Today is the weekend, so we go to the park to play. Is this sentence correct?

Today is Sunday, I go to the park to exercise with my parents. As long as we arrive at the park at six in the morning, many of them have been jogging, dancing and practicing Tai Ji Chuan there. Some people keep their puppies by their side. I can see a group of old people gathered in a corner. Some musical instruments play some dances and sing some traditional folk songs. You can even see that some of them are very young. Just joining a healthy society can bring you a lot of things.

What I can see is an old man. His age should be around 70. He writes China's calligraphy on the ground in the park. He just put some pure water with a long brush. He began to write some China poems on the floor. What are the good words?

There are too many things to see for me. Everyone likes to live here in the park. I like this life very much. You can go to the park with your parents on weekends to live a more meaningful life. Today, Sunday, my parents and I went to the park to practice. When we arrived at the park at 6 o'clock in the morning, there were many people jogging, dancing and practicing Tai Ji Chuan. Some people bring their dogs. I can see a group of old people gathered in a corner. Some people are playing traditional folk songs. Some singers can even see that some people are quite young, but joining a healthy club can bring you a lot of interesting things.

I can see an old man. His age should be 70 years ago. He wrote China's calligraphy on the ground in the park. He just brushed some pure water on the floor with a long brush. He began to write some poems by China, which were very good.

There are so many things to see in the park that everyone can enjoy life here, which really surprises me. I like this life, and I can go to the park with my parents for a more meaningful weekend.