1, the structure of the single-character shelf is slightly loose and not compact. Such as "Bo" and "Teng"
2, the strokes are not correct, such as "sign" and "god" beside the double.
3. The upper corner of the horizontal line is too large, giving people the feeling of instability and uncertainty, such as "gold" and "grid". Personally, I think the upward angle is controlled at about 5 degrees, just like the word "Gong" in the word "Jiang" is well written.
4. Most strokes are immature, not solid and not sharp, such as "Teng", "Idle" and "Dong", and "Pick" strokes are well written.
The above is my humble opinion, for reference only, and I hope it will help you.