1, you asked that the return date was undecided, and the rain rose in the autumn pool at night. -"A short message to a friend in the north on a rainy night" Li Shangyin
Appreciation: the word "period" can be seen from two aspects, one is to ask your wife and the other is to answer yourself; The wife asked to urge her to come back early, but lamented that the date of her return was not accurate. "Late Rain" re-emerged, one is a real scene among the guests, and it is a tight answer; One is to talk about help after going back, and the wife should ask from a distance. And with "how to do" in the middle, connect the past and the future, turn reality into nothingness, open up the realm of imagination, and make the cycle control of time and space blend seamlessly.
This is a lyric poem. The first two sentences of this poem, with questions and answers and descriptions of the immediate environment, illustrate the lonely feelings and deep nostalgia for his wife. The last two sentences imagine the joy of meeting again in the future and compare with the loneliness tonight. The language is shallow and affectionate, implicit and meaningful, well known and memorable.
2. In the autumn rain, shallow stones slide and diarrhea. -"Luan Family Color" Wang Wei
Appreciation: "In the rustling autumn rain, shallow stones are slippery." At first, the poet created a leisurely picture. In stormy autumn, shallow streams jumped over stones and flowed briskly.
"Whispering" represents the sound of wind and rain, and the corresponding overlapping word "shallow" represents the fast rhythm of the stream, which is very musical. These two sentences not only create a sensible picture, but also let readers feel the gurgling sound of stream flowing and see the sound in the picture.
The whole poem is permeated with an elegant atmosphere, which makes people feel that the author is enjoying life lightly in this world that has nothing to do with prosperity. It is also the natural expression of the poet's feelings after his indifference to the extreme, which makes people feel ethereal and clear.
3. The autumn rain on Xiaoxiao Mountain Road is poor, and the Xixi wind is on the shore. -"On the way to Qiupu" Du Mu
Appreciation: the first sentence and the second sentence use antithesis, which is rare in quatrains. In this way, it is used to contrast and brush colors and enhance the descriptive nature of the landscape. With a few strokes, the picture of mountains, water hills and stormy journeys is vividly outlined.
The onomatopoeic words "Shasha" and "Xi" are intertextual here, and they are also about wind and rain. And write the word "one shore pu" to write the wind, invisible, you can see it by shaking the leaves of the pu, giving people an immersive feeling.