) of husband's encounter with enemy.
(3) Help her husband kill the enemy (climax, ending)? End of movement
Third, appreciate the language
The poetic novel Lotus Lake has beauty in many aspects, angles and levels, which is intoxicating and beautiful. Its beauty lies in nature, environment, courtyard, hometown, labor, soul, humanity, patriotism and love; Its beauty lies in the perfect unity of elegant poetry and painting with simple and fresh earthy atmosphere. In a word, these beauties are all expressed through the beauty of language. Let's focus on appreciating the beauty of language.
(1) Description of scenery: (PPT4) For the description of scenery, Wang Guowei, a famous poet in the late Qing Dynasty, once concluded that all scenery words are love stories. ? Let the students think: How many scenery descriptions are there in this article? What scenarios are described? What are the characteristics of description? What role does it play in the text?
1. Read aloud 1? In the natural section, discuss with your deskmate and answer the following questions: What beautiful scenery do these three paragraphs describe? What kind of environmental atmosphere do these scenes constitute? Grab your favorite word and tell me how you feel.
Example (PPT5) Female banquet under the moon, Baiyangdian style, Baiyangdian under the moon. The moonlight is bright, there are white reed mats everywhere, and there is a silver world in the lake, with mist, breeze and lotus fragrance.
Ambient atmosphere: quiet and beautiful, picturesque. (bright moon, clean courtyard; Snow, white clouds; Silver-white world, transparent mist; The cool breeze is fresh and fragrant. )
2. Talk about the role of scenery description (you can determine the angle independently);
Example (PPT6)
① Beautiful and suitable for theme home? Love and defend your hometown.
(2) For the character labor scene? Jingmei? More beautiful
The lake scenery in your eyes sets each other off? Show the beautiful inner world of the characters
(3) For the plot, mention the enemy's stronghold twice in the same mouth? Encounter the enemy? ambush battle
There are countless boats in June Lake? There is not a boat on the water.
(Provide the background of the characters' activities; Create a fresh and pleasant quiet atmosphere; Set off the image of aquatic products eldest sister-in-law, hardworking, simple, kind and docile. )
3.(PPT7) At noon, we described the scenery and the war scenes, and described their functions.
Example (PPT8)
At noon, the scenery is on the lake. Description: It sets off the emotions of the characters: disappointment and sadness? Laugh.
Description of war scenes: make the horrible war scenes full of poetry and painting; It implies that there will be a battle to destroy the enemy here; It promoted the development of the plot and showed the struggle of the people in the base area.
(2) dialogue description: reading aloud by different roles at the same table? Couples say goodbye? Answer the following questions:
1. Underline what Sister Shui said, choose her favorite and talk about her personality.
For example? What happened? You care about your husband.
? You are always positive. Praise, blame
? You go, I won't stop you. What to do at home? Know the overall situation and understand the righteousness. Attachment.
2.
Compare reading and appreciate language. (if the original? Couples say goodbye? What will be the effect of the following two dialogues? )
(1) Read aloud by different roles at the same table, and analyze and discuss the woman's personality. (PPT9)
Woman:? You go, I won't stop you. Xiaohua, take it with you; Dad, take it, too. ?
Man:? Then how to do it?
Woman:? Then why not?
Man:? It's not like I'm visiting relatives and friends and attending a hometown party. ?
Woman:? Don't think about me. There are old people and little people in the world. Why should I worry? ?
Evaluation examples complain, ignore children, emphasize family difficulties, give little support to husbands, and take care of the overall situation.
(2) Read aloud from different roles at the same table to analyze and discuss the woman's personality. (PPT 10)
Woman:? You go, I won't stop you, let's go together. ?
Man:? We will fight the devil. What are you doing as a girl? No ?
Woman:? Why not? You hit the devil, I can help you cook and wash clothes.
Man:? No, I disagree, and the team will never agree. ?
Woman:? Huh? Don't! Just don't! Otherwise, we divorce. ?
An example of attachment evaluation to her husband Chen Jiao. Have feelings for children and no sense of family responsibility. Regardless of the overall situation, I insist on dragging my feet. Like a delicate little woman.
3.(PPT 1 1) Combining stories, environmental descriptions and dialogue descriptions, briefly talk about the personality characteristics of the water wife.
The character of the model aquatic sister-in-law not only has the traditional virtues of women in China, but also has the progressive characteristics of women in the liberated areas. 1. Diligent and kind. 2 gentle and considerate. (3) Deeply understand righteousness, loyalty and unyielding.
(3) Language appreciation:
1. Personalized language (dialogue description). (PPT 12) (Read aloud in different roles at the same table or in groups, discuss the following five sentences, and then choose appropriate words to summarize the personality characteristics reflected in each sentence. )
①? I heard that they are still here. I don't drag my tail, but I forgot a dress. ?
②? I have something important to say to him. ?
③? Listen to him. The Japanese want to live in the same place.
④? What a coincidence. Let's go and come back early. ?
⑤? I didn't want to go, but my mother-in-law insisted that I visit him again? What's there to see! ?
A. People are outspoken () B. Simple and honest () C. Steady and cautious ()
D. shy, shy, smart
2. Suggestive language (scenery description). (PPT 13) (read the following at the same table and discuss the following questions)
Layers of big lotus leaves, facing the sun, extend outward, just like an iron wall. The pink lotus arrow sticks out high. It must be a sentry guarding Baiyangdian Lake.
( 1)? Lotus leaf? Like what? Iron wall? What does this mean?
The anti-Japanese military and civilians are United in their strength and dare to destroy all invading enemies.
(2)? Pink lotus arrow? what's up Sentinel? What does this mean?
Example ① Gender association: female, ordinary female in Baiyangdian.
②? Is it a sentry? Prediction: the growth direction of women.
③ In the reeds? Sentinel? Suggest what? A fierce battle is about to start here. (Contact two psychological hints describing underwater sound in the article)
3. Detailed language (psychological description). (PPT 14) read the following at the same table or in groups, and discuss how the detailed description reflects the complex and subtle mentality of the characters. )
When did aquatic sister-in-law hear what her husband said? I will go to the big army tomorrow? , the author wrote:? The woman's fingers trembled, thinking that Mei Wei had cut her hand. She put a finger in her mouth and sucked it. ?
Exploring the ideas of examples is unprepared, nervous and flustered? Cover it up with action? Calm down. Aquatic sister-in-law is a sensible and conscious rural woman, and she doesn't want her husband to say that she is weak and backward.
Four, group discussion, inquiry learning (PPT 15)
Inquiry: What did the students learn in this class? What did you get? Why does the author completely avoid describing the war that was originally full of smoke, bullets, bloody pieces and tragic ruins, but write the novel with natural beauty, scenic beauty, human beauty, details beauty, plot beauty, poetic beauty and theme beauty? Please analyze this war theme? Poetic novel? This way of writing. Please review the text, think independently, summarize independently from your own point of view, then discuss with each other at the same table or in groups to determine your best plan, recommend representatives to speak, and correct each other. )
Summary example (PPT 16)
1. In this lesson, we focus on the role of scene description, dialogue description and detail description in portraying characters and expressing themes. The functions of scenery description are as follows: providing the background of characters' activities; Render the atmosphere; Promote the development of the plot; Compare the characters.
2. Features of Sun Li's novels: (1) The language is fresh and simple, and the prose style is poetic and vivid. (2) Pay attention to the pursuit of life? The ultimate in beauty? Good at digging the beauty of people's hearts and writing? Human artistic conception? ,? Conquer readers with artistic conception and artistic conception? .
The theme of this novel is not to show the cruelty of war, but to show the process of ordinary working women growing into revolutionary fighters in the liberated areas, so that people can find the beauty in life. When something beautiful is in danger, it is easier to arouse people's desire to protect it. There is no contradiction between the deep affection of husband and wife and their love for their children and their dedication to defending and generously dying.
4. Although the novel describes the events in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression, it does not directly describe the fierceness and cruelty of the war, but focuses on the common people's feelings of husband and wife and their love for their country. Through the description of these kind and innocent people, they show the brilliance of human nature in the war environment and show the lofty mental state of the people who are not afraid of violence and defend their country. Women's feelings have risen from the love of husband and wife to the love of home and country. Only when there is a country can there be a home, and only when there is family can there be loyalty to the country.
V. Homework and Extension (PPT 17)
1. Suppose the husbands of these four women also went home to say goodbye, what would their conversation be like? Please imagine the conversation between one of the ladies and her husband according to her personality.
2. Comparing Sister-in-law Aquatic and Sister-in-law Xianglin: It is suggested that they are both ordinary rural women in China, but their life trajectories are completely different. Xianglinsao lived in the late feudal era, and the wind of modern civilization could not blow into the closed and conservative Luzhen, so Xianglinsao could only be destroyed by the cold and dark social reality. Aquatic sister-in-law lived during the national anti-Japanese war and made great social progress, especially in the base areas. Women's liberation has been deeply rooted in people's hearts, so Shuisao can grow from a virtuous and docile village woman to a female warrior in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression.
3. Read Sun Li's novel "The Prequel to Tiemu" or "The Legend of the Wind and Cloud", write a comment and appreciate the beauty of language.