Ask the calligraphy teacher to point out the shortcomings.

To put it bluntly: it is decisive when lifting the pen, but because there are many pens on the side, the strokes seem a bit floating and not gorgeous, especially the left vertical. It's good to put pen to paper, but the pen collection is not in place or a bit random. The font structure is ok, because the ink is used, the words are not so moist, which makes the words that should look beautiful a little redundant. Pay a little attention to the relationship between receiving and releasing other words, and don't crowd together.