When I first arrived on the road, I saw a sea of people on the road. The whole road has become a "sidewalk", and there is no end to the crowd at a glance.
And mom and dad joined Desheng Street in Guangming District with the crowd. I saw the big archway on Desheng Street, colorful, with "ten million" golden flashes hanging on the "high altitude" of six or seven meters, like a waterfall. It's really "doubtful that the golden river will fall." Gee, this is the first time I've seen so many strange lights. I can't even see it. Look, those colorful lanterns are really pleasing to the eye. There is a red "five-pointed star", a "cockerel" with its head held high, and a lively and lovely "little monkey" ... Look at that proud phoenix. Two round spherical eyes emit white light. It's beautiful. Keep your eyes open.
The children walked on, only to hear the song "You want to hear where you are …" coming from somewhere. That must be the propaganda of the mobile communication company. Sure enough, there is a stage ahead. Although it is empty, there is a mobile phone next to it. (quite vivid, you can tell it is a mobile phone advertisement at a glance. ) There are animations on the mobile phone screen. Oh, no wonder I heard this song. I saw Jay Chou singing hard with a microphone on the screen! It seems that Lantern Festival is not only beautiful, but also full of business opportunities.
Jay Chou had just been sent away when Dao Lang came again. Because the familiar melody "The first snow in 2002 came later than before" is really leisurely. It turned out to be an advertisement for Jiuqu Yellow River Array. Look at the zigzag Yellow River array, turning left and right, which is extremely exquisite. Just like on the road of life, although you turn left and right, you will eventually go out and win.
The moon gradually sank in the west and reluctantly left. But the people watching the lights are still in an endless stream, and all kinds of colored lights shine like stars in the sky. It's really "getting drunk with lanterns all night, just because of spring."
Comments: The article describes the scenes and scenes of enjoying lanterns in the Lantern Festival, with certain scenery description and psychological description, which captures the characteristics of the Lantern Festival and is very detailed and clear. And can be extended to the topic of life, without trace, smooth and natural. The use of language is also good, and the quotation is more appropriate.
The Lantern Festival in 2008 is different from the previous Lantern Festival, because with the development of economy, people are getting richer and more beautiful. Last night, I went shopping with my parents to watch the lights. Although the weather in the north is extremely cold, the cold can't stop people's enthusiasm.
When I first arrived on the road, I saw a sea of people on the road. The whole road has become a "sidewalk", and there is no end to the crowd at a glance.
And mom and dad joined Desheng Street in Guangming District with the crowd. I saw the big archway on Desheng Street, colorful, with "ten million" golden flashes hanging on the "high altitude" of six or seven meters, like a waterfall. It's really "doubtful that the golden river will fall." Gee, this is the first time I've seen so many strange lights. I can't even see it. Look, those colorful lanterns are really pleasing to the eye. There is a red "five-pointed star", a "cockerel" with its head held high, and a lively and lovely "little monkey" ... Look at that proud phoenix. Two round spherical eyes emit white light. It's beautiful. Keep your eyes open.
The children walked on, only to hear the song "You want to hear where you are …" coming from somewhere. That must be the propaganda of the mobile communication company. Sure enough, there is a stage ahead. Although it is empty, there is a mobile phone next to it. (quite vivid, you can tell it is a mobile phone advertisement at a glance. ) There are animations on the mobile phone screen. Oh, no wonder I heard this song. I saw Jay Chou singing hard with a microphone on the screen! It seems that Lantern Festival is not only beautiful, but also full of business opportunities.
Jay Chou had just been sent away when Dao Lang came again. Because the familiar melody "The first snow in 2002 came later than before" is really leisurely. It turned out to be an advertisement for Jiuqu Yellow River Array. Look at the zigzag Yellow River array, turning left and right, which is extremely exquisite. Just like on the road of life, although you turn left and right, you will eventually go out and win.
The moon gradually sank in the west and reluctantly left. But the people watching the lights are still in an endless stream, and all kinds of colored lights shine like stars in the sky. It's really "getting drunk with lanterns all night, just because of spring."
Comments: The article describes the scenes and scenes of enjoying lanterns in the Lantern Festival, with certain scenery description and psychological description, which captures the characteristics of the Lantern Festival and is very detailed and clear. And can be extended to the topic of life, without trace, smooth and natural. The use of language is also good, and the quotation is more appropriate.
2. A composition of 600 words describing the movements of the characters. Swim fast is the top priority. In the eyes of many people, it is a happy and fun thing, but in my eyes, it is full of horror and black. Because I am most afraid of water entering my eyes and can't hold my breath, I have always been uninterested in swimming. It was not until that day that I changed my mind.
That day, I was dragged to the swimming pool in Wales by my grandfather. I am fully armed, put on swimming trunks, goggles, nose clips and earplugs, and of course, my hope-swimming ring. When I was ready, I walked into the hall. The first thing I saw was water and people. Watching those adults swimming around in the water tickles their hearts and wants to swim. I jumped into the water like a tiger. "Boom!" 1, I fell into the water and found that I didn't bring my swimming ring. I quickly held my breath and my body slowly floated up. After this lesson, I am not afraid, but more courageous. I held my breath and scratched my hands and feet. People who don't know think I'm crazy! I kept splashing water on grandpa, completely forgetting that I had reached the deep water area. Suddenly, grandpa dived into the water, grandpa put me underwater, and I lay on my back. Only then did I know how warm and comfortable the water was, and it was like a mother's hand stroking you. I began to like water and swimming.
Time flies. At four o'clock, I was still in the water and could not bear to leave. I didn't climb out of the water until my hands and feet were numb at last. Get dressed and find that the life buoy is useless today. Stay in the storage box and wait for me.
Swimming is very interesting and full of fun. I didn't know it until that day. From then on, I like swimming.
3. A composition of 600 words describing the movements of the characters. Swim fast is the top priority. In the eyes of many people, it is a happy and fun thing, but in my eyes, it is full of horror and black.
Because I am most afraid of water entering my eyes and can't hold my breath, I have always been uninterested in swimming. It was not until that day that I changed my mind.
That day, I was dragged to the swimming pool in Wales by my grandfather. I am fully armed, put on swimming trunks, goggles, nose clips and earplugs, and of course, my hope-swimming ring. When I was ready, I walked into the hall. The first thing I saw was water and people.
Watching those adults swimming around in the water tickles their hearts and wants to swim. I jumped into the water like a tiger. "Boom!" 1, I fell into the water and found that I didn't bring my swimming ring.
I quickly held my breath and my body slowly floated up. After this lesson, I am not afraid, but more courageous. I held my breath and scratched my hands and feet. People who don't know think I'm crazy! I kept splashing water on grandpa, completely forgetting that I had reached the deep water area. Suddenly, grandpa dived into the water, grandpa put me underwater, and I lay on my back.
Only then did I know how warm and comfortable the water was, and it was like a mother's hand stroking you. I began to like water and swimming.
Time flies. At four o'clock, I was still in the water and could not bear to leave. I didn't climb out of the water until my hands and feet were numb at last. Get dressed and find that the life buoy is useless today. Stay in the storage box and wait for me. Swimming is very interesting and full of fun. I didn't know it until that day. From then on, I like swimming.
4. Composition describing the movements of characters 1. 1949 One night at the end of September, a tall China man quickly set foot on a ship bound for France.
When he walked through the fog of a small English canyon and stepped onto the deck against the sea breeze, he could see that his steps were steady and vigorous; The span of his every step is always 0.85 meters-this is the habit formed by his years of geological work and long-term field investigation. Every step he usually takes has actually become a ruler to measure the earth and calculate the distance between rocks.
2. At the crossroads, there is an old woman with a slight hunchback and a fat figure, who is struggling to walk on the empty road with an umbrella. The wind came at me with heavy rain. She bent forward hard, grabbed the umbrella, stepped back half a step and staggered forward.
3. A group of Dai girls are carrying small spinning wheels on their shoulders, holding small lanterns in their hands, and their tight skirts are swaying in the wind. Their figure is so slim, their steps are so light and their manners are so generous, as if a group of beautiful fairies descended from the sky.
4, "Rinrin", off work. My brother immediately turned off the machine tool and strode into the water next to his head. In an instant, those "black hands" covered with oil turned white.
He came to the carport in three steps and made two steps, and started the "flying pigeon". As soon as his left foot stepped on the pedal of his bicycle, his right thigh crossed the cushion. Before he could sit still, he screamed, kicked off the car, and the flying pigeon rushed out of the factory door and roared off. The action of running is 1. The young man ran well, from the initial sprint to the constant running on the way.
He ran with his head held high like a pony: his stride was symmetrical, his stride frequency was compact, his pedaling was strong, and his waist was relaxed-the whole movement was elegant and elastic. 2. Xuan Shi's steps are even, his arms swing back and forth, and his steps are getting faster and faster. He leans forward as if he were going to fall down and struggles to run forward quickly.
At the end of the race, she held her head high and stood out, and finally won the first prize. 3. In the first winter training of Lang Ping's volleyball career, the coaches began to give Lang Ping a "small stove".
Long-distance running-Lang Ping ran round and round the 400-meter track ... his head was swollen, his chest ached and his legs could not be lifted. Stop? Don't! The brain gives clear instructions and moves on ... Sweat has wet the hair into locks, and the sweat flows from the forehead to the mouth, which is bitter and astringent. How I want to lie on the runway at once and stretch my limbs to relax! Suddenly, a strange smile climbed up the corner of her mouth-she suddenly remembered that when she was a child, she always looked forward to tasting the taste of not jumping again, and now she really tasted it, bitter and astringent.
As soon as the shot rang, the two girls rushed forward like arrows. Their movements are coordinated and powerful, flying briskly on the ice, just like two swallows flying close to the ground, and you can't give in to each other.
Finally, under the enthusiastic cheers of the coach and the audience, they rushed across the finish line almost at the same time. Hand movements 1. I just opened the textbook and suddenly saw a picture under the glass plate.
"Deer, my favorite sika deer, draw it." I thought to myself, open the painting, pick up the brush, divide three times five by two and tick off a deer.
However, because I didn't observe it carefully, I painted the deer head as a child's head. How much is not beautiful! Erase the repaint, but draw it to the right.
I had to draw another duck swimming in the river on the left side of the paper and "twist" the deer's head to make it look at the duck. I've finished painting. It's really good.
In the fifth grade, I joined a calligraphy interest group. Under the guidance of my tutor, I picked up a brush dipped in black juice for the first time. According to the instructor's instructions: the index finger and middle finger are stuck outside the pen container, and the ring finger and little finger are stuck inside the pen container.
I write carefully one by one. A point, a horizontal, a vertical, a si.
But it's outrageous. It was clearly painted by a three-year-old child. A little, it is a thick ink group; A horizontal, winding like a small snake; A vertical one, but as thick as an elephant's legs and feet in art; A slap is even more outrageous, like a bald broom that has long been scrapped.
I looked at my masterpiece and smiled. These strokes are uneven and asymmetrical, not to mention the shelf structure.
But the tutor said, "well written!" It seems that you have a bright future. If you practice hard, you will succeed in the future. " 3. I saw a male classmate come up to the stage, quietly spread out a roll of white paper, raised a brush full of thick ink, meditated a little, and painted while flying like a phoenix.
With the constant bleeding of the brush, a lifelike horse appeared on the drawing paper. It holds its head high and goes forward bravely, showing an irresistible force.
4. Disgusting "smelly elder sister", so nobody cares, do you want to ruin my experiment? I gave my finger a heavy flick. Who knows it didn't bounce off, but it angered this "smelly elder sister". It immediately gave off an unpleasant smell and made me run back to the house, covering my nose.
The room is quiet, only the TV is ringing. Dad suddenly grabbed the corner of the table with a wave of his hand.
1 of "beep", slapped on the table, bowls, plates and chopsticks all jumped up, and the glass at the corner of the table fell to the ground and broke. 6. Holding a small hazelnut in one hand and a heavy pair of pliers in the other, look directly at the hazelnut.
The pliers drop slowly, but they often hit one side. After a while, their hands were smashed several times. There was a painful expression on her face.
7. xu teacher teaches us Chinese. She holds chalk in her dexterous hands every day and writes carefully on the blackboard. We can't help imitating her handwriting in our notebooks.
After Haitao found the sparrow's nest, he put a flashlight in his waist, spat on his hand and climbed up. Before climbing to the sparrow's nest, he lowered his head and said to us, "Hey, look carefully and get ready to catch sparrows!" " "Say that finish, he stood on another branch and straightened up.
Unexpectedly, the sparrow's head hit the sparrow's nest and got a fright. There was a creeping sound from the nest, and then several sparrows rushed out desperately. Haitao was in a hurry and reached for one.
He took a photo of the nest with his flashlight, and there was only one left, which may not be crowded out, chirping. Haitao reached out and grabbed another one. He put it in a plastic bag and threw it in front of Xiao Pang. Xiao pang happily picked it up and took the sparrow from.
5. Wonderful composition describing characters 600 my most admired Chinese teacher.
The teacher in our class is a very beautiful female teacher. She is slim, with black hair, pouring down from her head like a waterfall, soft and charming, fashionable and free and easy, full of youthful vitality and charm. Her kind eyes can see everything, as if they know what we are thinking. Her nose is slender and straight, and her inner nose is very elegant. Lips are thin and moist, revealing alertness and aura. There are often two sweet dimples on the corners of the mouth.
He Laoshi is the Chinese teacher in our class. Her lectures are emotional and vivid, bringing students into the scene of the text. When telling beautiful scenery, people's hearing is full of poetry and painting; Speaking of happiness, people can't help but be elated; Speaking of sadness, it actually makes people cry.
I admire He Laoshi because she has a spirit of striving for perfection and not being ashamed to ask questions. Sometimes I don't understand, so I humbly ask other old teachers for advice. I have always said, "knowing is knowing, and not knowing is not knowing." This is our teacher's pragmatic and refined knowledge, and she never has a little knowledge, so she deeply loves the love and admiration of her classmates. Because of her solid and serious teaching and remarkable achievements, she has been rated as an excellent class teacher and advanced teacher in the county for many times and won many awards in academic discussions. Nevertheless, when we give her opinions and suggestions, the teacher will accept them with an open mind, and then try her best to continuously improve the teaching methods and water our hearts with the sweet spring of knowledge.
Once, I finished writing and handed in my homework in the office. Later, when the teacher corrected the homework, he found that the word "Liu" I wrote was three points of water, so he called me to the office and said, "Zhou, I remember that the word" Liu "in skating is next to the word" foot ". Is it really a three-point water? " I said to the teacher, "I ran back to the classroom and took the Chinese book to the teacher." After reading it, the teacher said to me, "Oh! It turned out that I was wrong. Sorry, I was wrong about you. "
He Laoshi is such a good teacher who studies with an open mind and loves his students deeply.
6. The composition describing the action is 600 words. "Sneak into the night with the wind and moisten things silently."
How well Du Fu wrote this poem! Yes, after the severe winter, the spring rain came quietly to the world like smoke. He urged the earth to wake up, and he added vitality to spring.
Whenever this time, I like to walk in the rain and enjoy the beautiful patterns woven by the fine spring rain. Look! The drizzle covered the earth like smoke and gauze, making it look picturesque.
The drizzle moistens the willow, which wakes up, softens its branches and spits out buds as big as rice grains; The breeze blows the Buddha statue, swaying gently, like a group of fairies in gauze skirts dancing. As if someone was directing, the birds flapped their wings, released their voices on the willow branches and sang the praises of spring happily.
Yingchun couldn't help laughing, and the green grass wet by the rain was not to be outdone. She shook herself off the ground and put a furry green dress on it. Ah! How beautiful! This tree, this flower and this grass constitute a beautiful picture that only the spring rain can describe! Look! The children were also attracted, waving red, sky blue and crimson umbrellas in the spring rain, so many, so beautiful ... There is a man with glasses among the children-isn't that our teacher? Ah! Teacher, isn't the spring rain your incarnation? Aren't you selflessly watering the flowers of the motherland like spring rain? .
7. To describe the composition of characters, it is necessary to describe actions, appearances and demeanor. Compared with the lower grades, the composition test of grade six is more difficult, and the article requires a detailed description. When writing a character composition, don't write the character too rigidly. How to describe the characters vividly in the composition of the sixth grade in primary school?
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In the eyes of primary school students, a good story must have wonderful language and tortuous plot, and only when someone pays attention can it produce a sound. How to make the characters read vividly?
(1) action description, reflecting the dynamics.
In order to write the movements of the characters, we can show the details of the movements one by one in slow motion and move the moving images of the characters.
On this day, I became very filial: "Grandpa, your cup is too dirty, let me help you clean it!" " "Before grandpa responded, I took the initiative to roll up my sleeves and wash them. I thought it was easy to wash a cup, but I was wrong. Although I used a brush, foamed with detergent and beat with water. . I tried everything I could think of, but no matter how hard I tried, the tea stain was still there.
-"Washing Teacups"
"My foot is twisted, it hurts!" I grinned and said that my whole body trembled from time to time because of the pain. My mother immediately took a soft cloth from my father's hand and gently applied it to the instep of my foot. I suddenly felt cold.
-"Mom's Hand"
The first example thinks that the author's efforts to wash the cup are the result of his efforts to breastfeed. It is not easy to highlight "washing cups" with exaggerated sports descriptions. The second example uses "grace plus action" to express the connotation of maternal love.
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(2) Appearance description highlights identity and personality.
Appearance description is a magic weapon to portray characters, just like sketching. Mastering the characteristics of Chinese characters can make people stand on paper with a few strokes. Appearance description is also the difficulty of role description. It is not easy for primary school students to master the most expressive appearance characteristics, and it is even more difficult to highlight the personality characteristics of characters in appearance description. But there are ways, like the following example.
Example 1:
There are many people in the car today. When I got on the bus, I found there were no seats. I found a seat at the exit, so I squeezed in and sat there. At this moment, an old woman came and stood beside me, her hair was gray, but she was in good spirits. I moved aside and offered my seat to her. -"This scene moved me"
Example 1 grasping "hair" means that the elderly are healthy; The second example depicts the image of children through pruning and other descriptions. Of course, these appearances do not exist independently. They are usually combined with psychological descriptions and other descriptions to show the characters together. The above is the writing method of the sixth grade composition in primary school. Can you learn many methods through the model essay?
8.600 words of character description, my mother.
My mother is tall, neither fat nor thin, with a few shallow wrinkles on her forehead and a smile on her face.
My mother is kind. She taught me to be honest and generous from an early age and cultivated my good character from an early age.
I remember one thing, which I will never forget. It was a hot afternoon, and the sun scorched the earth like a big fireball. I sat in my room and kept fanning, but my sweat kept rolling down. I said to my mother, "Mom! It's hot, it's hot! I want to eat popsicles. " Mom said, "Come on, I'll take you to buy some popsicles." He picked up his wallet.
When I got to the place where I bought popsicles, I chose popsicles. My mother took out a whole ticket for 50 yuan from her purse and handed it to my uncle who bought popsicles. After my uncle found the money, my mother and I hurried home.
When I got home, my mother counted and said to herself, "Huh? No, a * * * is 7 yuan. How can I get back 45 yuan? " Hearing this, I said happily, "Great! People who buy popsicles are really confused. They are looking for more 3 yuan money. Mom, can I have 2 yuan? " My mother glared at me and said angrily, "send 2 yuan more back, you can't take advantage of small things!" " ! Besides, it is not easy for people to sell popsicles! "Say that finish, my mother braved the hot sun of * * * and sent 3 yuan money to others.
When I sleep at night, I can't sleep in bed. When I think of the things during the day, I suddenly understand that a man should start from bit by bit, and can't do things that are sorry for others because of the small advantages in front of him. This incident gave me a great education. I love my mother and I admire her from the bottom of my heart.
Her eyes are big and her braids are long and beautiful. Liu Ai is the monitor of our class. She often does good deeds for everyone. One day, she was ill and uncomfortable, but she still got to school early. When I got to school, I put down my schoolbag, picked up a broom and cleaned it, and then I went to clean the room. Her collective love behavior is worth learning from all our classmates. Everyone stresses hygiene and loves the collective. Our class must be the best class group.
9. Lin and other four strikers pass short in our frontcourt, but Shao Cong is a first-class defender. When they passed the ball, it was between two points and one line, and Shao Cong fell to the ground and broke the ball. Wen Zhaogeng swept it sensitively with his heel, and the ball reached Cheng Fei's foot impartially. Cheng Fei turned and passed Li Jichuan, but Cheng Fei didn't have enough speed.
However, Lin failed to grab the ball from Duan. In desperation, Lin took foul tactics and pulled Cheng Fei. The first team got another wonderful free kick.
See Shao Cong in front of the ball, quickly ran to the edge of the ball and jumped up. It turned out to be a fake action. Then, Cheng Fei lifted his foot and shot it, which accurately reached the head of the diving pilot. Suddenly, the ball magically drew an arc and went straight to the goal with the upper corner. Wang Weisen, who had a bad booth, failed to save it. Cheng Fei expanded the score to 3:0! This goal undoubtedly shattered Class Two's hope of equalizing. However, the good times did not last long. Class Two took advantage of the corner kick, and Li Jichuan scored an earth-shattering goal in the middle.
With this goal, we are still two points ahead, but the morale of Class Two team has risen. I hunched my back, pursed my mouth, opened my eyes wide, and crept step by step to the dragonfly that landed on the dog's tail.
Near, near, my heart began to accelerate, and my arm shook a little. Holding my breath, I stared at the approaching "prey" and slowly leaned over. Suddenly, I caught it. At the moment I aimed, my right hand immediately approached, and I quickly closed my open fingers. This dragonfly landed firmly in my hand.