Therefore, whether your handwriting is effective or not depends on whether you have practiced it.
Your handwriting, I have to say, I hope you don't mind. Maybe you just practice by yourself, and you can't be a calligrapher without a teacher to teach you.
Say you practiced it yourself because it seems that the strokes are still very strong.
The latter is denied because
For example, the word your cigarette-that is, this word is enough to explain the problem.
Just say three questions and the picture will be circled.
(1) You write a little fire next to (throw), then pick up a pen, turn it around and write a vertical stroke (throw). At the end of the vertical stroke, you turn around and write a short stroke on it, and then use a turn to represent the point below. This writing is completely wrong. Even the stroke order is wrong. The stroke order here is not the national standard, but the stroke order summarized by calligraphers of all ages. Read more posts and you will know. And why did the last stroke turn left? Obviously, the next stroke is the vertical stroke on the right, so this stroke is redundant.
(2) This circle is completely redundant, redundant and completely unnecessary.
(3) This tick in the circle is completely written without any post.
As a contrast, I found a calligrapher to write the word "smoke", you can have a look.
Remove the vertical line on the right side of the circled part, which is generally written next to the word fire.
Write the left and right points first, then write the "person" in the middle. Go and see, all calligraphers are generally in this order of strokes, and strokes may be omitted, but strokes must be this process, and writing is not taken for granted.
Then you can feel the difference between the "why" next to it and what you wrote.
If you have practiced similar running script or cursive script, you will basically not make this mistake.
I'm not going to say whether a person's calligraphy has skills, but obviously, it's quite simple to see if a person's calligraphy has skills.