First, strokes have no texture, such as water characters and Chinese characters, and the twists and turns of Qigong writing are very introverted and unsightly.
Second, the contrast between the thickness of strokes is not obvious and uncoordinated, for example, the strokes are written thin in the vertical center of characters and beside the bow of string characters.
Third, the angle of the first stroke of Chinese characters is wrong, and the first stroke of Chinese characters still extends outward, and the gesture of strokes is about 10 from bottom to top.
Simply say these points, and I won't elaborate on other issues.