Early in the morning, before dawn, I was awakened by my father's cough.
I opened my eyes and saw my mother putting clothes on my father. Neither of them spoke, but put on the newly washed clothes silently, buttoned them one by one, and then pulled them down gently.
this is what my father said last night. In order to earn more money for my sister and me to study during the Chinese New Year, I will go to town this morning to catch a train to work in Beijing. Really, the children of poor families are also really. Dad can't spend the next year at home in order to make money.
It is said that reading is for myself, but I always think, I don't know how reading is for myself, but I think it is true that I am sorry for my parents if I don't study well. How hard they both worked, didn't they both do it for my sister and me? You can't even spend the New Year at home! While my spirit was wandering, my father mentioned that the big bag that had already been stuffed was leaving and whispered, "Goodbye, the children will be yours!" " Mom just whispered "grace" as a promise.
At this moment, I saw him put down his bag again, trying to hug his mother for a kiss, but her mother pushed her father away and whispered, "Don't be a loser, son!" " Dad never said anything again, turned around and lifted the bag again, and strode out of the door. Then I remembered that I had to say goodbye to my father. I immediately got up and shouted, "Goodbye, Dad!" " Mother also lowered her voice and shouted, "Goodbye! Be careful on the road! " In the night, my father flickered and disappeared into the darkness.
I looked down at my sister who was still asleep. I don't know whose rooster began to crow: "Brother _ _ _ _ _ _". 2. Action Description in Senior High School Entrance Examination
One of the composition coaching series: Action Description Teaching Purpose: 1. Through learning, students can understand the role of action detail description.
2. Master the basic methods of action detail description. 3. Be able to use action details to describe and portray characters.
teaching process: first, introduction: action description is to describe the behavior and actions of the characters. We often say: "Action comes from thoughts", that is to say, the actions of characters should conform to the ideological quality of characters. Everyone has different personalities, different feelings and different inner worlds.
Russian writer? Tolstoy said: "When describing a character, you try your best to find the action that can represent his inner state." "Sometimes, just one such action is enough to describe the characteristics of that character." In order to write the characters vividly and express the central idea of the article, we must choose the representative concrete actions of the characters to describe them.
The description of characters' movements with typical significance can make the characters more vivid and vivid. When describing a character's movements, we should not only write out what he is doing, but more importantly, describe how he does it.
through the action description of the characters, the character characteristics and mental outlook of the characters are expressed.
second, the function (a) reflects the character's psychology. He thought about it, dipped it in ink and wrote the address:' grandpa in the country receives it'. Then he scratched his head, thought again and added a few words.
A series of actions here, such as thinking, dipping, writing, grasping and adding, vividly depict Fanka's complex psychology of longing for grandpa to receive a letter and save him from the fire pit. (2) the role of portraying the character.
(Laughing is the same. Introverts may blush and bow their heads shyly, while extroverts may laugh naturally and generously; Simple people laugh heartily, but cunning people are secretive. It is "every word and deed reveals temperament". )
Dad was so angry that he dragged me out of bed and my tears came out. Dad looked left and right, and as a result, he grabbed the feather duster from the table and took it upside down. When the cane whip was swung in the air, it made a howling sound, and I was beaten! Dad beat me from the head of the bed to the corner of the bed, from bed to bed, and the sound of rain outside mixed with my crying.
I walked out of the classroom and stood in front of my father. Dad didn't say anything, but opened the bag in his hand and took out my flower jacket.
he handed it to me, watched me put it on, and took out two coppers for me. The typical action of a typical character is not only reflected in what he did, but more importantly, in what way he did it, which is an important pen to show the character.
For example, likui jy only knows how to wield an axe and chop it off one by one, without considering anything else. This chopping action is typical of likui jy. However, before Wu Song killed Pan Jinlian and Ximen Qing, there were careful arrangements such as "four neighbors thanking wine", and after "blood spattered on the mandarin duck building", he had to write eight big characters on the white wall: "The murderer will kill the tiger Wu Song."
This way of killing people can be regarded as leisurely and thoughtful, which is a typical Wu Song-style way of killing people. In order to make the characters' actions typical, the author must refine the plot. The author of Water Margin asked Wu Song to intentionally make him lose his weapon when he killed the tiger and Ximen Qing twice.
When fighting the tiger, Wu Song's whistle stick was broken in two by hitting the tree. When killing Ximen Qing, Wu Song's knife was kicked off by Ximen Qing. Such a killing scene is much more thrilling than killing a tiger with several sticks and stabbing Ximen Qing with one knife, which can highlight Wu Song's extraordinary bravery and divine power and is more typical.
-Dad's flowers have also fallen. (3) The function of expressing characters' emotions and revealing the theme of the article. He turned to the blackboard, picked up a piece of chalk, and with all his strength, wrote two big characters: "Long live France!" " Then he stayed there, leaning his head against the wall, without saying anything, but made a gesture to us ... "Stay" and "lean" to write that Mr. Hamel was in great grief and pain, unable to control himself and even lost the strength to speak.
However, these actions are always fixed in people's minds, showing Mr. Hamel's deep love for the motherland, his strong desire to recover the country at an early date and his belief in the victory of the motherland, which plays a role in sublimating the theme. Third, the method method 1: Please see the following two fragments for the description (both of which are the action descriptions of how a character attends classes): The original sentence: "Wang Min is very serious and attentive every time he attends classes.
She never plays tricks, and she doesn't talk to her classmates. She remembers everything the teacher says. " Change the sentence: "In class, Wang Min always listens carefully.
She faces the blackboard, with her back straight, her feet standing at 9 degrees, her eyes staring at the teacher and the blackboard, sometimes blinking and thinking, and sometimes nodding her head while listening. " In the first paragraph of these two paragraphs, Wang Min's behavior on how to listen to the class carefully is not specified, so the reader can't see how serious Wang Min is.
Secondly, it shows how Wang Min sits, how to put his hands and how to look at his eyes when he is listening to the class, thus describing Wang Min's earnest listening to the class vividly, which is very concrete and true. Only by carefully and vividly writing the actions of the characters can the ideological character of the characters be embodied.
method 2: action description should carefully decompose the traditional martial arts action or TV camera lens, and often decompose an action into several parts, subdivide a big action into several small moves, and then show or describe each part and each small move according to a certain level, so as to make the whole action vivid. Example 1: "Bird catching in the snow" in From Herbarium Garden to three pools mirroring the moon: "① Sweep away a piece of snow, ② Expose the ground, use a short stick ③ to support a large bamboo screen, sprinkle some chaff on the bottom ④, tie a long rope on the stick ⑥, and people will lead it at a distance ⑥ to watch the birds come down to peck, and when they reach the bottom of the bamboo screen, they will pull the rope ⑥.
The verbs such as "sweep", "dew", "support", "scatter", "tie", "pull" and "cover" here break down the action of catching birds one by one, which is vivid and makes us understand the process or method of catching birds at a glance. Example 2: I saw him hobbling to the railway side in a small black hat, a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe, and slowly leaning down. It was not difficult.
but it's not easy for him to cross the railway and climb the platform over there. He climbed it with both hands (5) and contracted his feet (6) upward; His fat body leans slightly to the left, looking hard. At this moment, I see his back. 3. 4-word composition describing people's movements
Early morning
Early morning, before dawn, I was awakened by my father's cough.
I opened my eyes and saw my mother putting clothes on my father. Neither of them spoke, but put on the newly washed clothes silently, buttoned them one by one, and then pulled them down gently. This is what my father said last night. In order to earn more money for my sister and me to study during the Chinese New Year, I will go to town this morning to catch a train to work in Beijing. Really, the children of poor families are also really. Dad can't spend the next year at home in order to make money. It is said that reading is for myself, but I always think that I don't know how to read for myself, but I think it is true that I am sorry for my parents if I don't study well. How hard they both worked, didn't they both do it for my sister and me? You can't even spend the New Year at home!
While my spirit was wandering, my father mentioned the big bag that had already been stuffed to go and whispered, "Goodbye, the children will be yours!" " Mom just whispered "grace" as a promise. At this time, I saw him put down his bag again and wanted to hug his mother for a kiss, but her mother pushed her father away and whispered, "Don't be a loser, son!" " Dad never said anything again, turned around and lifted the bag again, and strode out of the door. Then I remembered that I had to say goodbye to my father. I immediately got up and shouted, "Goodbye, Dad!" " Baidu map 4. About junior high school students' notes on reading oh, action details. The narrative composition is 4 words, not a piece of
details of love
Scene 1: My daughter took two buckets of water from a well, and then my mother came with a pole.
Daughter (puzzled): Mom, didn't you say to carry it with a stick? How do you hold the pole?
mother: I'll just take it back.
Daughter (walks up to her mother and grabs the pole): How much are those two buckets of water? Are you tired?
mother (smiling): nothing, I can provoke.
daughter (holding a pole): I'll go back and get a stick. Please wait here first.
Mother: Do you think it's any trouble for this child to get numb ... (My daughter brought the stick, and when she lifted the water, she specially extended the stick to her mother)
Mother: Please lift the stick to your side, it's too long here.
daughter: it doesn't matter. I can lift it. (Mother sees that her daughter is motionless, so she pulls the bucket closer to herself.)
Daughter (a little unhappy): Mom, you are not bothered. Are you tired after a day's work?
mother (smiling): I'm used to it, not tired!
(carrying for a while) Mother (asking with concern): Are you tired? Why don't you take a break?
Daughter: Mom, I'm not tired. Are you tired?
mother: I'm not tired.
daughter: then let's hurry! My father and my brother are still hungry!
mother: then hurry up, you can cook later, and I'll just get the bucket of water back.
daughter: well, I'll get the water, so you have a rest first.
act ii (while eating, my brother is holding the first bowl of rice. )
Brother: (Handing the first bowl of rice to Dad) Those who work eat first!
dad: (laughing) you won't eat if you don't do it?
Daughter: (Add a piece of meat to mother) Mom, why don't you eat meat? Eat more. You've lost weight this year.
mother (smiles): I don't like meat. It's too greasy. Look, your brother is thin as a monkey. If you eat well, you will have the strength to study.
Brother (looking at Dad): Dad, work is the most important, and Dad makes up for it.
Dad (seeing his daughter): Lei Lei is about to take the senior high school entrance examination, and his study task is the heaviest. He didn't eat well at ordinary times. I'll make up for it and get a good grade. (She puts it in her daughter's bowl)
Daughter (blocking the meat from her father): Dad, you'd better eat! Things that are too greasy will get acne if you eat them.
Dad (laughing): You are really boastful. Is this obviously a piece of lean meat?
daughter: I don't eat lean meat either. 5. Composition describing action 4 words
It was a hot Saturday in summer, and I went hiking in Baiyun Mountain with my father. This mountaineering is an activity organized by dad's company. Dad's company often organizes such activities, so that employees can strengthen physical exercise and relax their work pressure.
speaking of Baiyun mountain, it is known as the famous mountain in southern Guangdong, and has been called "the first show in Yangcheng" since ancient times. It is located in the northern suburb of Guangzhou, with a total area of 2. 98 square kilometers, the main peak "Moxingling" is 382 meters above sea level. It can overlook the whole city of Guangzhou and the Pearl River in the distance. Whenever it rains or in late spring, the mountains are full of white clouds, which is a spectacle, so it is named after it. Baiyun Mountain has long been famous in the world. Celebrities came and went in the Warring States, and the scenery was pleasant in the Jin Dynasty, so the Tang Dynasty was famous as a resort. Baiyun Mountain has occupied many places in the "Eight Scenes of Yangcheng" since the Song Dynasty. Citizens always like to go hiking here, especially on holidays, and take climbing Baiyun Mountain as a pleasure. At this time, the bustling scene of supporting the elderly and caring for the young constitutes a unique picture of Yangcheng.
Mountaineering can exercise the body, exercise the will, absorb the fresh air of nature in the countryside, and adjust the body and life. Now is the information age, technology is prosperous, and many things can be done without going out. People stay at home all day, work in the company and seldom exercise, which makes it easy to get sick. Since the outbreak of SARS virus, it is particularly important to strengthen physical exercise and improve personal physique, so as to ensure the quality of work and study.
Two days after Typhoon Ibudu, the temperature in Guangzhou dropped slightly due to the storm, but it was still sultry, and dark clouds appeared again and again in the sky from time to time. Early in the morning, I prepared an umbrella and drinking water, put it in my backpack, got in my dad's car, and we set off. The car stopped at the foot of the mountain. Dad said that because of the fear of rain, this time we chose a relatively flat, easy-to-walk, but far-away road to climb the mountain, but in order to achieve the purpose of exercise, we decided to board the destination in one breath. After entering the mountain gate, we walked all the way up, and I was sweating like a pig in less than 1 minutes. The summer sunshine seems to be trying to pull out the swaying green trees and transmit them on my face, which is hot and spicy. As we walked, we enjoyed the scenery on both sides. People were bustling on the road, probably because of the Saturday holiday. It seems that everyone has a sense of strengthening fitness. There are many famous natural scenic spots on Baiyun Mountain. We have been climbing along the mountain road. There are tall and green trees on both sides of the mountain road. There is a rest point every other way, full of stone benches and trees everywhere. Looking down, the spring water in the mountain is flowing out, which is really comfortable. Oh, it used to be called "Pugu". The mountains and plains are full of unknown flowers, and the insects around them are busy collecting nectar. It is really a vibrant scene. At this time, we came to the grassy lawn again, just like a huge green carpet, and there were green grass everywhere. A breeze blew from the mountains, and the grass and Chrysanthemum morifolium swayed as if calling to us. The wind took away the heat wave under the scorching sun.