Hao, a girl from Class 3, No.4 Middle School, Xinzhou District, Shangrao City (1), got full marks in this year's college entrance examination composition "Approaching Lu Xun", ranking first in science in the college entrance examination, with a total score of 579. How is the perfect composition made? On June 5438+0 1 day, the reporter interviewed Hao and shared her experience in writing a good composition.
Talking about perfect composition is to let more people understand and accept Lu Xun.
This year's Jiangxi college entrance examination composition topic is: In middle school, students have three fears: one is afraid of the Olympics, the other is afraid of English, and the third is afraid of Zhou Shuren. Please explain your point of view. You can discuss or describe the topic yourself.
"When I saw this essay topic, I thought, what is Zhou Shuren afraid of? I like to see his works. I like him too late. " Hao said that at the beginning of her composition, she quoted a sentence from Lu Xun's work "This is Life": "Infinite distance and countless people are all related to me. I exist, I will live ... ". This paper compares Lu Xun with Natsume Soseki, an outstanding Japanese writer, and highlights the Excellence of Mr. Lu Xun's works. "I just want to tell you the excellence of Lu Xun. We should approach him and let more people know and accept Lu Xun. Zhou Shuren will no longer be the fear in students' hearts. "
Hao said: "At the end of the composition, I also picked a sentence from Lu Xun's works. The mud of life was abandoned on the ground, and no trees were born, only weeds were born. This is my sin. "
In Hao's view, "Lu Xun's works may be profound and difficult to read, but don't stop understanding his footsteps because of obscure words." At the end of this sentence, it is also pointed out again, which echoes the previous article and achieves the effect of making the whole article flow like water.
Huang Li, Hao's Chinese teacher, told the reporter that this perfect composition has a thorough analysis of Lu Xun and a unique viewpoint.
"Because I was immersed in writing at that time, I accidentally wrote Kong Yiji's B as another homonym," Hao told reporters. "But the marking teacher agreed that this composition was so excellent that this typo could be ignored, so this composition finally got full marks."
Family education and parents' cultivation of my independent study habits.
Hao was born in an intellectual family, and his parents were both middle school teachers.
"I have loved reading since I was a child. As long as I am interested, I have a whole shelf of books. Personally, I prefer the works of Lu Xun and Japanese writer Ryunosuke Akutagawa, such as Morning Flowers and Weeds, which I have been reading since junior high school. My parents are also more supportive. They will buy me any book I need. " Hao Shijia told reporters, "My parents basically give me free-range education and generally don't care about me, but if my behavior deviates too much, they will talk to me in time and give me correct guidance. This also cultivated my habit of autonomous learning. "
It is precisely because I love reading and will study consciously that Hao's composition has always been good. In junior high school, she won many awards in the composition competition held in the city. This year, her composition "Grow Slowly and Gracefully" won the second prize in the National Composition Competition.
Not only is his composition excellent, but Hao also does well in other subjects. When I was in high school, I was often the first in my class, and I took the first place in several grades.
She studies well and likes comics, prints and calligraphy. Her hard pen calligraphy won the first prize in Xinzhou District. Besides, she is also interested in sports. She often plays football, table tennis and badminton with her classmates. She joked that she was a "wonderful flower".
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Hao Shijia summed up his experience in writing a good composition: first, there should be no deviation in conception, otherwise it will be difficult to write a good composition. And don't stretch too much to avoid digression. Secondly, people should use short sentences instead of pursuing flowery rhetoric. They should turn to antique sentences, such as four-character phrases, which are written in imitation of classical Chinese.
The most important thing is the accumulation of materials. Hao admits that rote memorization before the exam is not as good as usual. He should read more classic articles, pay due attention to news events and have his own ideas. Read some books, both ancient and modern, historical and modern. Only in this way can you "write like a god" in your composition.
Hao scored 579 points this year, more than 60 points higher than a line. What major will Hao Shijia choose for full marks in his composition?
Talking about the future, Hao told reporters: "This time I applied for Chongqing University and planned to study architecture. Because I think I like ancient buildings very much. This is a new unknown field. My ideal is to be an ancient architect. "