Poetry like a dream

The antithesis of "Time flies like water, Time flies like water" and "If dreams are floating, dreams are floating" is very neat. The first couplet is "flat and flat, flat and flat", and the second couplet is "flat and flat, flat and flat". However, the antithesis between "time flies like water" and "life is like a dream" is chaotic. The first sentence is flat and parallel, and the last sentence is flat and parallel, so the format of this couplet can't be completely correct. Therefore, if this couplet is a good work, we can only start with the artistic conception.

Time flies like water and life is like a dream both contain a feeling that times have changed, things have changed and people are nostalgic for the past. Therefore, at this time, the blank space can be filled with words such as life, life, disability, clear life, confusion, wrong life, fantasy, old age, easy and easy.

Personal comparison: time flies like water, time flies like water, time flies like water.

Floating like a dream, floating like a dream, floating like a dream.

Wandering is taken from a secluded dream, which coincides with the artistic conception of "floating like a dream"

Since the author wants to rhyme, I personally think that the word "Yao" is better than "Magic Road".

There is a sense of whispering, combined with the meaning of "floating like a dream", there will be a sense of passing and whispering alone, adding the artistic conception of the second couplet.

The magic road is like a dream, and the focus on emotion floats like a dream.

Speaking of this, I personally feel that Chinese characters are better, more literary, more aesthetic and more poetic.

What does the author think?