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(Longyan City, 2004) Imitate the following sentences.
For example: where there is youth, there is a chic and romantic life; With youth, you have brilliance and brilliance.
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There are _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.
Reference answer: (It can be imitated from the perspectives of health, knowledge, network, happiness, affection and friendship. ) Example 1 With knowledge, you will have unlimited light and hope; With knowledge, you have unlimited strength and wealth. With friendship, there is understanding and support; With friendship, you have happiness and warmth. If you have the internet, you have time and space. With the internet, you have a world and a dream.
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(Foshan, 2004) Write another thing according to the following bamboo format and ideas.
bamboo
Empty has a gorgeous appearance, but there is no solid connotation.
Reference answer: requirements: the idea should be written critically; The format should be written as a turning point.
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(Henan Province in 2004) Write two more sentences according to the characteristics of the underlined sentences below.
Extracurricular reading is an important way to improve Chinese level, which can give us a lot of useful enlightenment and enrich our lives. Reading Romance of the Three Kingdoms, we can appreciate Zhuge Liang's elegant rhetoric. Only by reading How Steel was Tempered can we understand the true meaning and significance of life. ;
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Reference answer: For example, reading Journey to the West can learn from the Monkey King's hatred of evil; Reading A Dream of Red Mansions, we can realize the inevitability of the decline of the big family in feudal society. Reading Gulliver's Travels, we learned about the corruption and evil of the British ruling class at that time; Reading Childhood, we realized the sufferings of the lower class people in Russia at that time. Reading Water Margin, we can feel what America used to be like.
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(Heilonggang Province, 2004) Write another sentence after imitating the following two sentences, requiring consistent sentence patterns and coherent meaning.
Let's do the flower business and pass on the fragrance to others; Do the leaf business and push the flowers through our bodies. , 。
Reference answer: Let's do the cause of soil and cultivate thousands of flowers into deep roots.
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(Xiamen, 2005) Imitate the writing of example sentences and continue to write a sentence to express your deep affection for Xiamen, a beautiful bay city.
If I were a composer, I would use notes to convey the endless waves in Xiamen;
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Example 1: If I were a painter, I would paint the charming scenery of Xiamen with a brush. Example 2: If I were a poet, I would express my infinite affection for Xiamen with poetry.
Playback 6:
Quanzhou (2005) Please pair with dual knowledge. (Select to complete together)
Part I: Rolling waves accumulate wealth
Downlink:
Shanglian:
Bottom line: the ocean is the granary of human future.
Reference answer: for example: ① looking for a bosom friend in the vast sea of people; The Antarctic is the last pure land on the earth.
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(Southwest Special Zone, 2005) Carefully consider the following two paragraphs and write another paragraph according to the content and form.
If you can make a flower happy, please don't break it with your own hands at will, then this flower will also make you happy and send you an intoxicating warmth when you are depressed and upset.
If you can make a stream happy, please don't trample it with the filth of life at will, then the stream will also make you happy and bring you a handful of sweet dew when you are thirsty.
Reference answer: If you can make a grass happy, please don't trample it with your own feet at will, then the grass will also make you happy and give you a touch of new green when you are yellow everywhere.
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(Wuhan, 2005) Imitate underlined sentences and fill in two sentences in the blank to form a parallelism sentence.
Love of reading is a virtue. People who have made great achievements in the world and made special contributions to mankind are almost all people who love reading. Reading makes people active and smart; ; ;
Reading gives wings to your thoughts and buds to your feelings.
Reference answer: reading makes people open-minded and open-minded; Reading makes people look far and aim high.
Ability development training
Training 1:
(Hechi City, 2004) Follow the example and fill in the appropriate words on the horizontal line. Flowers have pushed open the door of spring.
Push open the door of summer; Push open the door of autumn.
Reference answer: As long as you can write words that reflect the characteristics of summer and autumn, you can add points (such as: green leaves, green trees, shade; Rice, Maple Leaf, Fruit ................................)
Training 2:
(Ezhou, 2004) Write a sentence according to the following example.
The seed waits in the soil because it longs for sunshine; The stream is waiting in the running, because its heart is connected with the sea; ________________________,_________________________。
Reference answer: The bird waits in flight because it yearns for the blue sky.
Training 3:
Jingzhou City (2004) freely chose a specific image, and created a "famous saying" by using the method of "writing things".
Example-Ship: Always live in a storm, but never stop because of it.
Reference answer:
Training 4:
Jingzhou City (2004) imitated and continued to write a "I like" sentence in a specific context.
My heart is always full of too many likes. I like listening to the footsteps in spring, and I know that if I don't like it, it means not cherishing fresh flowers and green grass; I like to appreciate the face of the earth, and I know that if I don't like it, it means I don't love mountains and shallow waters; , , 。
Reference answer:
Training 5:
(Chenzhou City, 2004) Bad behavior will affect our physical and mental health. Imitate the example, please point out the harm of the following bad behavior with concise and appropriate sentences. (Choose a question to answer)
Example: Walking into a black Internet cafe is jumping into a harmful trap.
Drug abuse and drug trafficking-drug abuse is suicide, drug trafficking is murder.
Gambling—
Puppy love-
Reference answer:
Training 6:
During Teacher's Day (Wuxi City, 2004), a classmate sent such a congratulatory message to the teacher to express his praise and respect for the teacher:
You know everything from ancient times to the present, like the long river of history, leads us to pursue infinite knowledge. (History teacher)
Please imitate the above sentences and write a sentence for a teacher.
Reference answer:
Training 7:
(Zhou Nan, 2005) According to the following language materials, use antithesis knowledge to make a couplet.
In spring, when the lake is full, the lake is the same color as the sky, and the ship is in the lake, such as the sky; In autumn, the mountains are colorful and picturesque, and people roam in the mountains as if they were walking in a painting.
The first part is: spring boat sitting in the sky;
The bottom line is:
Reference answer: people in autumn are like traveling in a world of pictorial.
Training 8:
(Hechi City, 2005) Write a sentence according to the example, and the content is self-determined. (2 points)
Ex.: People love spring, the revival of everything, the spring and vitality.
Imitate:
People love life, her flowery years, her colorful colors and her myriad changes.
Training 9:
(Huanggang City, 2005) Read the following paragraph and answer the questions as required.
What is sincerity? Sincerity is the sun hanging in the sky, which gives out brilliant hopes every day. Answer.
What is sincerity? Sincerity is a poplar tree on the Gobi Desert, which writes the greatness and persistence of life inch by inch. I love sincerity, I love it like a bamboo fence on the side of a broken bridge outside a post; Love it like a small bridge running water c; Love it like Mejuran Cuvi; Love it as frankly as Lanting preface; Love it like a mountain running water e; Love it as delicate as cornice cloister. ...
(1) Imitate the sentences before and after and write similar sentences on the horizontal line at A in the text.
Supplement:
(2) According to the context, choose appropriate words to fill in the BCDE of the text.
① Agitation ② Indifference ③ Quiet ④ Noble.
Reference answer: (1) For example: What is sincerity? Sincerity is a beautiful flower in the garden, which exudes the vitality and greenery of spring after spring. (rhetorical devices such as rhetorical questions and metaphors are used, and the sentence pattern is complete and the meaning is clear. )⑵B③C②D④E①
Training 10:
(Huanggang City, 2005) Read the following paragraph and fill in the appropriate words on the lines.
Life needs the call of ideals. When you are lazy, it calls you to be diligent; When you are asleep, it calls you; When you are arrogant, it calls you; When you are reckless, it calls you; It will call you when you fall.
Reference answer: sober, modest (modest, humble), cautious (careful), stand up (standing).
Training 1 1:
(Laixi City, 2005) Please copy the sentences according to the examples, using the same format and rhetorical methods as the examples.
For example, if the wisdom of nature is the sea, then the wisdom of human beings is just a drop in the ocean.
Imitation sentence:
For example, if the national interest is Mount Tai, then the personal interest is just a pebble on Mount Tai.
Training 12:
(Yuxi, 2005) Imitation.
When we praise the vastness of the sea, will we think of the ups and downs and perseverance in the running of rivers? If we praise, will we think of it? If we praise, will we think of it?
Reference answer: for example: the grandeur of the mountain, the length and silence in the accumulation of earth and stone; Beautiful scenery, hardships and prosperity in the growth of all things (only the first half of the sentence is not given)
Training 13:
(Hangzhou, 2005) Imitate underlined sentences according to the context, and then write two sentences to form a coherent paragraph.
Reading the heavens and the earth and listening to the sounds, nature gives people ardent expectations all year round. Spring is full of vitality, beautiful, charming and touching; Summer, with her enthusiasm, enthusiasm and tenacity, inspires people to work hard; ;
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Reference answer:
(Chongqing 2005) Training 14:
Write two more sentences according to the example.
The delicate and gentle spring rain clothed Shan Ye with beautiful clothes;
Thunder in summer, swift and violent, sounded the warm drum of life;
Autumn wind,;
Snow in winter.
Reference answer:. In line with the meaning of the question, the sentence is fluent, and personification rhetoric is used. (For example, the autumn wind is cool and pleasant, sending warm greetings to the fallen leaves; The snow in winter is kind and warm, which brings affectionate care to crops. )
Reading is good.
When I was a child, I heard from my grandfather that reading books is beneficial and reading more. Hearing this sentence, I nodded immodestly. When I grow up, I know that "opening a book is beneficial" means opening a book is beneficial. Only then did I understand the meaning of that sentence that grandpa said in those days.
With the rapid development of science and technology, all walks of life need scientific and cultural knowledge. Where does this knowledge come from? Most of them come from books. In today's society, it is difficult for people without rich knowledge to find a way out. In the early days of China's reform and opening up, some people with little education became "nouveau riche" by their wealth, courage and cleverness, but today they have all declined. Why? Because they have no culture after all, they can only "explode" for a while. At that time, some educated intellectuals still lived a poor life, but today, those intellectuals who lived a poor life have become rich. They are richer than those "nouveau riche". Why is this? Because they have culture and understand science, they can keep up with the pace of social development. Even standing at the forefront of the development of the times, those uneducated "nouveau riche" can only be spurned by modern society.
Reading can make people know what is true, good and beautiful, understand some principles of being a man, and make people noble in moral quality.
People with profound knowledge and noble morality can always be respected by the world. When reading, we can enjoy the most beautiful feelings and get the greatest happiness. Reading can purify people's minds, cultivate people's sentiments, create spiritual wealth and lay a solid foundation for the construction of socialist spiritual civilization. On the contrary, people who don't study get nothing, and their spiritual world is empty and poor. People who read "bad books" may lead to moral corruption, harm society and be despised by the world.
The benefits of reading are endless. We teenagers should read more books, read good books, arm ourselves with knowledge and be successors to the socialist cause. (Note: This article is a composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Wuhan)
1. The use of quotation marks in this article is quite confusing. Please give two examples where quotation marks should not be used.
( 1)__________________。 (2)___________________。
2. The underlined words in the text are wrong, please correct them.
"Ignorance" is changed to _ _ _ _ _ _, and "spurning" is changed to _ _ _ _ _ _ _.
3. The underlined sentence in the second paragraph is not concise enough, and at least four places can be deleted. Please point out four places that can be deleted in order.
( 1)__________ __,
(2)________________,
(3)_______ _____,
(4)_________________。
4. The following sentence has ideological defects, please correct it.
When I grow up, I know that "opening a book is beneficial" means opening a book is beneficial.
In order to be consistent with the previous paragraph, please add a sentence before this sentence.
6. Apart from the eliminated materials, what are the problems in selecting materials in the second stage? Please analyze the reasons. (4 points)
7. Instructional design >; There is a lack of cohesion between the two contents in the main body of the article. Please use a compound sentence with progressive relationship to draw up a transitional sentence connecting the preceding with the following.
Reference answer:
1. Answer "way out", "smart" and "bad book". 2. Seemingly ignorant (or "confused"); Give up (or "eliminate") 3. "Educated", "at that time" and "living in poverty" must be answered; "people who need cultural knowledge" and "compared with those' nouveau riche'" are optional answers. (You must answer in order, otherwise you won't score. When I grow up, I know that "reading well" means reading more. The connotation and teaching design of "opening books is beneficial" should be interpreted; The title of the article was revised. Of course, reading should also be selective. As long as you can relate to the context, overcome the problem of digression in the last sentence. ) 6. There is no substance around the center. The materials selected in this paragraph can only explain the truth that cultural knowledge makes people rich, which is far from the theme of "reading well" 7. Reading can not only acquire knowledge, but also cultivate sentiment. (or "reading can not only create material wealth, but also create spiritual wealth." ) (Don't use progressive complex sentences or don't score if the number of words exceeds 25)
Classic wonderful topic playback
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There are language errors in the following horizontal line in Chongqing (2004), please correct them in turn. (4 points)
(1) the glorious history that a nation should recall; ② It will stabilize and improve the present real life. (3) People sublimate and illuminate the present life by recalling the hardships and brilliant achievements experienced by their ancestors. National life, like personal life, is extremely valuable experience wealth. This rich experience, if properly used, will lead to social progress and development; On the contrary, if abused or misused, it will lead to fantasy, confusion and failure.
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(Guangdong Province, 2004) The underlined sentences in the following paragraph are all wrongly selected or misspelled. Please correct them in the original text.
At present, the green lung of the earth-(1) forest is shrinking day by day. (2) In the past 200 years, about one third of the forests on the earth have been cut down and destroyed. On the other hand, (3) Due to the increase of burning materials on the earth, the emission of carbon dioxide is increasing strongly. This trade-off has worsened the ecological environment of the earth. This leads to global warming, and (4) it has a great impact on human production and life, and even threatens human survival.
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Reference answer: ① Change "appointment" to "wither". ② "About" and "About" are duplicated, and one of them is deleted. ③ Improper collocation of "strong increase" is changed to "sudden increase" or "big increase". ④ Change "and" to "and" or "and".
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(Anhui Province, 2004) Answer the questions as required.
According to statistics, there are about 120 species of birds in the Arctic region, most of which are migratory birds, with less than one tenth of the total number of resident birds. ② In contrast, there are only 43 species of birds in Antarctica, and the only permanent "residents" are penguins and skua. About one-sixth of birds living in the northern hemisphere will go to the North Pole to breed. According to an ornithologist who has observed and studied the Arctic grassland for more than ten years, there are migratory birds from all over the world in the Arctic region of Alaska alone. The Arctic is a paradise for almost all the birds waiting in the world. In the Antarctic, the albatross flies farthest, but it only makes a long-distance migration around the Antarctic. ⑦ This is because the Arctic not only has vast grasslands and abundant food, but also has a quiet and clean environment, which is rarely disturbed by human beings. So many migratory birds in the southern hemisphere today would rather fly from Wan Li to the North Pole for the winter than die in the South Pole.
(1) One word should be deleted from the underlined part of the first sentence: _ _ _ _.
(2) The idiom similar to the word "live" in the fourth sentence is _ _ _
(3) In the second paragraph, the sentence irrelevant to the center of this article is the first sentence.
Please draw up a suitable title for this article.
Reference answer:
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(Kunming, 2004) Read the "original manuscript" and "revised manuscript" in the following paragraphs and complete the following questions as required.
Original manuscript: Chunhua Qiushi (excerpt)
Throughout the world, immature and innocent children's voices are innocent beauty, and young people's lofty aspirations are only the beauty of keys. But aren't those middle-aged people who are conscientious in their work, meticulous in their children, sincere in making friends, filial to their parents and showing maturity and wisdom like this? Isn't it beautiful that there are groups of old people singing loudly and walking hand in hand in the forest?
In fact, every stage of life has its most attractive characteristics, but people are often complacent at different times, or lament that time flies and youth is gone. I really want to tell the old and middle-aged people, "to see the sun, for all his glory, buried by the coming night". Young friends should make full use of their own spring, so that flower of life can finally bear mature fruits.
The former view has been changed by a fruit, and I think the current experience may still be out of line with the trend of young people. But I will try my best to play my own life music!
Revised Draft: Chunhua Qiushi (Excerpt)
All over the world; Young and innocent teenagers have the beauty of innocence, young people with lofty sentiments have the beauty of sunshine, and white-haired old people have the beauty of maturity. Every stage of life has its own wonderful. How can I say which is beautiful and which is ugly?
Every fruit was once a flower, but not every flower can be a fruit. /
Every successful middle-aged and elderly person has had a glorious life, an extraordinary history of struggle, and worked hard on the road to success. If we young people who are in the flower season are obsessed with our own beauty and can't cherish the good times and work hard like our parents, then "flowers" will naturally become "fruits". This is something that each of us young people must remember.
I hope all "spring flowers" can be "autumn fruits".
There are two typos in the first paragraph of the manuscript. Please find and correct them:
Change; Change.
27. Why did the revised draft delete the introduction of "to see the sun, for all his glory, buried in the coming night"?
28. The last paragraph of the manuscript was changed to "I hope all' spring flowers' can be' autumn fruits'." What are the benefits of this change?
29. Compared with the original, what are the advantages of the revised draft in terms of content, structure and language?
Content:
Structure:
Language:
Reference answer:
Playback 5:
(Yulin City, 2005) Instructional Design >: Article Revision
Xijiang diaojiaolou
Xijiang, known as "Thousand Miao Villages", is the most distinctive one.
Xijiang is the first Miao village in China. The diaojiao building here has a bronze appearance, giving people an antique feeling. Thousands of Miao villages, dense, layered, from the foot of the mountain to halfway up the mountain. The cobblestone path is winding and intricate, and extends to people's homes in the diaojiao building accurately. The road starts with the village, and the village depends on the road, which complements each other and is full of fun. (1) through the village, people don't distinguish things, such as fascinating "gossip". (2) The diaojiao building was carefully designed by Miao craftsmen according to local conditions. They are built on the mountain, supported by wooden pillars, half of which are placed on the mountain, half of which are suspended in the air, and one is next to the other. They are spectacular and have to be amazing. This kind of wooden building is generally divided into three floors: the first floor is used to raise livestock or store farm tools, the second floor is the hall, living room, guest room and kitchen, and the top floor is used to store grains and some unusual things. The most distinctive feature is the "beauty leaning" near the window of the main room, which is made up of 35 small wooden strips about 3 cm wide and looks like a crescent moon. Sitting, lying and leaning are very comfortable. When people are tired, they can overlook the railings and have a panoramic view of the vast mountains. Suddenly, your fatigue will "vanish". Standing at the gate of Xijiang Village, I look at this ancient village with a history of more than 700 years, but I can see the gorgeous and fragrant wildflowers on both sides of the village, which are particularly charming against the green background. The rippling white water river passes through the village, emitting millions of rainbows, which makes people enchanted; Smoke billows from kitchen chimneys and trees shaded by ancient trees really make people doubt that they have entered Tao Yuanming's Peach Blossom Garden: in the autumn, red peppers, Huang Chengcheng corn and golden pumpkins are hung on railings and pillars, and girls dressed in Miao silver are embroidering on the "Beauty Lean", talking and laughing, which makes people feel the authentic local flavor and simple folk customs. At this time, from a distance on the unique wind and rain bridge of Xijiang River, the misty smoke and the looming shadow of Mulou Village seem like a castle in the air, a fairy-like scene, more like a giant ink painting scroll in the hands of a painter, and also like a masterpiece that photographers and artists are proud of.
Watch the beautiful natural scenery such as Xijiang Diaojiao Building and Miao Village, and you will feel an unspeakable joy and enjoyment.
1. The four words added in the article are all quotation marks, and one word without quotation marks is.
2. The three underlined sentences in this article are either wrong or not perfect. Please correct me.
(1) changed to.
(2) changed to.
(3) changed to.
3. From the text, teaching design >; The title of this article is not appropriate enough. Please draw up another title for this article.
Please write a 50- 100 word comment on the advantages or disadvantages of this article. Requirements: (1) Just select a certain point for evaluation, and you don't have to cover everything; (2) There should be concrete examples and analysis, which should not be vague; ⑶ Evaluate the contents involved in items 17 and 18.
Reference answer: 1. Disappear 2. ① Change to: Walking through the village, people can't tell things apart, such as entering a fascinating "Eight Diagrams Array". ② The place is changed to: Diaojiaolou is an elaborate teaching design designed and built by Miao craftsmen according to local conditions. (3) The place was changed to: smoke from kitchen chimneys curled up and the ancient shade hung low. 3. Such as: Xijiang Miao Village scenery; The charming "Thousand Miao Villages"; Miao village customs; Xijiang "Qianhu Miao Village" style; Xijiang "Thousand Miao Villages"-the unique scenery here 4.
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(Southwest Region, 2005) The following paragraph is taken from Selected Works, which has many defects. Please modify it as required.
(1) Art needs innovation. (2) Not only have detailed teaching design >; Design, theme selection and plot structure should also be innovative; Actors' performance and lens processing should also be innovative, but this aspect is old-fashioned. (3) There are too many formulas. (4) For example, in detective films, major cases always occur in "Binhai City", "Hai 'an City" and "Linjiang City", which seems to be the most unstable place in the country, and there is no sea near the river. (5) Another example is an actor's performance. His hands are always shaking with excitement. When you are sad, you will lie down and cry. Run away in the rain when you are wronged; When you are angry, you will break the cup; Showing a harmonious family relationship, he always pays no attention to hygiene, reaches for the food on the plate, and then the person who carries the plate always hits him gently ... this is really common. (6) The audience can guess the next shot after watching the last shot, and know the result after watching the beginning. (7) How can such a film attract the audience? (8) It is puzzling that in the selection of Golden Rooster Awards for Chinese films, our judges have a preference for such films, which makes these mediocre films win awards repeatedly.
(1) There are four typos in the article, please pick out two of them and correct them.
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(2) According to the relationship between the central sentence and the supporting sentence, modify the sentence (1) into an appropriate central sentence.
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(3) The first _ _ _ _ _ sentence in the article is not concise enough, so the word "_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (1) is used.
(4) There is a sentence in the article that is out of the center. This sentence is _ _ _ _ (fill in the serial number)
Reference answer: (1) Stop-Stop, V-V, Bend-Bend, Just-Touch (2) Movies need innovation. (3) sentence (5); "Cry on your stomach" or "Cry bitterly" (4) (8)