The rain just fell into the dream.
Listen to the rain in the bamboo studio, the color of the rain should be green. Pillow with the sound of rain all over the world, the greenness of the world, listen to the rain and fall asleep, the rain just falls into the dream. "Moss grows in dreams", this sentence is very refreshing, it feels like reaching into the netherworld, which shows the color and depth of rain. The bamboo studio is very quiet, so that the rain can fall into the poet's sleep. The dream was so quiet that moss grew on it.
"I sleep in the bamboo studio and listen to the rain, and moss grows in my dreams." These two sentences have reached the realm of transformation, connecting with ghosts and gods, and have completely written the title. Three or four sentences are barely connected, describing that after waking up from a dream, one is in the silence of no one. "The door is silent and the mountain is opposite, and the bird is idle and does not guess." It seems that a dream in the rain took the poet into the ancient times.
I don’t know why I wrote the following four sentences, “Guests should be tired of drinking.” Maybe they were written for the guests, but they feel obviously a bit redundant. The first four sentences have a distant artistic conception, but adding the last four sentences makes it noisy. It is better to cut off the "snake feet" and cut it into quatrains, which will not only allow people to stay longer in the sound of rain, but also be more relevant to the title.