Help me revise this poem to make it more elegant, xie

The dragon and the tiger are among the three thousand people,

The dragon roars and the tiger roars in unison,

The dragon and the tiger take extraordinary steps,

The dragon soars and the tiger leaps Power must be fought for.

The dragon soars high and the storm moves,

The tiger roars and all the beasts are frightened.

The mighty dragon and tiger show their miraculous abilities,

Who will not obey Shunchang's rebellion?