Hazy and youthful calligraphy

It is suggested that there is no need to change a synonym for "hazy". From the perspective of antithesis, I prefer a "slight awakening". From the semantic point of view, "big" to "slight" and "fat" to "awake" can be used. From the perspective of flatness, "heavy hair" is flat and flat. what do you think?

Full of poetry, drunk and residual ink.