I have grown up and am in the sixth grade. I am no longer the careless me in grade three or four.
Now whenever I do homework and papers, I always look at the questions carefully first and always check them carefully after writing. If I find any mistakes, I will correct them immediately. Especially when writing a composition, you should repeatedly think about how to start the topic and how to conceive the content before you start writing. When you finish the first draft, revise it carefully to make sure it is correct.
I wasn't like this before. When doing homework and papers, you often mispronounce punctuation, miss words, mispronounce and miscalculate. I remember once, I dictated in English class. After I finished writing, I handed it in without even looking. I thought I could do it all and get a hundred points. But after I sent it, I was blindsided at first sight, and even got more than 60 points in the exam. It turned out that it was all a clerical error, either multiple letters or one letter was missing. When I write a composition, I never revise it until it is handed down, and it is full of typos. Especially in a calligraphy class, I forgot to bring a book, paper, pen and ink, which not only affected the class, but also was criticized by the teacher and fined for copying a long text.
It turns out that I don't think it's a big deal to be careless. I will do it myself anyway. Just pay attention next time. But after I saw the story of "Ma Xiaohu", I felt very hurt. I shouldn't be careless in studying and doing things, but I should be careful. On the big side: if the rocket designer is a little careless, the rocket will not be able to go to heaven; If the satellite data has a little error, it will not be able to orbit the earth normally; If the doctor leaves surgical instruments in the patient, it will bring pain to the patient and cause harm to the body; If the postman sends the wrong letter or loses it, it will delay other people's business; If you often forget to turn off the power supply, it is easy to cause a fire. From a small point of view: if our students are careless, they often forget things, such as misreading questions, miscalculating numbers and missing words, which will not only affect their grades, but also bring unnecessary trouble to teachers in correcting their homework.
In order for us to study better, gain more knowledge and become useful talents in the future, without making mistakes or delaying things, everyone should overcome carelessness and get rid of the bad habit of carelessness. Whether studying or doing things, we should be serious, serious, serious, careful, careful and careful.
2. Don't write a composition, make an outline. Also called composition plan.
Sketching a composition is to make a composition plan. It is the concrete external expression of conceiving and arranging chapters.
The outline of the article is divided into vertical and horizontal. We mainly study eight common kinds.
That is, there are four kinds of horizontal structures: subtitle, parallelism, repetition and contrast. There are four kinds of vertical structures: one line running through, suspense setting, scene blending and implication.
Let's take a closer look at these eight sketching methods. 1. Composition outline in horizontal structure: Cleverly arranging subheadings [Pointing out the maze] The simplest one in horizontal structure is to use subheadings, that is, to present the writing content of the second part of the article in the form of subheadings, and to arrange a group of things or scenes belonging to different categories but internally related together according to almost the same sentence structure to express the same theme.
On the first day when Wu Huisi entered Class 8, you will be surprised to find that three special figures appeared frequently on the podium. They have distinctive styles and behaviors, which will leave a deep impression on you soon.
Yes, they are the "three treasures" of Class 38, Grade 8. Now I present them to you one by one. A treasure-like mother type. She is small, but she has extraordinary explosive power when giving lectures.
She loves to laugh, and always gives us a hearty laugh at one or two naughty words. She is very considerate and takes care of us in her study and life.
She is Miss Ye. Teacher Ye teaches mathematics, so in normal times, she gives me the impression that she is a very smart person.
But I prefer to watch her in class. When Mr. Ye got excited, his hands kept "fighting" in the air. When he speaks a word, his teeth will bite tightly, quite like the style of Sui talking about Cixi in Lecture Room.
I also found that when I talk to Mr. Ye, Mr. Ye will straighten your collar with his hands while talking, which makes people feel kind and comfortable. Oh, she is just like our mother, ordinary and simple.
Two treasures-Western trend teacher Liu Meirong is a famous "Westernization" teacher among girls. Every time she walks in front of us, she always has a unique flavor, which makes people unforgettable, whether in dress or manners.
Teacher Liu's class is also her most beautiful moment. The tone of English flowing from her mouth is as sweet as a ditty.
And Mr. Liu's "little moves" are also quite a few. When you ask questions, you will lean forward slightly and listen, or draw a few arcs in the air with your hands, or blink your eyes quickly with excitement.
Some naughty boys tried to tease her, but Miss Liu easily slipped out a few clever words to refute. Crisp, beautiful and neat.
Every move reveals a unique European woman breath. Three treasures-gentle type Ask the youngest teacher in Class 38, Grade 8. The teacher must be Liu Meifang.
However, "youngest" is not the same as "inexperience". Liu Meifang is a decent and respected teacher, no matter what he says or does.
Big sister who is considered by many students to be better than any teacher. She exudes the charm of literature, and her smile contains encouragement and infinite enthusiasm for teaching.
Teacher Liu speaks softly and treats us as friends. When you talk to her, you will feel that you are surrounded by encouragement.
However, she is not lacking in severity. Combine rigidity with softness to show the beauty of a new generation of women.
The structure of this paper is very obvious. The first part prompts the main content of this paper-the "three treasures" of Class 38 in junior high school; The second part writes three treasures in the form of subheadings-Ye, a kind and motherly math teacher, Liu, a western English teacher, and Liu, a gentle Chinese teacher; The third part summarizes the viewpoints of this paper. The composition with this structure is simple and easy to learn, especially suitable for students whose composition foundation is at the middle and lower level.
Please write in the horizontal structure of the subtitle. It is required to outline (prepare a subtitle) first, and then write 1 It's nice to smile. 2. Close.
3. What is an essay outline, how to write an essay outline and how to make an essay outline? The composition outline generally consists of three parts: (1) title. Write the title (or full title) in the middle of the first line. (2) Main content and center. Write the main content of this composition and the central idea to be expressed simply under the topic. (3) Structural arrangement. This is the most important part of the composition outline. Pay attention to the following five points when designing: ① Arrange the organization order of materials. What to write first, then what to write. The full text is divided into several paragraphs, and what to write in each paragraph should be organized in a certain order in the form of subtitles. (2) determine the key content. According to the needs of the expression center, determine which content is primary and which is secondary, and indicate how many layers of "detailed" and "detailed" key paragraphs are to be written, which layer is written first and which layer is written later, and list the preparation steps and order of key writing in detail. (3) according to the material selected in the article and the central idea to be expressed, determine the method of beginning and ending, and simply write down the outline. ④ Timing and specific methods of designing the topic. ⑤ Consider how to connect and transition between levels and paragraphs, what needs to be taken care of and how to take care of it. Also briefly mark it. Look, class. The following is an excellent and practical composition outline: title: an unforgettable thing. Main content: I sprained my ankle and Zhou Li took care of me. Central idea: care about classmates and be anxious. Structural arrangement: 1. I sprained my ankle while practicing skipping rope. Secondly, my classmate Zhou Li takes good care of me. (Key paragraph) 1. Zhou Li helped me to her house. (Detail) Second, Zhou Li washed my feet and sprayed "It got better quickly". (Detail) Third, I got better. Zhou Li helped me home carefully. First, the form can be flexible. Generally speaking, there is no fixed format and uniform requirements for the composition outline, and the degree of items and details can be determined according to the characteristics of materials, the needs of expression and their own level. Generally speaking, when beginners write, the outline of the composition should be thin but not thick; With the continuous improvement of conception and layout, the outline of the composition can be written simply. Second, it should be carefully scrutinized and revised. After listing the outline, the whole idea should be thoroughly scrutinized: Is the material selection relevant? Is the thinking clear and profound? What further trade-offs need to be made on the selected materials? Is the organization of materials rigorous and reasonable, and can it highlight the center? After careful consideration, make the necessary changes. Only when you are satisfied can you start writing. Third, you must make an outline before writing. The writing outline is written for myself and is very practical. Some students don't know the purpose of the outline, and even think that the teacher's requirements for the outline are "troublesome". Therefore, in order to deal with teachers, it is really putting the cart before the horse and deceiving others. Fourth, we should form the habit of "writing without an outline". It is common for some students not to write an outline before writing. They saw the topic, thought for a while, and began to write, think, step on the watermelon skin, and slide wherever they went. Some people even tear it up and rewrite it in the middle of writing. The result is a waste. It also seriously affects the quality of composition. The main reason for this situation is that the habit of careful conception and layout has not been formed, especially the habit of "no composition without outline" When writing, with the constraints of the outline and following the "plan", it is easy to do it in one go, and the articles written can easily meet the requirements of "being centered, organized and focused". On the contrary, it will be unclear, improper details, and forget things. Therefore, outline is an important method to improve the efficiency and quality of composition, which reminds students: to write, outline first; No outline, no composition. This is usually the case, especially in exams or composition competitions. It is important to practice writing directly according to the composition outline from the second semester of grade five.
4. [Friendship] The composition outline is not a composition, but an outline. Thank you. The more, the better. The most important thing is speed. Outside the window, it's raining, and each of us seems to be trapped in an airtight net. How I wish there would be a meter of sunshine in such a monotonous winter day!
The bell rang happily, symbolizing our liberation. I looked down and hurried to the door. Standing at the door of the classroom, a cold current swept through, and I stepped back and shivered a few times. "What gloomy weather!" I put my hands together, raised them to my mouth, and exhaled hot air into it. White fog lingered in the cold air overhead, but it didn't give me the warmth I longed for. Without an umbrella, I looked up at the gloomy sky gloomily-the rain didn't stop, but it got worse. I shook my head helplessly, and then flew out like a whirlwind like a rain curtain. Suddenly, a red and yellow umbrella came into view. It moves slowly in monotonous gray, giving me the illusion of the sun. But this radiant sun was soon left behind by me.
I am like a speck of dust in the rain. Let the rain wash me away. "ah! Wait a minute, wait a minute! " There was a call from behind, and in the endless "rustling" sound, the crisp children's voice was unusually pleasant. I stood still and looked back. In a trance, it seems to be golden sunshine ... He came running to me with a golden umbrella, and his hair wet by the rain clung tightly to his cheek. The corners of his mouth rose, revealing a few white teeth, which he made no secret of. Two shallow dimples make his face more vivid and lovely. What a refreshing smile! He patted me on the shoulder and took a few breaths; "Let's go! Walking in the rain, although romantic, will catch a cold! " Said, the umbrella has been on the left hand, between us, like a golden sky, like a touch of sunshine! The rain fell on the umbrella, but not on my shoulder. "oh! Walking side by side with your sun, I am still very warm! " I joked. "Ha ha!" He smiled at me.
Out of school, he waved to me; "Goodbye, then!" "well! Thank you! " I nodded my head.
When I got on the bus, I saw a mass of gold jumping in the fog in the distance, just like-
The sunshine in winter.
Make your own outline ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
5. How to write a composition outline in case of emergency? Apply it according to the following example!
Narrative outline
Title: Remember a drum honor guard competition.
Topic sentence: Unity is strength.
Content introduction (no need to write in the exam): By describing the process of drumming the honor guard competition, it reflects the vivid scene of students competing together, and is inspired by unity is strength.
Structure: vertical
Text:
First of all, at the beginning, summarize the time and result of what happened. I can talk about how things affect me.
Second, the process is described in detail from front to back.
1. Let's go. Weather, geography, people and psychology.
2. Arrive. There is a scene description.
Execute. Details. Personal. How you feel.
4. achievements. Mood. Pointing out the meaning is the topic sentence.
Third, reiterate the meaning at the end, take care of the beginning and send out feelings.
Want to know the details, the specific explanation is as follows:
Outline is the product of composition conception stage. Conception is the overall design of composition, which is mainly based on abstract thinking. There is no composition without creativity, but some ideas are not easy to see because of the short time (some ideas take years). The idea of writing symbols is an outline. Outline is both important and necessary for a composition. However, as far as I can see, I haven't seen a relatively complete and detailed outline writing method. The following features are for your reference and correction.
First of all, we need to talk about how to treat the outline. First of all, we should prepare a short outline for a literary composition (that is, narratives and essays based on it), but we don't have to draft it strictly according to the outline. This kind of outline is not the display of logical relationship, but the display of theme, plot, image and key points. It is a psychological chart, so it is more vague and emotional. The correct way is to write a concise outline after conception, and then abandon the outline, play freely and draft at will. In fact, when drafting this way, there is still an outline that plays a reflective role. When you can't finish writing, refer to the outline and continue thinking. Second, scientific compositions (including argumentative articles, explanatory articles and practical articles) should be carefully outlined. As long as it is constantly enriched, the outline will become the first draft.
The outline writing procedure is as follows:
First, prepare the topic.
(a) the title is closely related to the theme, but it serves the theme; The title can be changed, but the theme can't be changed at will.
The leading proposition of examination composition should avoid the previous proposition and its fixed routine, and be based on foundation and practicality, giving candidates room to play. The test questions will have the flavor of the times and conform to the life and ideological reality of the candidates. Such a proposition has a wide range of applications and strives to give candidates something to say.
(2) The composition of the exam is mostly propositional composition, and there are also many conditions that allow candidates to make their own propositions after providing materials. This must be carefully and slowly examined (as well as your own proposition).
The ancients often used the method of grasping the topic, such as the word "ugly" in the inscription of the humble room. The ancients divided complete topics into body, spirit and eyes, such as "feelings of parting". As a "difference", that is, the main content, God is "Yi Yi", that is, measuring color and aiming at "emotion", that is, the core key. Another example is "Analysis of Social Classes in China", entitled "Social Classes in China" and "Analysis". The ancient method of examining questions gives inspiration to today's exam.
Today's topic review is also to review the meaning of the topic, clarify the requirements of the topic, and grasp the key points to make the composition targeted. Examining questions is the key to the success or failure of composition. The steps are as follows:
The first step is to clarify the relationship between the topic and the theme and content, analyze every restrictive word, and grasp the topic and key points. The modifiers of topic head words show a limited scope. For example, the story of a hero inspired me, and the restrictive words are "one" and "hero". The title component also limits the style, content, theme and characters of the composition. For example, knowledge is power, and writing argumentative papers is restricted. And "one thing that should be forgotten" limits the writing of narrative.
6. List the outline of the composition about the scenery one by one, without writing how to write the outline. First, examine the questions. This is the first thing to do in writing a composition. Otherwise, it will directly lead to "the article is irrelevant" and "writing a thousand words, digressing Wan Li".
How can I do well in the exam? According to the usual forms of composition topics, they can generally be divided into two categories: propositional composition and material composition. The examination of proposition composition is to examine the specific requirements of a given article to determine the topic, the intention of the topic, the requirements beyond the topic, and the "eye of the topic".
Through the examination of the questions, the content range, time range, quantity range, character range and place range of the composition are defined. Can't exceed the given range.
The examination of material composition should be grasped from two aspects: one is inseparable from the ideological content of the material, and the other is closely related to the requirements of composition form. 1. Propositional composition Below we focus on the examination of propositional composition and the problems that need attention.
Determine the topics within the content range and make provisions on the writing content. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, we should determine the content scope of the topic: remember who people should remember; Narration, what to say; What scenery people should write about; Things, things to like, and so on.
Second, the idea is to determine the theme of the article and clarify the central idea to be reflected in the article. The idea of the article is to have a foundation for refining life and try to reflect some fundamental things in life.
In order to achieve this goal, we must strive to be correct, centralized, novel and profound. 1. Correct conception is the basic requirement of composition.
We often hear that so-and-so articles are thoughtful, which mainly depends on the depth of the author's creative thinking. Generally speaking, the intention of our composition should be positive and healthy, strive to reflect the essential content of life, and have certain social universality.
In other words, the theme of the article should be recognized or actively advocated by everyone. Third, the topic of the article is to determine good things before writing a composition, just like making up your mind before starting to do something.
The title of the article can reflect the starting point and motivation of writing. Through the title of the article, readers can basically understand the theme and main content of the article.
The proposed topic of the article should be highly concise, accurate and vivid, so as to attract people's attention and interest. According to the needs of expressing content, the topics to be selected in the article can be roughly divided into the following categories.
When writing, everyone can use it flexibly according to the actual situation. Fourth, material selection is material selection.
No matter what article you write, it is very necessary to choose the materials you need. Just like building a house, we should fully consider what wood, stone, cement, brick and so on to use in advance.
At the same time, we should carefully calculate the amount of various materials, without which we can't build a house; It's no use wasting too much. In addition, the selected materials should be appropriate, which is helpful to show the structural function and image effect of the house.
If you use materials at will, you will eventually build a black house like a train skin. Although strong, no one will like it. In the same way, the purpose of carefully selecting materials before writing is to explain the problem and make it vivid and attractive.
Therefore, before writing, in the face of many available materials, we should make appropriate choices, leave vivid and representative ones, and get rid of general ones; Through the effective combination of important and vivid materials, the purpose of the composition is realized, that is, the theme is deeply expressed by "economic" means. The choice of composition materials should focus on the following five aspects: 1. Choosing familiar materials, the author knows it very well and has deep feelings.
Only when the materials are familiar can you make full use of them, be familiar with them and make you handy. If the situation is unfamiliar and the substance is unclear, how can I tell others? This kind of material, even if used stiffly in your article, will not receive good results, and it will appear mechanical and incoherent later.
This problem is easy to understand, and of course everyone doesn't want to do that. 1, the personality characteristics of people who write articles are very different.
When writing characters, we should pay attention to their differences in age, gender, occupation, identity and experience, and write the characteristics and personality of "this one" character. Writers can't simply list a few comments, but put them in a certain environment, events and scenes to write their "performance", which is manifested in language, action and psychology.
The most common mistake in writing an article is to write a running account. To avoid this problem, when writing, we should grasp the key points and treat the materials with favorable comments.
You should choose the one that impresses you and has feelings. Only when you are deeply impressed can you write concretely and profoundly, even ordinary little things can be written deeply and touching. Writing a scene is like drawing a picture. It is necessary to grasp the shape, size, dynamic, static and color of the object described, as well as the relationship and connection between the things that make up the scene, and highlight the main image of the scene.
When describing animals and plants, we should not only pay attention to their appearance and characteristics, but also pay attention to their growth, development and changes. Xie animals should combine their feelings of love and hate to make the object lyrical; Write about plants borrowing things to express their feelings, and fully tap its symbolic significance.
In the description of articles, we should grasp the characteristics, shapes and uses of articles, introduce and explain them accurately, and strive to write interesting things about the description of articles. 5. Explanatory writing is a commonly used article genre, which expresses the concept, structure, form, nature, classification and function of things in an explanatory way.
To write a good exposition, we must pay attention to the following points: first, we must grasp the characteristics of things; Second, we must explain things clearly; Third, the explanatory language should be accurate; Fourth, the interpretation methods should be diverse.
7. Write a composition outline 1. The title outline is similar to the summary of a chapter.
It is equivalent to writing the main content of this natural paragraph. This is a headline-style composition outline, and the writing points of each paragraph are marked with concise words.
It is characterized by concise writing and high speed, and is suitable for situations that are familiar with the writing content or time is tight. But for beginners, it is difficult to play a guiding role in writing.
2. Point outline This kind of outline is more detailed, which not only represents the center of the composition, but also writes the general content of the composition; At the same time, it is necessary to explain the details of the article. Expanding the outline of a composition is the product of the composition conception stage when writing a composition.
Conception is the overall design of composition, which is mainly based on abstract thinking. A good composition outline is the basis of writing a good composition. Writing an outline of a composition should follow three orders: examining the topic, establishing the center and selecting materials.