Release; Emissions; issue
(1) Terminology of poetry writing structure. "Qi" is the cause, the beginning of the article; "bearing" is the process of events; "Turn" means that the result is a turning point; "He" is the discussion of the event, not the end.
(2) Metaphorical transition when speaking.
(3) metaphor fixed dull, affectation.
Chu Yuan Vander's poetic style: "There are four ways to write a poem: rising straight, inheriting spring, changing and combining water."
Comprehensive application of law; As predicate and object; Generally refers to the practice of the article.
Take Lao She's Camel Xiangzi as an example: "Everyone is talking in it, but there is not a trace ~"
Synonyms connect the front with the back.
● Complement the concept of "connecting the preceding with the following" in the music field.
One of the structural principles of inheriting and transforming into the form of national music. (1) at the beginning (statement), the initial statement of the theme; (2) Carry on (i.e. consolidate) and consolidate the theme through repetition or variation; (3) Changing departments (that is, developing) has great instability; (4) close the department (that is, end) and end the whole song.
Appreciation of 300-word essays; He came out of the window and the sun was like fire. The whole old city is like a huge electric oven, and everything is baked in it.
Cicada protested loudly at the top of her voice.
The willow leaves are curled up and can't resist the heat.
I was bored sitting at my computer desk, and the fan was whirring, but it was useless, just a dry and hot wind blowing.
Bored, still bored, I really want to vent.
The doorbell rang, and I thought it was my mother. I opened the door with joy.
Hey, why him? -My dad.
"Why didn't you see who opened the door? ! What if it's not me but the bad guy? " He stared at Pisces and said.
"I am no longer a child. Does he need it? " I muttered under my breath.
Somehow, my beloved father has become like this. I just don't want to talk to him. I turned to avoid him, but where could I escape? "Where are you going? Did you study today? Look, look. What are you like, you are not happy when I come! " He said with his mouth open again.
Hey! How could I be so unlucky? If I don't talk, I can't. Once I speak, I won't stop. I will sink in silence. If you don't break out in silence, you will perish in silence! I still chose silence ... "The child is getting uglier and uglier. Did you hear what the adults said? " My father went into the back room, listened to him walk around the room for a while and then came out.
"Bang", the door slammed shut again.
He came and went.
Just as he slammed the door, I didn't look back at him, just staring at the computer. My eyes seem to be supercilious, but my heart is full of chaos. I can't breathe, it seems that a volcanic eruption is brewing.
The doorbell rang and mom came back.
I'm still sitting in front of the computer, typing mechanically. She went into the back room and only heard "Bang! Hey! " After a rummaging, there came an impatient roar: "Who took the key in the cupboard?" "isn't he coming?" Mother asked loudly, "Come on, has he been here?" Mom is a little hysterical.
First of all, the endless nagging of a person who gave up family responsibilities, and then the wanton venting of a person who was overwhelmed by family burdens made this volcano in my heart unbearable. I chose to erupt silently ... "Yes! He came, but he left again! You are finished, do you want this home! " I cried loudly.
"Why don't I want this home? It's him, just his poker table, not this home! " "Yes, you beat and scold him every day in addition to nagging him to make less money, worthless. He can only be nagged by you at home and can only go out, regardless of you, regardless of me, regardless of home! " Mom froze there and didn't speak for a long time. I saw the tears in her eyes flow out like lines. I know that I have said too much, and I know that my father is wrong, and I know the helplessness and difficulties in my mother's heart.
But at that moment, I seemed to have nowhere to go. What I want is not to blame everyone, but a complete home! I went over, hugged my mother, hugged her tightly, and said hoarsely, "Next time he comes, don't let him go again, okay?"
Dad doesn't care enough about me. The composition is in my heart. This is a harmonious family, and family members care about and help each other.
My brother and I are the only two children in my parents. Before my brother got married, my parents worked hard for both of us and cared about our growth everywhere, especially my youngest child. They treat me like a baby and nag me every day. Although I sometimes feel bored, I know very well that they are for my own good, and I am happy to accept it.
Soon, I took my parents as my friends. When I encounter unhappy things, they are my only listeners, and they will work hard with me to solve the problem.
At that time, I felt that I was really happy and lucky to live in this family, and I felt that I could last forever.
It didn't last long, and my idea was broken, that is, after my brother got married and gave birth to a child, my life changed a lot.
After my brother's child was born, the whole family liked him very much. I felt nothing at first, and I was glad to have a little brother, so I won't be so lonely in the future.
As he grew up, I gradually realized that my brother no longer played with me. He and his sister-in-law are busy looking after the baby. I can understand him and even my parents. Now, the baby is 5 years old; 6 years old, children in this period are the cutest. He is lively and lovely, just like Xiao Xin in Crayon Xiao Xin.
At this happy moment, I gradually feel that my parents don't care about me as much as before. My father has changed, my mother has changed, and she has become very cold to me, nagging less and less. I still feel unaccustomed to it! Whenever I encounter unhappy things, they give me a sentence: "Why are you so troublesome?" ! Solve it yourself! "Don't look at me, they are pinning all their hopes on their grandchildren. They often regard him as the apple of their eye, care about him when playing with him, and even dislike me. This is the so-called "son preference"! Now there are more and more only children. I really envy them and want to be an only child once! As long as it can be a day, a few minutes.
I am a little different from other children in that my parents never give me pocket money. They are afraid that I will spend money indiscriminately and let me know that money is hard to come by.
So what I want to buy must be approved by them, and I can only buy it with enough money.
Now that I have grandchildren, I sometimes want to buy something to eat, or buy extracurricular books to read. They will pull up an angry face and say, "Don't waste money by buying useless things." On the contrary, they bought many delicious and interesting things for their grandchildren. After knowing it, I was very sad and thought, "Mom and Dad, why are you doing this to me!" " Also, when I was sick, they said, "That's a trivial matter. You'll be fine soon."
That's what I said when I had a high fever. In other words, if it is a grandson, they will be very nervous and take him to the hospital at once.
Alas! Mom and dad don't care about my life and death. Let me die, which means it doesn't matter if I die! I like music and want to sign up for a piano class, but they still don't agree, using wasting money as an excuse.
Grandson also likes playing the piano. They said, "Give him a piano interest class in the future!" "I hate him a little, and I can't wait to kick him out of the house and scold him:" It's all your fault, so I don't even care about my only relative. "
"I want to move out independently many times, but I have no ability, and I am still young.
When I have the ability one day, I will move out immediately and never come back to see them again.
It is not that I am not filial to them, but that they don't put me in front of them at all. Before I have the ability, I must endure, and persistence is victory.
Mom and Dad, wake up! Think about who your children are. Who is your closest relative? I just hope you can care more about me. This is nothing at all. Can you do it?
Using the turning point from the beginning to the end, writing a composition on the topic of grade three is also a happy and urgent bell that is sung quickly under the footsteps of wind and fire; Teachers' heartfelt words and parents' earnest teachings are constantly echoing in my ears; The darkness of night and the gentle light stand quietly opposite each other; In the morning, under the sound of the alarm clock, I had to open my black panda eye, rub it, get up immediately, dress, wash my face, brush my teeth, and wolf down a few mouthfuls of millet porridge cooked by my mother. Before the head teacher's fierce face appeared, he took out his textbook and read the classical Chinese and boring English words he had learned. The first ray of sunshine in the morning poured down, and all his troubles and anxieties disappeared without a trace. He pulled himself together and started a new day. The sultry noon attracted sleepy people everywhere. Looking up, a large group of people were playing chess with Duke Zhou, and the teacher's violent cough interrupted his dream. Dozens of pairs of painful eyes tried hard not to let their eyelids droop continuously, staring straight at the blackboard full of formulas. We sacrificed the happy time after class, but sought the little comfort and happiness that survived in the sea of questions. The afterglow of the setting sun is faintly projected, reflecting the beautiful foothills in the distance. I want to ride the wind and fly to the vast seaside to see the beauty of the sea I want to fly in the clouds, come to the vast grassland and enjoy the clouds on the horizon. In the pale light, I always fantasize about the future, that pure and beautiful dream. The goal I pursue seems to be smiling at me and waving to me. I will be desperate to get closer to my dream step by step. In the third grade, I experienced hardships, but there was no lack of happiness. In the third grade, I experienced loneliness, but there was no lack of friendship. In the third grade, I felt the pressure, but there was no lack of endless motivation from my dreams. Isn't this a kind of happiness? It is also a kind of happiness to experience the third grade.
The perfect composition should be related to net fish, as the name implies, it is to catch fish with a net, haha! I caught a fish in the country today.
I, Grandpa Dong, Grandpa and my brother had a good time on the boat. We are rocking on the boat, and the floating grass on the lake dances for us, bringing us coolness and happiness. At this time, a scene interrupted the quiet atmosphere and made me tremble, because I saw a snake swinging its graceful posture in the water. Fortunately, it didn't swim to my side again. If it can swim, grandpa will protect me, so we will.
When fishing with a net, Grandpa Dong squatted on the bow and cast a net. Grandpa Xi is rowing in the back of the boat. We have two nets, so we can attack from both sides. In addition, there are some stresses on net fishing. For example, hanging a few iron plates on a bamboo will make a crisp sound when it is shaken, which will frighten the fish to jump in. After catching the fish, you will put it in a bucket. Every time the bucket is alive, it always throws water on my face, which makes me happy.
As soon as we got home, we counted 2 1 fish. What a bumper harvest! ! !
Recently, an article titled "The worst composition was evaluated by the teacher, but the tender words touched my heart" appeared on the forum. The post tells the personal experience of a student's father in Class 2 (1) attached to a primary school in Yunnan: the father received a "summons" from the head teacher one day, and after the teacher reprimanded him, he suggested that his son transfer to another school. as a result of
Then the father found his son's composition, which read: "The Mid-Autumn Festival is here. My mother bought moon cakes and I ate half of them. It's terrible.
Contrary to the teacher's evaluation, parents thought their son's composition was true and spoke highly of it: the son's "terrible taste" confirmed the improvement of people's living standards in the country's reform and opening up, so that the next generation did not have to go through the hardships experienced by their parents. At the same time, his son's composition is also a true portrayal of an urchin who doesn't understand the hardships of his parents making money and the taste of sadness.
Many netizens also think this article is not bad. A netizen's "Dream in Lv Shang" proved that the pupil's composition was "not bad" and even posted a pear-shaped poem "A Man Came to Tennessee" by writer Zhao Lihua: "Undoubtedly, my pie is the best in the world.
Later, he also presented the composition of primary school students in the way of poet Zhao and named it "moon cake": "The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming \ Mom bought moon cakes \ I ate half of them \ which is terrible.
"These two evaluations are not reliable.
It is obvious that parents make a mountain out of a molehill by raising the significance of their son's composition to the height of reform and opening up.
The analogy of Doraemon is interesting, but it doesn't mean anything.
Because it is controversial whether "A Man Came to Tennessee" is a poem, let alone whether it is good or bad, netizens assembled the above composition into a "pear-shaped" poem, which can't prove to be a good composition.
Here, teachers, parents and netizens all made a big mistake, because this is not a composition at all, but a vernacular expression expressed by primary school students.
Composition has its own elements, it has the central idea, the general idea of the paragraph, and of course there is an expression, but the so-called "composition" mentioned above does not have these elements at all.
The more real psychological information than this sentence is that there is a big misunderstanding in the current composition teaching in primary schools, which is to implement the education of "encouraging young students" regardless of the age characteristics and psychological status of primary school students.
A second-grade primary school student can't recognize a few big characters, but the teacher insists that they write a composition, and even uses the standards of adults to judge the quality of the composition. What's more, as the above-mentioned teachers did, they were transferred to other schools on the grounds of poor composition, which shows that the composition teaching in this primary school is "sick".
The lower grade of primary school is a literacy stage, and their physical and mental development is not yet mature. They have no desire to talk and express, and they have no psychological basis for writing. At this time, they are most eager for teachers to provide them with a relaxed and free learning environment, so that they can grow up carefree, healthy and happy.
At this time, what they expect most is games and entertainment, and there is not much pressure to learn cultural knowledge.
But our teacher is not like this. They are bent on instilling exam-oriented education in their children in advance.
Ask children to make sentences before they know a few words and write a composition before the sentences can be completed. Whether the composition looks like it or not, they should judge it with the eyes of an adult, and so on. How to make children not cry bitter and tired, and how to make their burden not increase year by year?
Take it. thank you
Cherish the 800-word composition of time and seek transition. Very need
As the saying goes, "an inch of time is worth an inch of gold, but an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time." We should cherish time, which is like flying an arrow, blink of an eye, year after year; Time sometimes seems slow. We can read an article of more than 200 words in one minute.
So, is time fast or slow? Still depends on how we treat it! If you want to cherish time, you should arrange your life and rest reasonably, and you can read books and do what you should do in your spare time every day.
Think of those big celebrities who don't cherish time? Maybe you have heard a story about a tramp who wasted the good time of his youth and asked the old man to let him go back to his previous youth, but he still didn't know how to cherish time and still achieved nothing.
I think it's no use giving him more opportunities if he doesn't know how to cherish time. However, if he knows how to cherish time, he will look around for time or squeeze time to use it, not to mention the distance, there is one around me.
Xiao Lingxiao, the monitor of our class, always finishes his homework at school.
Why? Every day at noon, when we are reading and resting, she is doing the problem seriously; Every day during the break, when we were playing games, she was busy reading books ... I remember once, our class held a squadron meeting and everything was ready, but the teacher was late and the students were so happy that they quarreled.
"Naughty King" Li and "Smart Boy" Bai Shengkui fought, and the boys at the scene laughed and laughed.
We girls can't hold back and play finger games one by one.
However, Yan picked up the composition book and wrote it, but I admire that in such a noisy environment, she wrote so thoughtful and square.
The next morning, my classmates were angry with each other, and I was even more sleepy, because I was so busy that I didn't finish my composition homework until nine o'clock last night, let alone other homework. Too tired! However, being small is different. She is still full of energy. A "sleepy" didn't report to her. She answers questions very clearly in class, unlike us. Ask her again. After finishing all her homework at eight o'clock in the evening, she reads extracurricular books. How envious of us! Time is fair to any of us, 24 hours a day, no one can get more points, no one can get less seconds, it depends on how we grasp it! Come on, learn from our monitor and be a person who cherishes time together!
Write a composition by connecting the preceding with the following. Father and son passed the gate of a five-star hotel. According to the first material, students may be able to determine the views of "complaining" and "envy, jealousy and hatred", but the focus should be on "indifferent attitude towards life" when combining the two materials.
In life, many people feel resentment because they feel unfair, and feel pain because they complain too much. The solution to this kind of pain is to follow the laws of nature and life and keep inner peace and composure.
In the raw materials, "father" answers lightly, "Zen master" and "low eyebrows and obedient eyes" all show the correct mentality.
The key to writing is to dig deeper, and it is best to have a unique analysis of why people are not indifferent and how to be indifferent, rather than just collecting examples of characters to express their indifferent attitude towards life.
When the vanity and luxury of modern civilization come in a hurry, dissolute happiness, the tendency of pretending to be a snake and even the popularity of complex etiquette follow. Why not raise your glasses again? The deepest, simplest and most dripping tunnel: "Give life back to real needs", and life is enough.
I learned 200 words of calligraphy, and the title is "I have learned-".
"Yes, on the road of my growth, many things have confirmed this truth.
When I saw the calligrapher splashing ink on TV in the third grade, I thought it was great, so I signed up to learn calligraphy.
One Saturday afternoon, my mother took me to the painting and calligraphy museum to study.
At first, I learned to hold a pen, with my index finger and middle finger on top and my ring finger and little finger on the bottom.
First of all, we must learn to "double line", that is, draw an outline on that paper for me to copy.
I was very interested in it a few times ago and studied hard. The teacher also praised me.
But after studying for a month, I feel so sour that I always want to give up halfway.
My mother seemed to read my mind, so she said to me, "Don't lose heart, nothing is difficult in the world, only if you put your mind to it."
Come on! Mom believes you can do it! "After listening to my mother, I began to like calligraphy.
I made great progress, and the teacher began to let me learn Single Line.
Is to copy the words on the paper with a pen.
It was a little difficult at first, but I didn't flinch when I thought of my mother's words, but wrote them down seriously.
Now, I have learned regular script and running script.
After more than a year's hard work, I will be able to get Grade 7 in June165438+1October this year.
Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.
Learning calligraphy not only exercised my patience, but also made my handwriting more and more beautiful.
It seems that the benefits of learning calligraphy are still quite many!
How to write an article "Connecting the Past and the Future"? You have to figure out what "connecting the future with the future" means before you write.
In fact, composition is the simplest in Chinese, because any event can be transformed into another method.
Besides, the articles are all made up, and readers don't know whether what you wrote is true or not. Anyway, I made it up. I am a good writer in our class! ! Listen to me. That's right! But be careful not to write too far! (Note: There should be transitional sentences connecting the past and the future in the article! Remember, it is a "transitional sentence"! ! And there must be a turning point and a round turn, and this article will be successful! ) ...
The indelible memory is in my heart, and there is a memory that will never be erased.
I clearly remember that day ... that day, I went to play with my neighbor's friends. At this moment, I saw such a scene: he was ill and couldn't move in bed. Even so, her mother took good care of her. She can eat whatever she wants and play whatever she wants. Her mother can satisfy her and play games in bed every day. Suddenly, an idea flashed through my mind: if I am sick, the thought of it will make me happy.
My heart is not as good as my action. That night, I deliberately opened the quilt so that I could catch a cold.
In the middle of the night, I was shivering with cold. I tried to cover the quilt several times, but I gritted my teeth and held back so that I could get sick the next day.
God still helps me. The next day, I got up dizzy and couldn't stand still. My mother immediately found out that something was wrong with me and took a thermometer to measure it, only to find that I had a high fever.
My mother looked at me in distress, walked around me, and looked at her anxious appearance. I finally realized that my mother cared about me and cared about me, and I was secretly complacent.
My mother was afraid that I was hungry and cooked my favorite dishes, fearing that I was bored. She bought me my favorite book, but my head is always dizzy. I can't eat when I see the delicious food cooked by my mother. I always feel sick, turning over my favorite extracurricular books, but I can't understand a word. I am so sleepy and have a terrible headache.
I only regret. My mother nursed me into a healthy body. Why should I get sick? I have to stay in bed all day and do nothing. I'm starting to hate myself a little. In fact, my mother loves me very much and buys me good books every time. She loves me the most in the world.
Now, recalling those things, I can't help laughing. What a childish and childish thing it is! The interesting story of my childhood has become a memory that I can never erase.
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