1, the swallow has gone, and there is time to come again; Willow withered, there is a time to green again; The peach blossom has withered, but it has blossomed again.
Appreciation: At the beginning, the article describes the pictures of swallows gone, willows withered and green, and peach blossoms withered, and renders them with the ups and downs of natural objects and the changes of time sequence, suggesting the traces of time passing.
2, yes-when washing your hands, the days pass from the basin; When eating, the days pass from the rice bowl; When I was silent, I passed by my eyes.
Appreciation: The author describes in detail the moments of eating, washing hands, sleeping and even sighing in daily life. Time flies. Undoubtedly, Zhu Ziqing's thought of cherishing every inch of money coincides with the ancient poem "Young people don't work hard, but old people are sad" and the motto "An inch of time is worth an inch of money, but a thousand dollars can't buy an inch of time".
Like a drop of water in the sea, my days are dripping in the stream of time.
Appreciation: It is extremely exaggerated to use the novel metaphor of "a drop of water" to compare your own more than 8,000 days. Compared with the vastness of the time flow of the sea, it highlights the characteristics of a person's life as "silent and shadowless".
4. The past is like smoke, blown away by the breeze and evaporated by Chu Yang.
Appreciation: The author has made a highly summary of the passage of more than 8,000 days, so that all kinds of images of the hasty passage of time can be condensed at one point, making the passage of time more clear and sensible.
In the morning, two or three oblique suns shot into the hut. The sun has a step, and it moves gently and quietly.
Appreciation: The sun is personified. Like a young girl, he walked quietly by the poet and "walked" with the sun.