18. There are too many typos, just like sesame seeds on sesame cakes. Can we try to photograph the sesame seeds on the sesame cake? [Ding Yishan/Comment]
19. The handwriting is very crowded. Aren't you afraid to heat them? [Dai Xiaowen/Summary]
20. The phenomenon of losing words is serious. I wonder if you often break your umbrella in rainy days? [Ding Yishan/Comment]
2 1. The content is as dry as dead leaves in autumn. How can anyone want to read it? Read more extracurricular books to ensure that the dead leaves turn green again next spring. [Lou Wei/Pinggai]
22. There are so many typos as a hornet's nest ... I'm a fourth-grade student. How can I use Pinyin instead of words that I can't write? Is your dictionary sleeping? [Lou Wei/Pinggai]
23. The content of this article is vivid, and it feels like just eating a piece of fresh milk cake, with endless aftertaste. [Ding Yishan/Comment]
24. Actions are rarely written, like branches in autumn, which have no leaves. [Song Jiajia/Comment]
25. Your sentence is a dead goldfish in a jar, not alive at all. [Hou/Comment]
Punctuation is polite, like a smooth floor tile. [Ding Yishan/Comment]
27. the disadvantage is that the words are not beautiful, like the traces left by chickens when they are looking for food. [The composer-Shi Lei comments]
28. The second paragraph of the article is too long, even longer than a golden python. [Comments by Yan Fuling, King of Composition]
29. There are no beautiful words in the full text, just like a bald man without hair. [The King of Composition-Comment on Angelie Liu]
30. The typo in the exercise can't fit a truck. Pretty scary. [Composer Star-Comment on Qiao Yu]
3 1. The characters speak without expression, as if they have been talking to others with a straight face. [Star of Composition-Comment on Rui Liu]
32. The title of this article is very general, just like a dry rice paper, lacking the feeling of moistening. [Comments by Yan Fuling, King of Composition]
33. The whole sentence is fluent, just like a silk scarf, which feels smooth. [Comment by Yan Wang, King of Composition]
There is a lot of nonsense in the composition, like a lot of fat on a fat man. [Top Composition-Comment on Ying Tingting]
The title is very attractive, like a magnet, attracting readers' attention. [Composer Star Weekly Review]
36. There are many typos in the text, like the spots on toad's body, which is disgusting. [First-class composition ―― Comment on Jing Li]
37. The facial expressions of the characters are not described in the dialogue. Are they made of plasticine? [Comments by Yan Fuling, King of Composition]
38. The words lost in practice pile up into mountains. Will you be careful in the future? [Comment by composer Zhou Fanghua]
39. Many words are used inappropriately, just like a person's hand reaching his neck, which makes people uncomfortable. [Ding Yishan/Comment]
40. The sentence reads very smoothly and naturally, just like drinking a cold soda in a hot summer. [Yongqing/Pinggai]
4 1. a layer of dry skin, peeled off, there is no blood or meat in it, how can others not feel bad? [He Fan/Comment]
42. This metaphor is exquisite, even better than the idea of a clever fox. [Xu Yarong/Ping Gai]
43. Punctuation is a very serious phenomenon, and it is always lost. Do you like punctuation as a meal? [Lou Wei/Pinggai]