1, have you noticed how the water of the Yellow River flows out of heaven and into the ocean, never to return? -Li Bai's "Into the Wine"
Appreciation: The Yellow River has a long history and a great gap, such as falling from the sky, pouring thousands of miles and heading east into the sea. Such a magnificent phenomenon must be invisible to the naked eye. The author is fictional and exaggerated. The last sentence says that the coming of the big river is unstoppable; The next sentence says that the river is gone and irreversible.
One rises and the other disappears, which constitutes a breath, which is not available in short sentences (such as "The Yellow River falls into the sky and returns to the East China Sea"). The first two sentences exaggerate the space category, and these two sentences exaggerate the time category. Lament that life is short, but outspoken, heroic, unrestrained, fluent and infectious.
2. Qinghai Changyun Dark Snow Mountain, and the lonely city overlooks Yumenguan. Yellow sand wears golden armor in hundreds of battles, but the loulan is not returned. -Wang Changling's "Seven Military Services, the Fourth"
Appreciation: At the beginning, the poet painted a magnificent and desolate frontier fortress scenery and summarized the face of the northwest frontier fortress. The loneliness and feelings of the generals' hard life in the frontier are integrated into this desolate and vast, confused and dim scene. "Hundreds of battles" is more abstract, and the word "yellow sand" highlights the characteristics of the northwest battlefield.
From "winning every battle" to "wearing golden armor", it is even more conceivable that the battle is arduous and fierce. Although the shining armor is worn out, the soldiers' ambition to serve the country has not been tempered, but they have become more determined in the tempering of the desert yellow sand. The more the last sentence emphasizes the hardships of fighting and the frequent wars, the more powerful and shocking it becomes.
In the sharp wind from the vast sky, apes are sobbing, and birds fly home on the clear lake and white sand beach. The endless trees are rustling leaves, and the Yangtze River is rolling unpredictably. -Du Fu's "Ascending the Mountain"
Appreciation: the first couplet writes about the scenery, comes straight to the point and renders the sad atmosphere. The "Zhu" is clear, the "sand" is white, and the "bird" is "flying back", hovering in a bleak and desolate "Zhu Sha", showing its loneliness, which can not help but remind people of the desolate feeling of "turning around the tree three times, what branches can rely on", and sadness comes from it.
Endless and inexhaustible, it makes the rustling roll more vivid, which reminds people of the rustling of fallen trees and the surging Yangtze River, and invisibly conveys the feeling that youth is fleeting and ambition is hard to pay. Through the gloomy and sad dialogue, it shows superb brushwork, and it does have the majestic momentum of "repairing the palace" and "pouring hundreds of rivers into the east".