The ideas to solve this kind of extended problems are: analyzing types, grasping key points, defining elements, appreciating artistic conception, trying to figure out language and reasonably imagining. Try to analyze as follows:
(1) Analytical: These two poems are both lyrical.
(2) Grasp the key points: The focus of development should be the scenery and emotion. Scenery includes sunshine, smoke, dawn, cold, apricot and spring; Love is love and praise for spring.
(3) Explicit elements: The elements of rewriting and expansion include explicit elements and implicit elements, and special attention should be paid to implicit elements. The dominant elements of these two poems are "Yang, Yan, Xiao, Cold, Apricot and Spring", while the recessive elements are "Light" and "Noisy", that is to say, the unfolded sentences should clearly show the "excitement" of "cold light" and "Spring".
(4) Appreciation of artistic conception: "Han Xiao is light outside the smoke" embodies a hazy and slightly cold artistic conception; "Spring" is lively and full of spring.
(5) Try to figure out the language: it has charm and needs poetic or plain language.
(6) Reasonable imagination: If you can express your feelings in the scenery, such as "Spring is noisy" is abstract, you should reasonably imagine the specific pictures of bees, butterflies and flowers and birds.
In the morning after the spring rain, the poplars on both sides of the river were shrouded in fog, and a breeze blew with a slight chill. A fiery red apricot blossom came into view, blooming as brightly as rosy clouds, and its branches were surrounded by bees. A few early orioles are singing cheerful songs. Second, the scenery description is reasonable. Example 2 develops "How can I ask the canal to be so clear that there is running water at the source" into a paragraph of no less than 80 words.
The way to solve this kind of extended problems is to analyze the types, grasp the key points, try to figure out the language and make reasonable associations. Try to analyze as follows:
(1) Analytical: These two poems belong to the style of describing scenery and reasoning.
(2) Grasp the key points: The key points are "scenery" and "reason". "Quiet" is the clear water in the square pond and the flowing water at the source; "Reason" means constant supplement and exercise to keep vitality.
(3) Try to figure out the language: the language of the topic is the language of discussion.
(4) Reasonable association: The original poem is only a metaphor. In order to develop it better, we should be able to draw inferences from others.
Without the injection of flowing water from the source, how can there be such clear pool water? Similarly, without the injection of new knowledge and new ideas, the original ideas can only become a stagnant pool. Facing this ever-changing world, we should constantly absorb new knowledge to enrich our thoughts. Third, narrative discussion example 3 expands "Little Phoenix is clearer than old Phoenix" into a paragraph of no less than 90 words.
The solution to this kind of extended problem is: explanation, understanding and inspiration. Try to analyze as follows:
(1) Interpretation: Explain the meaning of the poem.
(2) Understanding: Revealing the truth contained in the poem.
(3) Revelation: the inspiration from writing poems.
The cries of newborn chicks are clearer and sweeter than those of old chicks. The superiority of this kind of voice naturally comes from the youth and vigor of the chicks, and more importantly, it lies in its inheritance and learning. This phenomenon in nature inspires us to look at problems from a developmental perspective, study hard and dare to surpass them.
In short, to solve the problem of expanding famous poems and sentences, we should not only pay attention to defining elements, grasping key points, developing reasonable imagination, but also pay attention to selecting materials, comprehensively using various rhetoric and expressions, writing neatly (including punctuation marks), and at the same time pay attention to the limitation of words. Only in this way can we answer such questions quickly and accurately.
Consolidation exercise
1. Make a reasonable association and imagination with Liu Yong's famous sentence "Yang Liuan Xiaofeng Canyue" and write a paragraph of not less than 50 words.
2. Expand "I am seeing guests off on Xunyang River, and maple leaves and rushes rustle in autumn" into a paragraph with no less than 100 words.
Reference answer
1.a. A lingering moon is rippling in the autumn water of a river, and several willows on the shore are alone enduring the cold wind in late autumn. It's not just willow leaves that fall with the wind, but also some tears that leave people.
B. The wind in autumn morning is so cool that the poet can't help shivering. The willows on both sides of the river are faintly discernible in the dim morning light. Looking up, the horizon bends like a hook in the Leng Yue.
2. The twilight has dispersed and there is a waning moon hanging in the sky. There are a few faint clouds floating on the edge of the waning moon, which are like layers of lingering fog barriers, connected with the smoke on the river. On the riverside, the autumn wind strikes, and withered maple leaves fall in succession, floating on the water and flowing downstream. Several withered flowers are swaying in the wind. After the wind, the branches are bare, supporting a lonely coast.