Now I'll write out my opinions and discuss them with you, hoping that I won't be laughed at by your teacher.
I wonder if the work you showed the teacher is regular script or running script?
If you are running a script, it means:
1, the basic knowledge of regular script is not enough, and the control ability of hand to pen is still poor. There is a lack of rhythm in the writing process, and there is a lack of sense of promotion and frustration in using the pen. It should be noted that running scripts is not always fast. In the process of writing, we should find a feeling of "astringency", that is, the brush runs on very rough paper, which is difficult to find.
2. What's wrong with job selection? Theoretically speaking, the running script works of famous ancient calligraphers can be learned, but if there is no expert guidance, some calligraphers' running script works will have problems in learning. If you learn from Su Shi's running script, it's easy to write "a stone will crush a toad", and if you learn from Huang Tingjian's running script, it's easy to write like a snake hanging on a tree. It is easy to write tactfully by studying Zhao Mengfu's running script in Yuan Dynasty. For example, Dong Qichang studied Zhao Mengfu in Ming Dynasty. Because of Dong Qichang's profound knowledge of regular script and strong pen control ability, his running script is very bookish and not fluent. Gan Long studied Zhao Mengfu and Dong Qichang, and as a result, he wrote eloquently, which was very vulgar.
If it is a running script, make two suggestions:
1, practice regular script later;
2. In the process of learning, consult more experts and avoid detours.
If regular script is smooth and tacky, the reason is the same as above, that is, the lack of skill and the problem of choosing posts.
It only says post selection here.
It doesn't matter what position you study at present, the key is that you have learned this position wrong. Tell a story, and the answer is inside.
Shen, a famous calligrapher and calligrapher, was quite conceited about his poems and songs when he was young. I used to visit Kang Youwei with my own poems and calligraphy works (he is also a famous calligrapher). Later, Kang Youwei told others that this young man's poem is not bad, "the word vulgar is in his bones." After Shen knew it, he was in great pain. It was a great shame. I made up my mind to study in Weibei every day and expand my upcoming study. This perseverance finally overcame the tacky problem.
The best Weibei is, of course, Longmen four products or Longmen ten products or even Longmen twenty products. You can choose any one of them to study according to your preference, but you must remember to hang your elbow and enlarge your study.
As for what "Longmen four products" and so on, I won't say much about singing.
Post a photo of Shen.