Help me point out my calligraphy works.

The structure of some words in this pair of words is not well mastered and the writing is too rigid. Pay attention to the flexible writing and stiff strokes. At the same time, we should pay attention to strengthening the softness and thickness of strokes. Also, just enlarge the words a little more. The overall layout is good. When practicing calligraphy, you should read the copybook carefully and pay attention to individual details, which is of great help to further improve your writing level.