If you are a beginner, the writing is ok;
If you practice for a long time, this word is not very good.
The fine print is ok, the frame structure is ok, but the strokes are not done well;
The structure of big characters is not good.
The defects of the two paintings are the overall layout of calligraphy works, lacking a sense of integrity, giving people the feeling that they are still only scattered words rather than one word.
It is suggested to do more exercises from the basic stroke structure first. As for the overall layout of the characters, there is no hurry to practice. After a long period of practice, you will form a sense of language and improve your typesetting ability.