Wang Libo 44: From July 10 to September 3, I didn't leave my diary every day. It's beautiful and readable. Suggest that I delete "I'm so happy" at the end of my diary.
Zhang Xihao 25: Insisting on writing is absolutely commendable. If you write every word carefully and make the word "play" appear less frequently in your diary, it will be more attractive to read.
Peng Yuehan 28: Diaries have a quantitative insistence. With a correct attitude, the quality will gradually improve, but if you have "have fun" in every diary, it will not be fun to read.
Wang Ziyuan 46: From July 12 to September 2, this perseverance has made people ignore the contents of the diary. If you can open your eyes and write carefully, you will certainly find more interesting and wonderful clips worth recording.
Hu Wenqi 26: Keep a diary, choose materials, and truthfully reflect your life with words. Whether in calligraphy class or at ordinary times, if you can write every word carefully as always, the study of calligraphy class is effective.
Su Yucheng 18: I have the habit of keeping a diary. A pair of discerning eyes turned a wonderful life into words, but I tried to correct typos, such as "take", "uncle" and "wo".
Wang Maohan 438+0: The attitude of keeping a diary is worthy of recognition, especially for mothers to comment on each one and help children correct typos. If you can write every word carefully, you will not waste the calligraphy class. The starting point of using idioms is worth encouraging, but if you use them wrongly, you will make a joke.
Lu 28: The diary language is lively and interesting, which records his colorful holiday life. Mom's comments are magic lights, guiding children to keep moving forward.
First-class history 14: Although I started to keep a diary in August, I wrote it beautifully. Every word is very clear and beautiful, just like a calligraphy work. The best thing is that the language is interesting. Every diary has a theme, and the content is written closely around the theme.
Chen 9: Although I only kept a diary for nine times, I wrote it neatly, punctuated correctly, and the content was readable.
Lan 56: Every diary has a topic, and the content is arranged around the topic. You must praise it. From July 9 to September 2, I didn't persist for a day, which was amazing and became the best in my class. There is something wrong with the words "so", "running" and "feeling".
Wang Zinuo 27: Dogs are cute and interesting. They are the objects that you constantly observe and record. Although the diary format is wrong, there is no space at the beginning, and it is messy to write with a neutral pen, but the language is still very interesting. Pay attention to correct the typos such as "cook", "time" and "know".
Wang Yunxiang is 50 years old: You are the most persistent and progressive child this summer. Write neatly and keep an interesting diary. You can use idioms or learned words. It would be better if the diary didn't say "Today is a happy day".
Xu Jiayi 3: It's a pity that there are too few diaries, but I really read them in the summer vacation. I like the language of dear Mr. Han Xiu, learn the essence of this book, and experience the true meaning of reading.
Wang 55: Wow, there are too many delicious foods written in the diary. The population is floating, the narrative is clear and clear, and I feel the luxury of a day. Insist too well, start early, start writing on July 7, humorous language, vivid food, a little greedy for cats. It is recommended to write carefully to avoid wasting calligraphy lessons.
Zhang Hanyu 57: You are the most persistent and persistent person. Your diary is rich in content. I followed the words and went to northern Shaanxi and Liuba, and learned about your naughty holiday. However, people are too tired because of writing problems. The handwriting of August 17 and August 18 is very unique, really like a child who has taken a calligraphy class.
Wang 3 1: The writing is beautiful, neat and rich, but the double quotation marks are wrong, and the back quotation marks are wrong. Please try to correct them.
Tang Miaoxi 15: I can keep a diary and have a correct attitude, but there are too many typos, such as "just, after the exam, see you", which is always wrong. "Then", "I" and "you" appear frequently, and the sentences are not clean.
Bai Yutong 12: Every diary has a title, complete format and lively language, but too many words have been replaced by pinyin.
Shang Yutong 1 1: The diary in July is very well preserved. Each diary is long in content and fluent in expression. There is no pinyin in the text, and the language is rich. Unfortunately, I didn't keep a diary in August.
Yang Bohan 12: I have the consciousness of keeping a diary, but there are too many pinyin, and my writing is messy, so I can't understand some sentences.
Zhang En 1 1: Although the number of diaries is small, the quality of each diary is very high, which exceeds the cognitive level of first-grade children, so that readers can see their children's unique thinking cognition, understand their colorful holiday life, and feel the influence of parents on their children through words.
Zhang Yushu 4 1: Keep writing every day, from the holiday to the end of August. Although the content of each diary is short, the language is vivid and interesting, full of childlike innocence, and the words and pictures are even more remarkable.
Liu Linxi 10: The writing is neat, the attitude is serious, and it can truly reflect life, but some sentences are not clear. Generally speaking, the number of articles is still too small, which is inconsistent with your usual Excellence.
Chen Zidan 2 1: I wrote very carefully and neatly, especially since I had a holiday in July, and I persisted every day. There are many mood diaries in the choice of content, and there is still room for improvement.
Wang 54: You are the king of class summer diaries, and you are the most persistent perseverer. You never fall behind every day. Although it is sometimes a one-sentence diary, it becomes interesting because of the pictures. The most rare thing is to rewrite typos or words replaced by pinyin several times a day.
Li Hanyu 50: He writes beautifully and perseveres every day. From July 10 to August 28, not a day is free, and he won the most perseverance award. But pay attention to the typo, and the words "buy, night, ah, right, make up, know" are repeatedly wrong.
Yu 2: The diary is advanced and beautiful, and the writing is impeccable. Unfortunately, I only wrote two articles.
Hou Yutong 10: Record summer vacation life in words, record mood, and have a serious writing attitude. I wrote it well just after the holiday, but unfortunately there was no record after 10.
Guo Xinyu 4 1: From July 10 to September 1, the length of the diary gradually increased from one page to two or three pages, and the handwriting was neat and beautiful, which exceeded the level of the first grade. He is a real persistent scholar.
Wang Yimeng 10: Diary is a beautiful grid book with neat handwriting. Although the content of each diary is very short, it is clearly expressed.
Wu 3: Although I have only written three diaries, the contents are quite long, and the language is interesting and attractive.
Lu Qingyun 14: Every article is carefully written, and the content reflects your own life. But some articles are too abstruse for parents to guide and too difficult for children.
Wan Binghui 35: Persist with your heart and make changes. The content is short and long, but we can see obvious progress.
Zhu Xingyun 15: Beautiful writing, very attentive. Every word is presented in the form of calligraphy, and there is still much room for improvement in content.
Liu Yukun 4: I have carefully finished four diaries. If I insist on writing three or two sentences every day, I will certainly find more writing content.
Zou Yajie 42: Persevere every day. Diary is wonderful in content and humorous in language, which brings happiness to people. Every word is so beautiful.
The seventh season: although the length is short, the content is very long. People will feel more comfortable if you write carefully.
Xu Ziheng (54): With the accumulation of quantity, we can see that with the awareness and motivation of persistence, the use of idioms in some diaries is correct. However, the contents of the diary are somewhat single, such as the same "ball", which has been written for four days in a row, and only the number of balls changes; For example, what I eat every day, I also talked for several days; For another example, I said the things in the foreign teacher's class five times in a row. The word "happy" is used too much, which is not new at all.