My handwriting is terrible. My parents said it was messy grass. The teacher said that watching my homework was like stepping into a trampled reed, and I couldn't say my lines clearly. The students speak more vividly. It's just a bug crawling out of the ink bottle and circling around my homework several times. I was very sad to hear that and began to make up my mind: I must write the words well, for my parents, for my teachers and for my classmates. So, I practice copying every morning and evening. After a period of practice, I feel that I have made progress. In a calligraphy class, I boldly put forward a request to the teacher: Teacher, give my homework an "excellent"! The teacher smiled and said, "Your handwriting is really much better than before, and it has improved. If you want to write better, I will definitely give you an' excellent' and work hard! " With the teacher's affirmation, I feel more confident.
Finally, a bright red word "excellent" appeared in the homework after that. This is the first time I got an "excellent". I picked up my homework, read it over and over again, smelled it over and over again, and couldn't bear to close it for a long time. The word "excellent" is so beautiful that it contains my efforts, my parents' expectations and my teachers' encouragement. The word "excellent" also made me understand a truth: nothing is impossible as long as you have perseverance.
2. How to write a composition with your favorite words? When I was a child, I remember seeing Chinese characters crawling on paper, just like seeing many insects unable to move. I don't know what adults read in books or newspapers. Gradually, when I grow up, I also know that it is not bugs that crawl on paper, but Chinese characters. My mother said to me, "When you go to school, you will learn these Chinese characters slowly."
I remember that on the first day of school, my teacher gave me many books, among which the word "Xue" in a math book caught my attention. I think the word "Xue" is quite interesting. I compare the three points on the word "learning" to three knowledge towers. There is a strong house under the tower. There are many students in the house, trying to climb the pagoda of knowledge. I know that if you want to have real skills, you must start with learning. I've thought a lot about learning in math books. The word "learning" is easy to remember and write, and its significance is very far-reaching.
For example, at 00 in The Analects of Confucius, Song Zhuxi said: "Learning is effective in words, nature is good, awareness has its order, and those who are aware later will serve those who are aware before, so that they can start again." Interpreted as "effect" means imitation.
Qian Mu said in New Interpretation of the Analects of Confucius: "Learn, recite and learn righteousness. All reading exercises are learning. "
Reading is really important, but it is only one of the ways to "learn". Asking, listening, observing and thinking are all "learning", and more importantly, learning through practice. Confucius was quoted in The Doctrine of the Mean: "Shun's great wisdom is also related to it! Be good at asking questions and observing words. "
"erudite, interrogative, thoughtful, discerning and practical." These are all areas of' learning'.
The content of "learning" generally has two aspects: one is "literature"; The first is the virtue cultivation achieved in behavior. Generally speaking, the content of "literature" refers to the "six arts" (poetry, calligraphy, ritual, music, Yijing, Spring and Autumn Period, or ritual, music, shooting, martial arts, art, literature and learning), including what modern people call knowledge, skills, skills, literature, art and learning.
"Not angry, not disloyal" and belonging to filial piety and faithfulness are the main contents of "learning", while "writing" is only something that can be done with spare capacity. The core of Confucius' "learning" is people's cultivation, and its purpose is to become virtue, thus achieving the wisdom of life.
When I understood the meaning of the word "Xue", I realized that the knowledge of "Xue" is so great that it is easy to recognize the time and write, but it is not easy to really understand the truth. So I made up my mind to start from a young age and start from small things, not only to learn the culture class well, but also to learn to be a man, so I like the word "Xue".
3. Prose written around one word has a long history in China. From the earliest Oracle Bone Inscriptions to the present Song Dynasty, we have more and more Chinese characters. Among them, I like the word "love" best
Let's talk about the glyph of love first. The teacher said that there is also a poem about "love": the sky is like warm wind, and the middle is like cool rain. Let's open our arms and hug our friends. During the summer vacation, my parents will go on a business trip. They signed me up for a management class, and anyone who doesn't have parental management can go. A few days before I started school, I accidentally kicked my toe on the door, and my whole big toe stuck up. Suddenly, my face was covered with blood and my eyes were sour, so I couldn't help crying. I thought to myself: school will start soon, and it is inconvenient to move my feet. What should I do? When school started, I was limping on my way to school when suddenly a figure came running from behind. It turned out to be my good friend Jiang Jiayu who met me downstairs. Her parents also have no time to take care of Jiang Jiayu. Originally, she wanted to go to school early today, but when she saw me limping slowly to school, she immediately stopped to help me go to school. At school, she helps me with everything: helping me hand in my homework; When eating, help me to eat soup; After class, she also helped me to go to the toilet. We are like sisters, and everything is inseparable. Whenever I suggest myself to do it, she will say, "Never mind, your feet are not good, have a good rest!" " Let me do it for you. "
In this way, she helped me "live" for several days until my feet could walk on the ground as usual. I think it is my honor to have such a good friend.
This is a true love story, which happened right beside me. As the song goes, "As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a beautiful world!" " "
I can't think of a word in my composition. Sometimes I write, although I can think of many examples, but I usually get into the habit of reading more books, not idle books. I'd better read some world famous works and more good essays, such as Zhu Ziqing and Zhang Xiaofeng's. When writing a composition, make an outline first, know what you want to write in each paragraph, and make a good draft. I must have real feelings, and I'd better keep a diary. Write a few words. Only by practicing more can you write a good composition. When you meet beautiful sentences, you'd better extract them and sort out more materials, so that you can have something to write. The first condition for writing a good composition is to accumulate rich composition materials.
Many experts in writing are quick-thinking, and the important reason is that they have a rich library of materials in their brains. They can write articles with ease and make ends meet. If students want to write a good composition, they must make great efforts to accumulate composition materials.
Writer Qin Mu said: "A writer should have three warehouses: a direct material warehouse containing materials obtained from life; One indirect warehouse contains materials from books and materials, and the other is a warehouse that collects people's languages on a daily basis. With these three articles, it is better to write. "
The first two warehouses mentioned in this passage are exactly what students should do to write a good composition. 1. The best way to accumulate "life materials" is to keep an observation diary.
The common problem for students to keep diaries is a running account. I am too lazy to write because I feel boring. I suggest you write according to the method taught by Mr. Lao She: "You should carefully observe the character and characteristics of Lao Wang or Lao Li around you, pay attention at any time, write it down at any time ... remember it every day and form a habit."
A gust of wind blows, you write it down; You can also write down the next shower, because you don't know when you need to describe a gust of wind or shower in your work. Without this accumulation, there would be no rich writing. |2, accumulate "materials from books", on the one hand, combine reading and writing in Chinese class through classroom reading; On the other hand, we should rely on extracurricular reading and insist on writing abstract reading notes.
If each excerpt uses a piece of paper, it is a reading card. As the saying goes, "a good memory is not as good as a bad writing."
No matter how strong the memory is, after a long time, there are always some things that will be forgotten. If you extract what you think is wonderful when reading, you can not only avoid forgetting, but also facilitate reading.
The so-called "wonderful content" worth refining. It is related to readers' interests, hobbies, level, needs and other factors, and there is no unified standard.
Generally speaking, wonderful aphorisms, vivid descriptions, novel and profound viewpoints, lively and interesting dialogues and even beautiful words can be classified and extracted. In order to facilitate future reference, it is also necessary to indicate the source of materials after the original excerpt.
Many students have written excerpts or reading notes, but not many insist on writing. Unfortunately, a useful job fell by the wayside.
According to statistics, Marx wrote Das Kapital and wrote 1500 kinds of "abstracts". Lenin wrote philosophical notes and directly quoted dozens of philosophical works. Like a revolutionary teacher, insisting on writing abstract reading notes will make you smart, full and rich, and make you think quickly when writing in the future.
Second, the training and improvement of writing ability is not a one-off event, which requires long-term planning. Therefore, we should arrange the order of composition training. What is the most reasonable order? From the growth of many writers, we have seen colorful "sequences", and it is still difficult to say which is the universal truth.
The following is the training sequence of "seven before seven after", which may be a common meaning. Please refer to your own situation. 1 Practice writing narrative and descriptive articles first, and then practice writing explanatory and argumentative papers.
Practice writing your own personal experience first, and then practice writing what others tell you. 3. Pay attention to training observation and accumulation first, and then pay attention to training analysis and expression. Practice writing simple things first, and then practice writing complex things.
5. Don't be limited by the "frame" of writing, let go of the courage of writing; Then according to the basic requirements and characteristics of different articles, standardized training is carried out. 6 "Imitate" first, and write an article drawing a gourd according to the same pattern; After "creation", write novel and unique articles.
7 First, make the article as long as possible, emphasizing expansion and dissemination; After that, try to write a short essay, paying attention to conciseness. The above "seven before seven after" conforms to the law of people's understanding of things, from concrete to abstract, and the law of ability training, from low to high, from clumsy to skilled.
As for when or to what extent as the first and second boundaries, this is another problem that cannot be "one size fits all" and must be analyzed in detail. It's not bad if some students arrange the above seven first and then seven alternately and repeatedly, such as imitating creation and then imitating creation.
Third, we should develop good writing habits. After students enter junior high school from primary school, composition training has embarked on a new course, and special attention should be paid to cultivating their good writing habits. From the writing experience of the winning students in the composition competition, we summarized the following seven good writing habits for students' reference.
1 The habit of "writing a little every day". Many award-winning students said that their composition won the prize because they insisted on keeping a diary. If there is more time, they will write more, and if there is less time, they will write less, even if it is as few as dozens of words.
This is really an experience. As the saying goes, "Never leave your fist, never leave your mouth". Writing every day can make your writing more dexterous and accumulate a lot of composition materials.
2. The habit of "thinking through the whole article and writing an outline of the composition". Don't write a composition unless you know what to write in the next paragraph. You must conceive the whole article and fix the "framework" of the conceived composition in the form of an outline.
People who have been engaged in writing for a long time also have an outline before they start writing, but some hide the outline in their stomachs and call it a "draft by heart." 3 the habit of "reciting the first draft of the article".
In ancient times, there was a habit of "singing" and "humming" when writing poems, because there were many problems that could not be "read" or read aloud. If you are in the examination room, you can only read silently to find out whether the sentence is fluent, whether the tone is coherent, whether the context is fluent and whether the phonology is harmonious.
4. The habit of "seriously modifying". The ancients said, "An article is never tired of changing", which is the golden advice of writing a good article and the experience of all article experts.
Without this habit, it is almost impossible to write a good article. 5 "Don't tell lies" habit.
5. Write a good composition. During the summer vacation, my mother found me another remedial class. This tutorial class teaches everything, such as calligraphy, composition, Olympic mathematics, reading analysis ... Besides, I tried to listen to every class. In the end, I chose to learn calligraphy and composition first.
Learning calligraphy in the first class is also the first time to learn calligraphy. It feels very different! The teacher read my original words first and picked out many faults. Alas! I think my handwriting is very good Later, I saw the teacher write a sentence, so beautiful, so beautiful! I didn't realize I was so short.
The first class teacher taught me a lot of knowledge. Unexpectedly, calligraphy has such great knowledge! Later, the teacher told me that what the teacher taught me now is a font called regular script. Regular script is very slow to write. You need a pen, a pen, a pen. The teacher found me some pieces of paper and wrote me many pictures for me to follow slowly. Later, the teacher told me a lot, such as: there are two kinds of vertical, one is hanging vertical, the other is hanging vertical ... After listening, I began to practice one by one. I was writing when I suddenly wrote a decent word. The teacher looked at it and said to me, "Great progress has been made. Keep working hard!" "
After listening to this sentence, I gave myself an order: before the school starts, you must let the students see the shortcomings of your writing and make them admire you more!
I think very firmly: I can write well, my words can be posted on the blackboard, I can do it!
6. What should I use to write a word?
It is good to have good thoughts and be kind to people.
Only with good thoughts can we improve our personality. (deleted)
Confucius, as a "great sage", traveled around the world, writing books and giving lectures, and propagating the idea of "benevolent governance". What does "benevolence" mean? It is the essence of "benevolence" to have good thoughts, treat others well and treat the world well.
One day, Confucius' stable caught fire. When Confucius heard about it, he just said, "Is it harmful? Mo Wen horse. " In just two sentences and six words, we can spy out the kindness of Confucius. It is a good thing to think of others after your own interests are damaged. (Kindness = good idea)
Sun Shuai was playing in the field when he was young. Suddenly he saw one or three snakes, so he killed them and buried them for fear that others would see them. When he came back, he told his mother that when he learned that everyone who saw the snake would die, he was no longer afraid, because when he buried the snake with his own little hand, he had spread his kindness far away. It was because of his kindness that he was eventually promoted to the sea and became an ancient celebrity.
Only with good thoughts can great things be achieved. It seems that this article need not be divided into three parts, just choose an angle to expand it. )
One day, Qin Mugong went out to travel, only to find that Zuo Yi had disappeared. When he found it, he found that the farmer had tied it up and was trying to kill it. Killing the emperor's horse could have been sentenced to death, but instead of becoming angry from embarrassment, Qin Mugong was afraid of hurting his body and gave them wine to drink. How can such a good deed not be touching? Finally, in the battle of Hanyuan, the farmer helped Mu Gong and won the war.
A good idea is the transmission of love.
When Cong Fei sang with her life on the stage, although her face was haggard, the flame of love was still beating in her flashing eyes, which was a warm transmission. Perhaps his heart had already flown to the poor mountainous area, and he was comforted when he saw the children carrying schoolbags after school again.
When 90-year-old Bai finished the last journey of his life, he finally closed his eyes with satisfaction. An old man, who should have enjoyed his family life, collected waste products and picked up garbage every day, and saved more than a dozen college students with years of savings, but his life was poor. With beautiful thoughts, he conveys warmth and love. These examples are very good and explain the meaning of "goodness". )
Countless spring days, when I close my eyes, I always see golden wheat fields and Haizi standing in the middle of the wheat fields like a angels in white, praying for all beings with folded hands.
Stranger, I also wish you:
I wish you a bright future!
May you lovers get married!
May you be happy on earth.
I only wish: facing the sea, spring blossoms. ...
I can't hold back a word in my composition. How to solve it? I won the first prize in the previous composition contest.
At first, my composition was not good. But gradually it seems to feel something. This is my advice to you.
1 As the upstairs said, it is very necessary to subscribe to some good magazines. Those short and pithy articles are easy to attract people and not too boring. But only if you are interested in her. Even if you are not interested, it is useless to subscribe.
Suggested order: > In fact, you can see the shadow from the composition questions in the college entrance examination for several years, and this magazine itself is worth reading. > this is a magazine that I found by accident when I was in the second grade, and I like it very much. It tells a short story first, and then summarizes the truth of life, which is very helpful for the accumulation of materials.
You can buy a composition with full marks in the basic college entrance examination. I didn't buy it myself, but I think it should have ingredients. See how they write and why they get full marks. In particular, we must look at the teachers' comments, so that we can know what their real highlights are.
Having certain material does not mean that you can write a good article. So accumulation is very important. Even after reading many good articles, if you think about it carefully, is it easy to forget? Our teacher suggested that we should have excerpts. Your teacher may have said that, but few students will learn to do it. This is very important. Write down what you like or think is good, and read it when you have time. It may be useless at first, but if you
Also, don't be perfunctory when writing a composition. It is really important. You didn't write your composition many times. Once you perfunctory, you miss an opportunity to exercise, because the teacher will point out your mistakes and the places that need to be corrected. It is recommended to find a teacher to correct it face to face, which will be more comprehensive.
Finally, I wish you the more you write, the more you feel, hehe
By the way, there is also the accumulation you asked. That's the good sentence mentioned above, I like it. As for rote learning? As long as you have time to see more, there will be images. There is no need to recite them.
Because when you write a composition, it just gives you an idea. But those classic sentences are well written and can be memorized.
If you don't have good literary talent
If you don't have such a good literary talent in writing, you can only write those things that are most familiar and touching. The most familiar things are the easiest to express in accurate language, and you won't make some intellectual mistakes.
Take me for example. I like Beijing opera very much. Almost every composition is related to Beijing opera, and occasionally I insert some Kunqu opera. It's getting easier and easier for me to find materials in Beijing opera. For example, when I write a scene, I can quote gorgeous words. When writing a kind of spirit, you can find a representative performing artist, such as Gai Jiaotian, who shows strong persistence in artistic career and so on.
Different genres of articles can also use the same familiar thing. If you write an expository article, you can introduce the art of Peking Opera. When writing a narrative, you can write about the process of appreciating Beijing opera; When writing an argumentative essay, you can talk about the reasons for the slow emergence of Beijing opera schools and think about the reasons why many young people don't like Beijing opera. [Zhang Lu]
First, catch people's eyes.
The title, beginning and ending must be innovative and colorful. First of all, we can grasp people's eyes by using rhetorical devices such as suspension, metaphor and parallelism. The ending is the finishing touch, as meaningful and intriguing as possible. [Wu]
About the title
When the material is scattered, it can be written in the form of subtitles, which should represent the content of the paragraph. Novelty is what we seek when setting the general title of a composition, but sometimes the title can express the center but it is not novel. At this time, we can write a title in wonderful language to supplement the topic. [Yang Meng]
Engraving method of language
For the exam-oriented composition, there are detailed and sensible examples, ingenious ideas, novel and unique titles, beautiful and gorgeous language, etc. , are the magic weapon to win high scores. In my opinion, an excellent composition should be based on exquisite language. And the way language is carved is really varied. For example, you can introduce your own title with majestic parallelism sentences at the beginning of the text, and you can also give vivid and beautiful metaphors in the description of individual abstract things. Moreover, emphasizing the application of comparative sentences can highlight the protagonist or main things in the text, make it lively and interesting, attract the teacher's attention and make people feel more cordial. Of course, the application of epigrams like related poems or famous sayings is also essential. Especially when writing an argumentative essay, using verses or famous sayings to draw out the central argument and sub-arguments you want to state can not only greatly improve the depth and breadth of the article, but also make the language level of the whole article leap to a certain extent, killing two birds with one stone.
8. Do you know that my favorite composition is more than 500 words? One of my favorite Chinese characters is "Zhan". You may wonder why a girl with elegant temperament likes such hard words. There is a good saying: "It is more important to defeat yourself than to defeat others." It's easier to read than to do.
I have had such an experience.
Once, I was watching a DVD. Suddenly I found that I had finished all the dishes I borrowed. So, I said to my mother, "Mom, can you lend me some more dishes?" "Mother said seriously," you have grown up. You should borrow it yourself. "No matter how I ask, my mother always says," Do you want to see it? If not, you can borrow it yourself. If you don't, you can stay at home. "I have no choice but to borrow my shoes.
As soon as I got outside, the wind blew, and it really sounded like a monster growling. I keep saying in my heart, "As long as you work hard, you can succeed." I can't wait to get it in one step, borrow it and leave. I always fantasize that a ghost is following me behind me, so I look back from time to time. Although there are many people coming and going on the road, I am still scared. I took a long breath and encouraged myself: I want to challenge myself, persistence is victory, as long as I get to that store, I will win. So, I shrink my head and move on.
There is a road ahead. That path is dirty, and rats often run around there. The thought of mice makes my hair stand on end and my heart beats like a rabbit. I really want to run home in one breath. But on the other hand, it is also a good opportunity to challenge yourself! So, I took a deep breath, got up my courage and walked forward. Suddenly I felt something pass under my feet, and I was startled. On closer inspection, it turned out to be a mouse. I thought: Am I too timid to be afraid of a mouse?
Ah, when I finally got to that store, my hanging heart suddenly relaxed. When I got home, my mother said I was so brave! Ah! I did it.
From this, I am convinced that as long as you work hard and sweat, you will definitely win!
Challenge yourself!