In our ordinary daily life, many people have written comments. Comments refer to words for explanation or explanation. So, how to write a review? The following are 8 teacher's comment compositions that I have compiled. Welcome to read and collect. Teacher's comment composition 1
1. The theme is concise and concentrated, and the discussion is profound, powerful and shocking.
2. The words used in this article are accurate and rigorous, and the language is plain and natural, and the use of rhetoric such as metaphor and personification makes the article even more icing on the cake.
3. The main features of this composition are concrete narration, true details, vivid description and real feelings, and rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification are used to make it very vivid and express love for it. The full-text narrative is concentrated, without branches or tendrils, with simple and smooth language and sincere and touching feelings.
4. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off. The imagination of the article is reasonable, the narrative is natural and vivid, the structure is compact, the connection is natural and coherent, and the center is prominent.
5. The language is simple, the center is clear, the conception is reasonable, and the writing level is clear.
6. It's really commendable to be able to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly, leaving a deep impression on people. The article is coordinated from beginning to end, with clear center and complete structure.
7. The article is well-founded, persuasive, highlighting the personality of the characters, with natural context transition, clear organization, coordination from beginning to end, ending with a point and highlighting the central idea.
8. The author is careful in observation, delicate in description, lively in language and innovative in expression. The full text is simple in language and natural in structure. The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
9. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the echo between the beginning and the end is clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid and concrete, the paragraphs are clear, the language is simple and easy to understand.
1. A series of verbs that express the actions of characters are used accurately and well.
11. This paper adopts the first-person writing method, which has great advantages, plays a good role in shaping characters and expressing centers, and is friendly, natural and credible to read. Clear thinking and lively rhythm.
12. The process of this article is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description, fully expressing
13. The article narrates in children's language, which is natural and simple, just like a clear spring. The ending point played a finishing touch.
14. The articles are vivid and sincere, especially the articles on the right to use are very infectious and thought-provoking. Tell things clearly, use verbs correctly, and use metaphors appropriately and vividly. Make suggestions and get education from them after reading.
15. Simple and natural childlike innocence is embodied in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
16. With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing, this article expresses sincere praise for a beautiful mind.
17. There are three main advantages of this paper: this paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and write the process completely. Rigorous structure, focused. The language is simple, concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate. The beginning is concise and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which reflects the author's good language control ability. The characteristics of this essay can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.
18. The description in the article is fresh, lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article also have
19. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, manner and movements carefully and delicately. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are exhausted and the meaning is still unfinished.
2, the article will be written in detail, revealing the warmth like sunshine between the lines, so that the theme of the article will naturally sublimate to a higher level. Teacher's comments on composition 2
When you step into the school gate and meet the challenge of knowledge, who teaches you to learn by hand? Who patted you on the shoulder to praise you when you got good grades in your studies? When your grades are not satisfactory, who touches your hair and points out your shortcomings? It's the teacher
Teachers have a pair of unique hands.
The math teacher's hand is as magical as a magician. It can combine the four symbols+,-,×, and ÷ with 1 Arabic numerals, creating infinite charm, and introducing us naive children into the ever-changing knowledge hall. The math teacher has cultivated our thinking ability with these wonderful hands.
Chinese teachers can write neat pinyin letters by hand, so that we can know new words; Can write beautiful Chinese characters, let us imitate and practice; Be able to write vivid and fluent sentences, so that we can read aloud and learn ... Chinese teachers provide us with rich spiritual food with hard-working hands, and cultivate our reading ability, composition ability and language ability.
The art teacher's hands are amazing. In winter, you can "pick" flowers in spring; In summer, you can "pick" the fruits of autumn; The beautiful scenery in the distance can also be "moved" to a piece of white paper at any time ... The art teacher cultivated our aesthetic interest with dexterous and magical hands.
Ah, teachers have a pair of selfless hands! Winter: The teacher's hands are red with cold, but he still corrects our homework, so seriously. Midsummer: The sun is scorching, but the teacher still comes to the classroom without wiping the sweat on his face, and still works on the blackboard with those industrious hands ...
Teacher's hands! Like a superb sculptor, he is smart, magical and full of wisdom. I praised the teacher's hand.
simple comment: this paper mainly introduces the teacher's hand to readers. In the process of writing, the author can grasp the teaching characteristics of teachers in various subjects and describe them, which is the success of this paper. The narrative of the article is coherent, detailed and appropriate, and the end is straightforward, expressing praise for the teacher's hand. Teacher's comments on composition 3
Beginning of composition:
1. The language is concise and standardized, and the opening is attractive.
2, … begins with …, which is more innovative. The cause and effect are explained.
3. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Focus on description ... leave a deep impression.
4. It is quite original at the beginning. Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
5. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing. The language of the article is vivid and readable.
6. The beginning is lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.
7. The rhetorical question begins to attract readers.
8. Go straight to the point at the beginning, which makes people clear at a glance. It plays the role of leading the full text.
9. Point at the beginning and use attractive words. ... the combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and detailed.
1. The beginning of the article is novel and has the effect of taking the lead. Make readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
11. The beginning touches people's hearts and has a real feeling.
12. The article is novel in material selection, which arouses readers' desire to read on.
composition process:
1. With full passion, I described ...
2. The key points are prominent, the details are appropriate, and the contents are specific.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
4. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and it is very cordial to read.
5 ... told us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which was memorable.
6. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, natural and coherent connection and prominent center.
7. For the description of scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends.
8. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the characters' ideological quality is set off.
9. The article is lyrical while narrating.
1. Make full use of dynamic and static writing, supplemented by metaphor and personification.
11. The author observes carefully and narrates in an orderly way.
12. The use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.
13. The article is elegant, fluent and coherent, especially the characters' language is humorous.
14. The imagination of the article is reasonable.
15. Through vivid and vivid language description, readers feel as if they are in a dream.
16. The clue of the article is clear, the theme is prominent, and it is carried out closely around ….
17. The detailed description is quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
18. It is a major feature of this article to describe the characters' language, manner, movements, etc.
19. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and vivid sentences.
2. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
21. The stories are vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their identity characteristics.
22. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is real and interesting, and it is written with emotion.
23. The article writes … in detail.
24. The language is lively and interesting.
25. A large number of spoken English in life are used to make the article more natural and friendly.
26. Metaphors are used accurately. Ancient poems are added for association, which is full of charm. The metaphor of … is used skillfully.
27, using a variety of senses, description is very careful. Play wonderful imagination, use subtle metaphor.
28. The personification and metaphor full of childlike interest make the article shine. This description is touching to read.
29. The psychological description is exquisite, the figurative sentences are well used, the taste is attractive, and the artistic conception is far-reaching.
3. The metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid ... Tell us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is memorable.
End of the composition:
1. The end is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple and profound, which is thought-provoking.
2. switch with feeling and end with feeling. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and at the same time, the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
3. The praise to the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
4. The implicit ending of the article is both pertinent and intriguing.
5. Concentrate on expressing emotions at the end, taking care of the beginning and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
6. The vivid description of the details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
7. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of flavor.
8. at the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, which is really a clear pen and a summary, short and powerful.
9. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. The words are exhausted and the meaning is still unfinished.
1. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of the beauty of imagination and rhythm, which makes people want to read and love reading, and can't bear to put it down.
11. Although it is a trivial matter, the author describes it vividly, and the indispensable pen at the end highlights the theme of the article.
12. Although the story is ordinary, the feelings are sincere, abundant and touching.
13. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
14. The ending is clear and meaningful. Teacher's comments on composition 4
1. Your composition is really great! Make teachers feel ashamed of themselves. In the article, you not only describe several kinds of flowers in the spring garden in detail: winter jasmine, magnolia, apricot plum, but also grasp the characteristics of winter jasmine, focusing on its shape, color, smell and feelings. The metaphor and personification rhetoric can add to the article. Many wonderful sentences make people feel refreshed after reading them, all because of your meticulous observation and unique way of thinking. I hope I can read more of your "beautiful articles" in the future.
2. Your handwriting is standard, beautiful and generous, which is enviable. I wish you better and more attractive articles in your future writing and become a writer when you grow up. I wish you like "sesame blossoms-higher and higher."
3. It is rich in content and beautiful in sentences, which highlights the center of the article and expresses the thoughts and feelings of loving the campus. Your success further shows the importance of reading, so keep it up!
4. You have a wide reading range and a wide range of knowledge. You have achieved excellent results in this assignment, especially the quotation of beautiful sentences, which adds more color. You have to keep working hard!
5. Your metaphor is very apt. Comparing the moon to a sickle, image and concreteness shows that you are very creative.
6. "Flashback" can hold the reader's heart tightly and cause * * *. You used this writing method in this composition. You are really a good student who has applied what you have learned.
7. Your "Morning Campus" is structured in chronological order, grasping the morning reading, morning exercises, the early sun and other scenic spots, and it is written in detail and neatly.
8. The content of your composition is jumping from picture to picture, but the most important feature is the coherence of the content, which shows that you have carefully observed, performed well and conceived a complete story, which is worthy of being a masterpiece.
9. You used poetic language to reproduce the vitality and beauty of the Woods with all kinds of wonderful sounds, with rich imagination and vivid language.
1. You set suspense everywhere in this composition, which is very interesting to read. Learning more such writing methods will make your composition "icing on the cake".
11. You have carefully observed the flowers of "a bunch of red flowers", grasped the characteristics, and described the colors of the stems, leaves and flowers of "a bunch of red flowers" by using figurative sentences and anthropomorphic sentences, which shows how much you love this kind of flowers!
12. You have accumulated a lot of beautiful words, and you used a lot of them in this composition. Your handwriting is really beautiful. No wonder your classmates call you a calligrapher.
13. How apt your metaphor is and how vivid your parallelism is. If you write the ending in detail, wouldn't it be an excellent composition?
14. You wrote the shape of jasmine, showing the beautiful Chinese rose flowers to people, and how much you like jasmine, which made us love it.
15, your writing level is really fast! Writing flowers, young grass, trees and so on in such a concrete way shows us a vibrant spring beauty. Teacher's comment essay 5
Please ask the player who won the first prize to take the stage to receive the prize. In the majestic March of athletes and warm applause, I happily boarded the podium and proudly received the golden trophy and the red certificate from the judges and teachers. Ah, I finally got the first place in our county-level speech contest. Looking at the trophy in front of me, I couldn't help crying and thinking of the past. I want to thank my teacher,