Zhao Shuai! The teacher found that your memory of the text you learned was very clear. If you learn to keep a diary in your own words, the teacher will like you better!
☆ You are a careful child, and you wrote down all the beautiful colors in autumn. The teacher believes that your careful observation and true feelings will enable you to write more beautiful sentences.
After reading your diary, the teacher found that you have made great progress. Your careful observation made the teacher feel the beauty of autumn. Come on! I hope your diary will be more exciting next time.
☆ Beautiful autumn unfolds on your way to school. The teacher can see that you are observing carefully! I hope to see your better diary next time!
☆ I feel a little happy after reading your diary. You are a careful child, and the teacher hopes to see your more wonderful diary in the future.
☆ Your diary today is more beautiful. The teacher seems to see the beautiful autumn in your pen, really like a painting. There are two typos. Don't forget to correct them
☆ The teacher reads you from your fluent sentences. I know you are an observant child. It would be better if you could write the words more cleanly.
☆ Look at how beautiful your language is! Also used a metaphor, the teacher cheered for you!
☆ You really observe life. What a beautiful sentence!
☆ Rabbits are so cute in your writing, and your articles are getting more and more exciting.
☆ Diary writing is really good. You can write sentences with "You You You", which is really amazing.
☆ You are great. You can not only work, but also write down how to sow. It's amazing.
☆ Playing games is really fun, and teachers want to participate. How happy the family is with the bumper harvest of corn! It's good that you can write your happy mood. It would be better if the words were more neat.
☆ Dad won't be cold, because he has a good son who loves to study and cares about her! How can it be cold when you are warm in your heart?
☆ Looking at your diary, it seems that you have entered the fairy tale kingdom.
☆ You also have a job at present-going to school; The task of work is to study, and the salary is the test scores again and again, and the praise of parents and teachers again and again. I believe you can do this work better!
Our good friend, the book, will tell you the answer to the question in your heart. Go and read it! Your ideal is to be a glorious PLA soldier. The PLA is the most disciplined. Be self-disciplined from now on. When you grow up, you will be the best soldier.
☆ On the day of the sports meeting, the teacher didn't come, so you set the table and chair and sit up straight. Really grown up and sensible.
☆ Everything is easy to listen and do with your heart. Send you a word: nothing is difficult in the world, I am afraid that there is a will.
Be patient, you can't become an adult in a few days, and seeds can't grow leaves at once!
☆ You recorded the beautiful autumn in your eyes with ordinary words, so real and so close to your life. I believe that you must be a beautiful, kind and studious child in life, right?
☆ Suffering and troubles are everyone's, and the key depends on how you treat them. Smile, face them with your courage and wisdom, and believe they will run away because of fear! "Difficulties are like springs, depending on whether you are strong or not. You are strong, it is weak, you are weak, it is strong. " The teacher sent this sentence to you!
☆ Expectations are not realistic, but they can be realized. The only way is on your own. With your efforts, with your sweat, with your redoubled efforts, you can realize your desired ideals one by one.
☆ Look, how beautiful your homework is today! There is not a typo. I believe you must have written it with your heart? Keep doing it, and the teacher will be happy for you!
☆ There are many firsts in one's life. Although there are many difficulties, you overcame them because you are brave, and the teacher is proud of having such brave students.
☆ You are a confident child, and everything you say makes sense. I believe you are the same in your studies. From now on, redouble your efforts, let self-confidence walk with you and prove that you are the best. Come on!
☆ Labor is hard, but the harvest of labor is joyful. You can find your own happiness from your efforts. What an optimistic child!
☆ Your home is beautiful, and your handwriting is more beautiful! I'm so happy for your progress, son. Can you keep up this progress?
☆ You are a talking child. How beautiful and accurate the phrase "Qi Xin works together and sweats like rain" is! You are also an observant child, and the teacher's eyes and actions can't escape your eyes. If you are a child who can listen, I believe your performance will get better and better!
☆ The teacher likes reading your diary best. Do you want to know why? Because you always surprise the teacher, and today your greatest progress is that your pen handwriting is great!
☆ How cute your little brother is! His playfulness and stubbornness have become your jokes. Your composition is getting more and more wonderful, son, amazing!
☆ "The willow leaves are yellow, the maple leaves are red, and the leaves of pine and cypress are still evergreen" How well written! You are the great poet of our class in the future!
You are really a child who dares to love and hate. Justice is your greatest advantage. The teacher likes your bravery, so I hope you can learn knowledge well and be a useful person in the future.
☆ You are a greedy cat! But you can't forget your elders when you eat delicious food. This is the best! ☆ The mouse has become a big problem for you. Your experience is really special. Tell your classmates about your troubles, and they will certainly help you solve them, because many hands make light work?
You are a girl who dares to tell the truth. We live in this world, and all kinds of unexpected things happen every day. As long as you are positive, you will find that everything is as beautiful as before!
You are a beautiful little girl, because the teacher can know from your clean and beautiful pen handwriting that you are not only beautiful, but also kind-hearted Practice calligraphy well and become a calligrapher in the future!
☆ "Do things seriously and think seriously". You are really a sensible child, and you are always a "sunshine boy" in the teacher's mind!
☆ look A series of verbs write about your lovely appearance when you wrap jiaozi, and you can learn something from wrapping jiaozi. Well done!
☆ You can unite your classmates and help people in trouble. You really deserve to be the master of the class. Fourth, the first squadron must follow your example!
☆ After reading this, I was really touched. In the face of you, I feel that everything I have paid has been rewarded.
You see what a caring little girl you are. The teacher likes your gentleness and thoughtfulness!
☆ Every word you say touches my heart, and I will love you more and care about you more! ☆ You are a good boy for being so filial to your parents! I also believe that you will repay your parents with practical actions.
☆ Seeing you so happy, the teacher is also very happy! In the future, "study hard and live well!"
☆ A sweat, a harvest, is the fruit of your efforts. The teacher will always encourage you, come on! ☆ "Self-confidence" gives you courage and strength. As long as you are willing to work hard, you will succeed
☆ The teacher understands you, and I believe you will work hard in the new semester! ☆ Look how well you have done! A man is a man who keeps his word.
☆ After reading your philosophical sentence, I know you will cherish your time and study hard, right? ☆ You are really amazing. You can understand "what is the most precious thing in the world."
☆ You are really a girl with strong "tolerance and love". I think everyone will like such a girl! ☆ You are a creative little girl, and teachers should learn your good habit of diligence!
☆ If you are good at observation, you will find interesting things in nature. May you love life and nature more. ☆ Be happy for the fruits obtained this week! I look forward to your flowers blooming soon.
I really admire your confidence!
☆ Realizing the happiness of labor is your greatest gain!
☆ In spring, mom and dad are full of seeds. I hope you can plant beautiful words with your parents and reap rich fruits in the future.
☆ After reading your diary, I know that you are a good boy with perseverance and know how to cherish things. In this way, take the diary as the carrier and give me your Excellence!
☆ Your article is like a vivid and lovely fairy tale. I really enjoyed reading it.
☆ The writing in the article is about beautiful scenery and your love. Xue Mei, your heart is more beautiful!
☆ I can see that your family's life is well planned and the household appliances are complete. This must be the wisdom and credit of parents. Please apply this excellent achievement to your own study!
☆ Although there are people on duty every day, you can feel hard and happy from your work, which shows that you are a responsible person and a responsible team leader.
I'm so glad to see your progress day by day. Your double quotation marks are great!
☆ After listening to you and your parents, I really feel that your parents' love for you is selfless and great. To show their respect, put their words in double quotation marks!
☆ It's amazing that you can capture the mother's characteristics from the details of life and describe them appropriately with wonderful sentences!
An article expresses your gratitude to your mother, but it can't describe her love for you. I hope you can repay your parents from small things!
Your father is really something. I hope you can be a real man like him.
☆ After reading your article, I was really touched, because you wrote snowflakes so beautifully and kindly, and your deep feelings were integrated into the article.
☆ Seeing that you are so ambitious and confident, I feel that our class has more hope and development. Because you are the monitor.
☆ The harvest day is the trace of your healthy growth. Come on, there are still many gains waiting for you in the future.
I admire you very much, because you can see your own shortcomings and try to get rid of them. You are the best.
There is nothing wrong with choosing you as a friend, because you will give your friends courage.
I really like what you said. Would you please continue to write like this?
☆ Although you just entered our four-year second edition, I was moved by your passionate collective honor "speech" in the article. I believe you have a share in the future glory of Class Two, four years.
☆ The related words in the article are well used. They make your diary more orderly and attractive. In fact, you contributed to the awards in our class, because you love the group so much and care about your classmates, which brought us exquisite cosmetics.
Li Yue, the teacher likes reading your diary very much. You can draw materials from life, reproduce life, and describe the characters' words, actions and inner world in detail. This is what the teacher appreciates about you. The disadvantage is that your handwriting is a bit messy. The teacher doesn't ask you to write beautifully, just horizontally and vertically. The teacher has confidence in you, I hope you have more confidence.
☆ Jiang Yan, look to the future with dreams and realize your dreams with actions!
☆ Good articles can't be written at any time. Strike while the iron is hot, and then write when you are inspired. Otherwise, the heart will slip away.
☆ The meaning of the future is not to abandon today, but to base on today and now. Without this foundation, what is it? -Tall buildings in the desert!
☆ The beauty of spring is the beauty of showing strength after everything wakes up. Not only the sunshine and rain give them beauty, but more importantly, they are more eager to show the strength and resilience of life.
☆ Show this beauty with your pen and your wisdom.
☆ When you do what you say, you will increase your confidence; When you keep your word, others will trust you more. Let's keep our word and be a confident and trustworthy person.
Love is brighter than the moon in the sky!
☆ It is looking for a warmth and a place to live. Can you give it to him? ☆ Earn by sweat. What is "smart"? True cleverness is to do what you should do. Be responsible for yourself, not make fun of your time and life.
☆ How can deskmates and friends study without their company? We should learn to cherish a good deskmate and a good friend. With your sincere efforts, carefully collect these beautiful things in life.
☆ "Trust" is not only trusting others, but more importantly, your excellent quality can attract others. This attraction is the premise of trust.
☆ People who lack goals in life will drift with the flow.
☆ More strength, more persistence. Although the road under your feet will not be smooth, it will be practical. ☆ The process of learning is also the process of finding the right route.
☆ One less greedy heart and one more kind heart.
☆ The word "sorry" is both relaxed and heavy. You look relaxed when you let go. It's heavy when you tie the knot.
☆ It is precisely because time cannot go back that we should cherish the present time.
☆ Putting into action without preparation for hardship often leads to failure.
☆ When you forget everything around you and do one thing wholeheartedly, it is a kind of happiness.
☆ You are really observant and imaginative. Come on!
☆ Such a story is really touching. We should learn from them!
☆ It seems that you have a deep understanding of learning and a deeper understanding.
☆ The teacher thinks you are a sensible child until you repay your parents.
☆ The glass you want to invent will definitely come out.
Your article is so beautiful that you will become a poet in the future.
☆ After reading your diary, the teacher's heart was warm, which made me feel the deep affection between teachers and students. ☆ The teacher saw your attitude of studying hard, your progress and your bright spot. Come on! I believe you will make great achievements.
☆ As the saying goes: Sit as you sit, stand as you stand. There must be some regularity in eating naturally. Your grandfather is right! I'm sure you will understand.
☆ You can't treat yourself as a little emperor and a hero. You should do more things for your mother and share some things for her. You have grown up, I believe you can do it.
☆ Moonlight shines in your pen. Read more books and observe more, and you will write a better diary! ☆ The teacher read your diary and learned that you are a very motivated girl. I hope you are the best in Class One, Grade Six. Your diary is great, and the teacher is looking forward to reading your excellent work.
☆ Careful observation will lead to more beautiful articles.
☆ Don't be stressed, son. Regardless of the outcome, it is important to participate. I believe you can complete the task successfully.
☆ The teacher appreciates the last paragraph of your article because you have a tolerant heart.
You are a sensible child, and the teacher is as proud of you as your family.
Step by step along this solid ladder, and you will succeed. What an understanding little girl! The teacher loves you too!
What a beautiful compliment! The teacher is so excited and moved!
☆ You appreciate this practice, don't you? You must really want to join! Let's start now!
☆ The teacher agrees with your suggestion. It can be seen that you are a collective that cares and cares for this class. Does the teacher want you to help them?
Your reading ability is getting stronger and stronger, and you find your own happiness from books. This must be your happiest moment.
☆ Only when you realize your hard work, do you know the direction you should study hard.
☆ The more wronged you are, the more incorrect your mentality will be, so you are dissatisfied with everything and feel unfair. The teacher thinks you should learn to adjust your mind.
Learning to help others is also a good quality of a person.
☆ If learning is interesting, it will get better and better. Work hard, as long as you work hard, you will succeed!
Autumn Diary Part II: Writing Guidance for Grade Two-Autumn
Writing instruction for the second grade-autumn.
Zhang Hongxia Lisan School
The first unit of the second grade Chinese book is about autumn, and its teaching goal is to let children know about autumn through learning and cultivate their interest in autumn and nature. The main reason for designing the autumn theme in Unit 1 is that September when children start school is the day of early autumn. Therefore, observing autumn, feeling autumn and describing autumn in beautiful language are also important contents in this unit's writing practice.
The new curriculum standard has three requirements for junior writing: 1. Interested in writing, write what you want to say, write what you imagine, and write your own understanding and feelings about things around you. 2. Willing to use words learned from reading and life in writing. 3. According to the needs of expression, learn to use commas, periods, question marks and exclamation points.
From the requirements of the new curriculum standard, it can be seen that cultivating children's interest has been placed in the first and most important position in Chinese teaching. Interest is the best teacher. In order to better meet the requirements of the new curriculum and improve teaching efficiency, I will insert this autumn writing guide into the study of the text.
In the study of Unit 1, Literacy 1, students need to master 65,438+02 words about autumn: autumn, pleasant scenery, beautiful forests and flowers, the sky is high and the clouds are light, geese fly south, and the mountains and rivers in autumn are magnificent.
The grain is abundant, the melons and fruits are fragrant, and the spring flowers and autumn fruits are harvested in the east. When learning these words, I designed corresponding pictures for each word to help children understand and feel the characteristics of autumn, and divided these words into three categories: autumn scenery characteristics, autumn harvest and autumn climate characteristics to understand and remember. After the children understand and remember the word 12, guide them to collect some extracurricular words about autumn. According to the student's report, we chose six words to supplement the textbook. Words similar to Chunhua Qiushi: spring planting and autumn harvest, Chunlan Qiuju, Chunhua Qiuyue; Words describing autumn wind: autumn wind sends cool, autumn wind blows gently; Words describing autumn rain: continuous autumn rain. After learning the words in Literacy 1, children realize that these beautiful words describing autumn will make sentences beautiful if they are used in their own writing.
The first lesson, autumn pictures, describes a beautiful Qiu Jingtu. "Pear trees hang golden lanterns, apples show red cheeks, Mihai turns up golden waves, and sorghum burns torches." This sentence is the focus of this lesson. Through the demonstration of courseware, guide students to realize the reasons and benefits of this description. Pears on the pear tree are like small golden lanterns, so golden lanterns are hung on the pear tree. Teaching demonstration: there are apples and pears in the orchard and rice and sorghum in the field. Compared with the anthropomorphic sentence in the text, this sentence can feel the beauty of the sentence better. Therefore, I can realize that the results obtained by using some beautiful words in writing practice are more pleasing to the eye.
Children's growth is inseparable from their parents' education. I sent a short message to my parents on the network platform of the school newsletter, reminding them that the first unit of Chinese learning is about autumn words and articles. I hope parents can take their children to study outdoors, markets and other places, carefully observe the changes in autumn, and describe things and changes in detail in their own language. In the second grade, I hope to exercise and cultivate children's good habit of studying intently and carefully. After this reminder, careful parents will know how to guide their children to observe autumn, what to observe and so on.
After learning the two texts "Literacy I in Autumn" and "Pictures", I led the children to read the short article "Autumn" and the short article "Autumn has arrived at Chinese Garden I" in the synchronized workbook. At the same time, many autumn pictures have been collected online. After reading and enjoying the pictures, the students became interested in the beautiful autumn. In addition, it is not difficult to write down the autumn observed by yourself after observing and feeling the autumn outdoors with my parents in recent days.
When I arranged to write an autumn diary, I chose a voluntary form, mainly considering children's interests. Because I volunteered to write a diary about autumn, which relieved the pressure on children. Psychologically, I am not forced to write, so I am very relaxed. I prefer to write and observe my feelings carefully. Although voluntary, driven by competitive psychology, most children completed this diary under the supervision of their parents. It's still very touching to savor the children's own essays for the first time. So many excellent compositions have brought more or less comfort and pride to teachers.