When writing essays and essays, tell the truth and reason. The first priority is to explain things clearly and thoroughly. Don't pretend to be elegant. On this basis, use one sentence as a sentence, so that every word is useful. Do not add flashy words just for the sake of pretentiousness, which will only create branches and branches. In this way, the article will naturally be beautiful, with the beauty of full text and the beauty of simplicity and freshness. After doing all these, then pursue changes in sentence structure, rhythm, and phonology.
When writing about people, you should show them by their deeds, and let the person you write about speak for themselves, and write less or try not to write your own evaluations and emotions; the deeds should be based on daily small things. , This can shorten the distance between the reader and the person writing about it, and allow the reader to appreciate the person's actions carefully. Only in this way can the person be brought to life and be unforgettable for the reader. When writing something, you should first sort out all the relationships in it and figure out where to start, so that you can save pen and ink and make it clear to readers at a glance. Don’t write reasoning articles just yet, because that requires the writer to stick to one thought like an old monk in trance, to explain the truth in every detail, and to peel off the layers. He must use physical metaphors to explain the truth to the readers. This requires a tempered mind. The skill of reading and words. If you say that there are so many philosophical articles in the literary world now, do the authors have that kind of skill? In my opinion, it is because they have pens and computers in their hands and dare to write, and it has nothing to do with their composition skills.
When writing articles, avoid “I”. But without your own feelings and thoughts, you have no writing, so you must pay attention to the balance between subjectivity and objectivity. At the beginning, I also liked to make these mistakes. I would be very lyrical before writing about people and things; then I would use exaggerated words to exaggerate people and things; and finally, at the end, I would add my own particularly subjective comments in an attempt to improve the style. Reading these articles now makes me ashamed. How do you avoid this style of writing now? Let me teach you a little trick: after writing the article, revise it frequently. Revising the article is a pleasure rather than a chore. When revising, look for adjectives, find one and delete it. There are too many adjectives, which means there are too many "I" things. Adjectives should be used if possible, and some words such as "extreme" and "most" should be used sparingly. As time goes by, when you write articles, you will naturally control yourself and no longer use sensational descriptions, but will find specific examples to express what you want to explain. I teach you to do this because it is too specific, a bit like the "law" of Buddhism. Because "law" produces "wisdom", you will quickly realize the way to write.
When talking about people and things, stop at the point. You can say less about some transitional words in the narrative. The transfer between the upper and lower paragraphs seems to be irreversible and can be transferred rigidly, just like the "pen" in calligraphy. Break the connection." For the layout of the entire article, you can refer to a sentence in seal cutting: it is airtight (if there are words, it will be long), but sparse and sparse (if there is no words, it will be short). Don't tell everything you know without prioritizing it because of your own vanity (that is, the "I" mentioned above), or deliberately quote scriptures, or take the topic far away to show your knowledge. Such a result will not only fail to explain what you want to say clearly and win the respect of readers, but will also make people find it annoying to read.
[Problem-solving process]
A. Feel life and realize happiness
——Prose writing should have rich feelings
This is a is a true story. A ten-year-old chubby boy suddenly shouted in front of a table full of delicious food: "I want to die. I've eaten all the food. What's the point of living?" My mother was shocked after hearing this and went to a psychologist. After consultation with the doctor, the doctor prescribed a patch of medicine called "Mediocre Food" and said: "This is a psychological disorder - unable to perceive happiness. There are still many people suffering from this disease now." After reading this story, we can't help feeling that the mother's heart is great, but her greatness has been obscured by excessive care and love. As a son and as a woman, we have become accustomed to this kind of care and love. This is such a terrible numbness. Little Fatty was born in a world of blessings and knew no blessings. He had no idea of ??his mother's love and no happiness at all. Are there any classmates who are chubby? To write good prose, you must first have a sensitive heart. The life of today's middle school students seems to be boring, three points and one line, family (dormitory) - teachers - canteen. Coupled with the heavy pressure of exam-oriented education, it is easy to fall into a mechanical and numb state.
Students may ask, what is there to feel? But if you can observe carefully and comprehend carefully, there are many beautiful waves of feeling in the vast ocean of study and life. The important thing is how to capture it sensitively. "Between teachers and students" is an eternal topic in school life. There are so many things happening between teachers and students inside and outside the classroom, and the friendships formed between teachers and students are so profound over time, but why can't we "move what we feel and express what we say"? Because I have become accustomed to it and turned a blind eye to it, I have never savored it carefully. Students must remember a few details in "My Teacher" written by Wei Wei. The author's feelings are so delicate. He truly wrote about the children's psychology and felt that Teacher Cai loved them, so Teacher Cai raised the whip high but finally fell lightly on the stone slab. In fact, the teacher's every move and gesture in a specific scene will give students a unique individual feeling, but you just don't pay attention to it at ordinary times.
"Parental love" is also an enduring writing theme. The reason why Zhu Ziqing's "Back View" has become a classic about family love is because the author expressed the long-standing feelings of father's love in his heart through the ordinary interactions between father and son in a real and detailed way, which is deeply touching. Leo Tolstoy once said: "The emotions experienced by the author infect the audience and listeners. This is art." My classmates, when you are traveling or studying and leaving home, you are reluctant to say goodbye to your parents with thousands of reminders and thousands of messages. Please keep busy with this and that, for fear that if you are not careful, you may feel impatient or unnecessary. We must not be as numb as little chubby. Everything your parents do is because they love you deeply. Maybe you have to wait until it is inconvenient to live outside the home before you realize the good intentions of your parents. Think about how happy you are to those children without parents. A look, a greeting, a gift, and a decoration in life all contain their own unique meaning. Feel it with your heart, and only "heartbeat" can lead to "action".
How can you enrich your feelings?
(1) To stimulate interest in the things around you, pay attention to observation, and feel with your heart. Observation can enrich your feelings. Life is dull, even boring, but if you can observe carefully and feel it carefully, you will find that the colorful world is born in this dullness. Keeping a diary can capture the waves of daily life, making the mind sensitive and emotionally delicate.
(2) Awaken compassion. Because sympathy is the hammer that shakes the soul. Sympathy is a kind of nature and the starting point of all people's emotions. It is not just for the weak, in essence, it is care and compassion for beautiful things. Shelley once helped a blind man. A blind man said when begging: "I have been blind since childhood and my life is miserable." In the end, he got little. Shelley changed it for him. "Spring is here, but I can't see it." There are so many alms givers. Because Shelley put himself in someone else's shoes and imagined how painful it would be if he couldn't see, this is a feeling. Shelley uses his own feelings to inspire people's sympathy. Students, when you donate to Project Hope, do you feel the happiness of helping others? Savor life carefully, and the ripples in your inner lake will ripple. The long river of life can be without wind and waves, but it can't be without small ripples. Let them dance in your river of life forever. Feel life and be aware of happiness. This is the prerequisite for constructing prose.
B. Who practices dancing in the sky with colorful flowers
——Intrinsic clues for prose writing
After the summer rain, the dark clouds disperse and the sun reappears, and the sky often appears Beautiful rainbow. Rainbows are caused by reflection and refraction of sunlight hitting water droplets in the air. When it rains or after a rain, the sky is filled with countless small water droplets that can deflect sunlight. When the sunlight passes through the water droplets, it not only changes its direction, but is also broken down into red, orange, yellow, green, green, and blue. , purple and other colors of light, if the angle is right, it will become a "long bridge and lying wave" rainbow. The size of water droplets in the air determines the vividness of the rainbow's colors. The larger the water droplets in the air, the brighter the rainbow; the smaller the water droplets, if they are as big as fog droplets, the lighter the red color will be, forming a white rainbow.
Prose writing is so similar to the formation of a rainbow.
When the sunshine of emotions is high and passionate, or sincere words are lingering, or warm and lively, or melancholy and euphemistic, when they are reflected and refracted in the water droplets of life, if the angle is appropriate, then a prose as beautiful as a rainbow will surely be written. . Of course, water drops in life refer to those people, things, objects, and scenes that can reflect thoughts and emotions. Otherwise, they can only be articles that are as pale as a white rainbow. An excellent prose is moved by emotion. This emotional sunshine - lyricism, can be said to be the internal clue of prose. If there is no such emotional sunshine, then no matter how many and how big the water droplets in life are, they can only be water droplets.
The sunshine of emotion refers to sincere, natural and rich feelings. Prose writer Lin Fei said: "Prose creation is a literary style that focuses on expressing inner experience and expressing emotions..." True feelings are the soul of prose. Zhao Lihong said: "Everyone has an emotional string in their heart, which will be struck by the moving scenes in life from time to time. If you can use your own language to truly and vividly record the trembling of the string in your heart, it will be a successful prose. Ba Jin's "Random Thoughts" is a masterpiece of prose filled with infinite vitality that is inspired by the true feelings flowing from the author's heart. Let's look at the excellent works in the students' selections, whether they are "Golden Grassland" which describes scenes, or people. The chronicles of "Blessings" and "A Precious Photo", not to mention "Sentiment for the Red Maple" and "Flowers of the Past", are all soaked in deep emotions. It doesn't take many examples to illustrate that all prose must be. There is an internal emotional clue. Of course, internal clues and external clues must be unified. External clues are textual clues (the passage of time or space, plot development, etc.), which are always restricted by internal clues. Tightly stick to the internal clues. For example, in the exercise "Father and Mother", the author uses his own growth experience as external clues and sticks to the internal clues of his admiration and love for his parents to conceive the article. It is an emotional piece. Sincere narrative prose.
Students, use your true feelings to penetrate the flowers, plants, trees, insects, fish, birds, animals, people and scenes, choose the appropriate angle, and use the appropriate language to express your true feelings. Then, you will Be able to "dance in the air with colorful hands in hand"
C. All roads lead to Rome
——The form of loose composition should be flexible
Students will definitely not know how to do it. Forget those football warriors galloping on the green field. They all have special skills and extraordinary skills. Their goal is to kick the small football into the net. Among them, there are 1.90 meters who leap high and head the football into the net. Batistuta of the Argentina team; Vielli of the Italian team who shot from a long distance and kicked the ball into the net; Carlos of the Brazilian team's golden left-footed shot from close range with lightning speed; There was Hagi of the Romanian team who volleyed the ball into the net from four meters away; there was also Owen of the England team who rolled the ball into the bottom of the net with a flick of his head. Whether you use force or skill, you can hit the target with different methods and the same effect.
Prose writing is like playing football, the form is free and flexible. : “Prose is the freest, liveliest and least restrained of all literary styles. It can be daggers and spears, it can be light and gentle paintings of world customs, or it can be a serenade that gives people pleasure and rest. It can cheer, sing, shout, and criticize; it can talk, chatter, sing, and croon; it can also laugh, curse, and make witty remarks. It can be an exciting landscape, or it can be like a river flowing quietly under the moonlight. In the garden of prose, it is most suitable for a hundred flowers to bloom. "
But no matter what kind of structure or form of expression is used, the purpose is clear, that is, the article should have "the light of thought" and "more emotional color" and should be like a window, " Through it, people can look farther and higher, see more things, and arouse deep thoughts and reverie." The expression methods of prose include narrative, description, lyricism, discussion and explanation. An article can be written in any one or two of them. For the main purpose, these methods can also be used comprehensively. If used well, it can be brilliant. For example, Zong Pu's "Purple Wisteria Waterfall" is an example of comprehensive use.
The structure of prose, Genres and themes are also flexible and diverse.
For example, Lu Xun's "Mr. Fujino", Ba Jin's "We Meet with Commander Peng Dehuai", and Bing Xin's "Little Orange Lantern" all use a coherent structure that unfolds narratives with the passage of time and changes of location; another example is Wei Wei's "Who is the Loveliest Person", Qin Mu's "Lyrics of the World", and Liu Baiyu's "Lights" use a combined structure of a red thread stringing pearls of life together, but they can all express the theme well. The new era is known as the "spring of prose art", and prose breaks through the creation mode of "objects-emotions-reasons". In recent years, prose has emerged as a flow-of-consciousness structure influenced by "stream-of-consciousness" novels. That is, "free association" and "lyrical monologue" that arouse subjective consciousness from objective things or situations. For example, "In the Rain, I Saw Dandelions..." by Guo Feng, "Tokyo Night Talk" by He Wei, "The Soul of Poetry" by Zhao Lihong, etc. The "Youth Monologue" created by Cao Minghua is especially popular among young students. As far as the subject matter is concerned, it is a true expression of one's own life experience, such as the selected articles "The Beauty of Red Brown", "The Coming of Youth", etc. The young author explores the multi-polarity of the self, including the joy of life, the expression of temperament, the epiphany of life, and the interpretation of philosophy. This essay-style style is just as Huang Yufeng, a special teacher, said: "The characteristics and writing method of essays lie in the word 'sui'. Write when you are excited and stop when you are full of interest. Don't worry about whether there is a theme or whether the structure is Complete, regardless of whether the language is accurate, let your inner feelings express freely..." Can we say, "There is a way to create, but there is no fixed way to write?" Friends, focus your full passion on life. The details narrate the sadness and suffering of life in a sincere tone. If you absorb the essence of previous creations, create your own unique writing ideas, and show your talent and spirit like the stars, you will be able to write articles that move you and readers. I firmly believe that all roads lead to Rome.
Answer: Counselor - Silver Wing Thaumaturgy - Doorman Level 1 - Submission time: 2006-1-5 23:40:000 0 Click on the picture on the left to give him a rating Other answers :*** 1 floor: 2. When writing essays and essays, tell the truth and reason. The first priority is to explain things clearly and thoroughly. Don't pretend to be elegant. On this basis, use one sentence as a sentence, so that every word is useful. Do not add flashy words just for the sake of pretentiousness, which will only create branches and branches. In this way, the article will naturally be beautiful, with the beauty of full text and the beauty of simplicity and freshness. After doing all these, then pursue changes in sentence structure, rhythm, and phonology.
When writing about people, you should show them by their deeds, and let the person you write about speak for themselves, and write less or try not to write your own evaluations and emotions; the deeds should be based on daily small things. , This can shorten the distance between the reader and the person writing about it, and allow the reader to appreciate the person's actions carefully. Only in this way can the person be brought to life and be unforgettable for the reader. When writing something, you should first sort out all the relationships in it and figure out where to start, so that you can save pen and ink and make it clear to readers at a glance. Don’t write reasoning articles just yet, because that requires the writer to stick to one thought like an old monk in trance, to explain the truth in every detail, and to peel off the layers. He must use physical metaphors to explain the truth to the readers. This requires a tempered mind. The skill of reading and words. If you say that there are so many philosophical articles in the literary world now, do the authors have that kind of skill? In my opinion, it is because they have pens and computers in their hands and dare to write, and it has nothing to do with their composition skills.
When writing articles, avoid “I”. But without your own feelings and thoughts, you have no writing, so you must pay attention to the balance between subjectivity and objectivity. At the beginning, I also liked to make these mistakes. I would be very lyrical before writing about people and things; then I would use exaggerated words to exaggerate people and things; and finally, at the end, I would add my own particularly subjective comments in an attempt to improve the style. Reading these articles now makes me ashamed. How do you avoid this style of writing now? Let me teach you a little trick: after writing the article, revise it frequently. Revising the article is a pleasure rather than a chore. When revising, look for adjectives, find one and delete it. There are too many adjectives, which means there are too many "I" things. Adjectives should be used if possible, and some words such as "extreme" and "most" should be used sparingly.
As time goes by, when you write articles, you will naturally control yourself and no longer use sensational descriptions, but will find specific examples to express what you want to explain. I teach you to do this because it is too specific, a bit like the "law" of Buddhism. Because "law" produces "wisdom", you will quickly realize the way to write.
When talking about people and things, stop at the point. You can say less about some transitional words in the narrative. The transition between the upper and lower paragraphs seems to be irreversible and can be transferred rigidly, just like the "pen" in calligraphy. Break the connection." For the layout of the whole article, you can refer to a sentence in seal cutting: it is airtight (if there are words, it will be long), but sparse and sparse (if there is no words, it will be short). Don't tell everything you know without prioritizing it because of your own vanity (that is, the "I" mentioned above), or deliberately quote scriptures, or take the topic far away to show your knowledge. Such a result will not only fail to explain what you want to say clearly and win the respect of readers, but will also make people find it annoying to read.
[Problem-solving process]
A. Feel life and realize happiness
——Prose writing should have rich feelings
This is a is a true story. A ten-year-old chubby boy suddenly shouted in front of a table full of delicious food: "I want to die. I've eaten all the food. What's the point of living?" My mother was shocked after hearing this and went to a psychologist. After consultation with the doctor, the doctor prescribed a patch of medicine called "Mediocre Food" and said: "This is a psychological disorder - unable to perceive happiness. There are still many people suffering from this disease now." After reading this story, we can't help but sigh that the mother's heart is great, but her greatness has been obscured by excessive care and love. As a son and as a woman, we have become accustomed to this kind of care and love. This is such a terrible numbness. Little Fatty was born in a world of blessings and knew no blessings. He had no idea of ??his mother's love and no happiness at all. Are there any classmates who are chubby? To write good prose, you must first have a sensitive heart. The life of today's middle school students seems to be relatively boring, three points and one line, family (dormitory) - teachers - canteen. Coupled with the heavy pressure of exam-oriented education, it is easy to fall into a mechanical and numb state. Students may ask, what is there to feel? But if you can observe carefully and comprehend carefully, there are many beautiful waves of feeling in the vast ocean of study and life. The important thing is how to capture it sensitively. "Between teachers and students" is an eternal topic in school life. There are so many things happening between teachers and students inside and outside the classroom, and the friendships formed between teachers and students are so profound over time, but why can't we "move what we feel and express what we say"? Because I have become accustomed to it and turned a blind eye to it, and I have never savored it carefully. Students must remember a few details in "My Teacher" written by Wei Wei. The author's feelings are so delicate. He truly wrote about the children's psychology and felt that Teacher Cai loved them, so Teacher Cai raised the whip high but finally fell lightly on the stone slab. In fact, the teacher's every move and gesture in a specific scene will give students a unique individual feeling, but you just don't pay attention to it at ordinary times.
"Parental love" is also an enduring writing theme. The reason why Zhu Ziqing's "Back View" has become a classic about family love is because the author expressed the long-standing feelings of father's love in his heart through the ordinary interactions between father and son in a real and detailed way, which is deeply touching. Leo Tolstoy once said: "The emotions experienced by the author infect the audience and listeners. This is art." My classmates, when you are traveling or studying and leaving home, you are reluctant to say goodbye to your parents with thousands of reminders and thousands of messages. Please keep busy with this and that, for fear that if you are not careful, you may feel impatient or unnecessary. We must not be as numb as little chubby. Everything our parents do is because they love you deeply?