1. Write a composition based on the montage writing method
The montage method is a method of combining two or more elements into a new content. In movies, montage refers to the cutting and combining of shots, or editing. The following is a typical famous example of montage creation experiment. The same three shots, using different editing methods, will produce different effects. Such as: 1. A person is laughing. 2. Point the pistol straight. 3. A frightened face. From the combination of shots in this order, the audience feels the cowardice and fear of the characters. 1. A frightened face. 2. Point the pistol straight. 3. A person is laughing. This combination of shots shows the bravery of the characters. Eisenstein once summarized this experiment when he said: "The juxtaposition of two unrelated issues through editing is not the same as adding one shot to another - it leads to a creation rather than a merging of parts. . Because the result of this juxtaposition is qualitatively different from looking at the components separately."
When we describe a topic, we can put together a series of related or unrelated shots. To produce a metaphor, this is montage. For example, if we put the mother cooking, washing, taking care of the children, or even the father reading the newspaper together, it will create the feeling of the mother being "busy".
To write an essay using the montage technique, you need to create several or more elements (pictures), and combine them into a brand new content (theme) through permeating techniques, making the article appear concise and rich in image design. , so that the theme of the article can be highlighted.
The Smile of Green Leaves
The endless yellow sand, driven by the raging north wind, is devouring everything crazily, seeming to annihilate the entire world.
On the high slope, the dry and helpless eyes of each person revealed incomparable sadness and panic. However, behind the crowd, there was a pair of clear and determined eyes glaring at the wild sand that was devouring his home. A voice in his heart shouted: When the wind rises again, I will let the sand recede.
In the reading room of the university, there is a fixed figure who has spent four spring and autumn years silently here, with a trace of determination and no regrets on his thin and pale face. His eyes are still as clear and firm as ever, exuding incomparable confidence.
Yesterday's morning newspaper contained shocking news: a postdoctoral fellow refused high salary and power and set foot in the barren land of his hometown.
On the high slopes of the past, simple thatched houses stood sideways, staring at the endless yellow sand...
A thin and busy figure shuttled through the village.
A team composed of villagers, under the command of a thin figure, began to fight back against Huangsha.
A year later, the yellow sand swallowed up the newly added green spots again...
The lonely late night kept shuttling between the lights and the yellow sand...
The sand rises and the green disappears. The silent tears slowly slid down and fell into the gradually stacking sand dunes...
The line behind the thin figures was gradually swallowed up by the yellow sand and shortened; the hair on the head full of wisdom was gradually swallowed up by the yellow sand. Time bleaches and turns into flowers. Only those eyes were still clear, and the resolute face was more mature and unyielding.
The green gradually increases, the hair gradually falls off, and the strands of hair turn into rows of new green. The face covered with ravines once again showed the confidence of the past.
The thin figure stood on the high slope like the great undefeated god Napoleon, attacking the yellow sand again and again, taking back the lost land from the crazy sand again and again.
The withered but powerful hands stroked the new leaves that had just sprouted; the old and deep eyes stared at the new lives. He saw the dawn of victory and seemed to hear the trembling yellow sand. Begging for mercy, two slices of fresh carrots tilted up knowingly.
The wind picks up again, and I only see green leaves smiling in the wind... 2. When I grow up, I use montage composition to write
Montage is a technique of expression in movies. Borrow it into writing It is to use pictures or stories related to the center to connect or connect them in a certain way purposefully, so that they can produce coherence, contrast, foil, suspense and other functions to express the main purpose of the article.
< p> The application of montage techniques has the following forms:First, parallel montage. It arranges and combines events that occurred at different times and different places according to a certain idea to highlight the author's intention. .Second, subjective montage. According to the inner activities of the characters, multiple pictures or scenes are grouped together. It is mainly used to express what a person sees and feels, the scenes he sees, his memories, hallucinations, thinking, and imagination. Wait. An essay titled "Everything is for the Examination" describes a "strange dream". The author uses the intricate interplay of hallucinations and delusions to vividly reproduce the chaotic mental state of a middle school graduate before the exam. Natural and true. There is an impulsive feeling between the lines - the exhausted cry of a middle school student. Please enjoy the fragment of the composition "There are clouds, there are dreams":
"When I was in elementary school, this dream got I feel that there are beautiful scenery, majestic buildings, peaceful villages, and vast forests above the clouds, but there is no one there."
"After I was promoted to junior high school, as my experience increased, , this dream also has some concrete content. On the thick and boundless sea of ??clouds, floating - a continent. It faces the vast blue sea to the east, to the west are mist-shrouded, fantastic and steep mountains, and to the south are criss-crossing rivers. and beautiful waterfalls, while to the north are endless grasslands and forests.”
“Every morning, the first ray of sunlight passes over the vast ocean and shoots into the dense forest, leaving countless traces on the ground. Golden spots. The sun wakes up the sleeping birds. The cool breeze carries the singing of the birds through the forests and grasslands, and to the center of the continent."
"Today, it often appears in my mind This shot paints a picture: Under the scorching sun, next to high-rise buildings, on a dusty road, in the midst of anxious traffic, I was sweating profusely, frowning, carrying a schoolbag, pedaling a bicycle, walking with difficulty. I Above my head, outside the gray sky, there is a thick white cloud. The white cloud is beyond my sight and out of reach. It floats from my head again and again, and floats away, but I can never jump on it.
"Dreams on the Clouds", what a magical realm. From childhood dreams, to the fugue about the strange and magnificent world in the clouds in junior high school, to the desire for clouds in the reality of high school, we clearly understand I read the author’s mental journey. The brightness and tranquility above the clouds in the article and the faint sadness and helplessness under the clouds. Who can say that life should not have beautiful hopes and pursuits?
Third, Contrastive montage. Connect two completely different or fundamentally opposite things or people together to set off each other, creating a strong contrast, showing good or bad, superior or inferior, etc. Please see the article "Thinking about Life":
"They poke their bright black eyes out of their eye sockets and peek around. The two door-leaf-shaped mouths often spit out two or three thin whiskers, which keep shaking in the water...
" Forty feet rustled in the pot, struggling in panic. In the tall pot, their long legs caught the edge of the pot, and were pushed in with chopsticks... After more than twenty seconds, they calmed down, slightly He was spitting foam, his feet twitched occasionally, and he welcomed death fearfully and numbly. The blue flames were burning under the pot, roaring and whistling. The scorching heat was rising. Suddenly, he "pounced" With a sound, a crab turned over its belly. It was extremely white, with an immovable face, twisted in pain. The other three remained motionless, lying in the hot water, frozen. .The white air rose up to the Song Dynasty, like countless tiny paper money. The shell turned white, turned yellow, orange, orange-red, crimson... The hot boiling water surged up and up." < /p>
The author records the fate of the crab in the form of a contrasting montage. From the lively life to the painful struggle, it naturally triggers our thinking about human life. The lyricism is very strong, "Without a word, everything is achieved." "Wind and Waves."
Fourth, repetitive montage. Shots with certain meanings will appear repeatedly at key moments to achieve the purpose of portraying characters and deepening the theme. Please see the excerpt of the article "Father":
"Just came out
At the school gate, he noticed his father's slightly hunched but broad shoulders, and the tractor squatting alone beside him. The tractor was old and covered in rust."
"He looked at his father's broad shoulders. .The remaining light of the setting sun shone on his father, illuminating the corners of his smiling mouth."
"The setting sun became brighter again, and he found that his father's shoulders shook slightly."
The "shots" of "shoulders" appear repeatedly in the article: "hunched but broad", "trembling slightly". Through the language of the picture, the image of a father who has experienced vicissitudes of life, is strong and optimistic is created, and the great father's love is eulogized. .
Of course, it is particularly important to point out that whether montage is used well or not depends on whether the author has profound thoughts and noble artistic taste. Don’t focus all your energy on the renovation of patterns and pursue " "Absurd" and "bizarre".
I also just learned it. 3. When I grow up, I use montage compositions to write.
Montage is a technique of expression in movies. Borrowing it into writing is Use pictures or stories related to the center to connect or combine them in a certain way purposefully, so that they can produce coherence, contrast, foil, suspense, etc. to serve the purpose of expressing the article. The use of montage techniques is as follows Several forms: First, parallel montage. It arranges and combines events that occurred at different times and different places according to a certain idea to highlight the author's intention. Second, subjective montage. According to the inner activities of the characters, the Multiple pictures or scenes are grouped together. It is mainly used to express what a person sees and feels, the scenes he sees, his memories, hallucinations, thinking, imagination, etc. A description of a composition titled "Everything is for the Examination" It is a "strange dream". The author uses the intricate interplay of hallucinations and illusions to vividly reproduce the chaotic and chaotic mental state of a middle school graduate before the exam, which is natural and true. There is an impulsive emotion dancing between the lines - A middle school student's exhausted cry. Please enjoy the excerpt of the composition "There are clouds, there are dreams": "When I was in elementary school, this dream developed. I inexplicably felt that there were beautiful scenery, majestic buildings, and peaceful villages above the clouds. , a vast forest, but empty." "After entering junior high school, as my experience increased, this dream also had some concrete content. On the thick and boundless sea of ??clouds, floating - a continent. It faced the east The vast blue sea is surrounded by mist-shrouded and steep mountain peaks to the west, criss-crossing rivers and beautiful waterfalls to the south, and endless grasslands and forests to the north." "Every morning, the first ray of sunshine passes over the vast sea. The ocean shoots into the dense forest, leaving countless golden spots on the ground. The sun wakes up the sleeping birds. The cool breeze carries the singing of the birds and floats through the forest and grassland to the center of the continent." "Now. , this picture often appears in my mind: under the scorching sun, next to high-rise buildings, on dusty roads, in the midst of anxious traffic, I am sweating, brows furrowed, carrying a schoolbag, pedaling a bicycle , walking with difficulty. Above my head, outside the gray sky, there is a thick white cloud. The white cloud is out of reach. It floats from my head again and again, and floats away, but I I still can't jump up. "Dream on the Cloud", what a magical realm. From childhood dreams, to the fugue about the strange and magnificent world in the clouds in junior high school, to the desire for clouds in the real situation of high school, we clearly understand I read the author's journey of mind. The brightness and tranquility above the clouds in the article and the faint sadness and helplessness under the clouds. Who can say that life should not have beautiful hopes and pursuits? Third, contrastive montage. Connect two completely different or fundamentally opposite things or people together to set off each other, creating a strong contrast and showing good or bad, superior or inferior. Please see the article "Thinking about Life": " They poked their bright black eyes out of their eye sockets and peered around. The two door-shaped mouths often spit out two or three thin whiskers, shaking constantly in the water... "Forty feet rustled in the pot, Struggling in panic, in the tall pot, their long legs caught the edge of the pot, and were pushed in with chopsticks... After more than 20 seconds, they calmed down, spitting water slightly, and occasionally twitched their feet, fearful. He welcomed death numbly again, and the blue flames were burning under the pot, roaring and whistling. The scorching heat was rising. Suddenly there was a "plop", and a crab turned over its belly and turned pale. It was pale, and it was a face that could not move, twisted in pain. The other three were motionless, lying in the hot water, frozen. The white air rose up, like countless tiny The shell of paper money
The crabs turned white, yellow, orange, orange-red, crimson... The hot boiling water surged upwards." The author recorded the fate of the crabs and their lively lives in the form of a contrasting montage. The painful struggle naturally triggers our thinking about human life. It is very lyrical, "without saying a word, you can get all the wind and waves." Fourth, repetitive montage. Shots with certain meanings will appear repeatedly at critical moments to create a sense of humor. To achieve the purpose of portraying characters and deepening the theme. Please read the excerpt of the article "Father": "As soon as he left school, he noticed his father's slightly hunched but broad shoulders, and the tractor squatting alone beside him. The tractor was old and covered with rust. "He looked at his father's broad shoulders. The afterglow of the setting sun shone on his father, illuminating the corners of his father's smiling mouth." "The setting sun became brighter again, and he found that his father's shoulders shook slightly." In the text "Shots" of "shoulders" are repeated many times: "hunched but broad", "trembling slightly". Through the language of the picture, the image of a father who has experienced many vicissitudes of life, is strong and optimistic is created, and the great father's love is eulogized. Of course, it is particularly important to point out that whether montage is used well or not depends on whether the author has profound thoughts and noble artistic taste. Don't focus all your energy on renovating patterns and pursuing "absurdity" and "bizarreness". Me too What I just learned... 4. Composition with montage structure...
Montage structure method for college entrance examination composition (1) Visual impact can produce visual beauty, attract people and leave a deep impression.
The first visual impact that candidates give to the marking teacher is the beautiful pen calligraphy. Especially when the composition is scanned into the computer for marking, the mature calligraphy will definitely be favored, which invisibly leaves a good impression on the marking teacher. Impression (in fact: students who have been writing words for more than ten years and whose writing skills are not standard and clear are generally unsatisfactory). How to write the visual impact of words? First, draw each stroke horizontally and vertically. Don't scribble, use the grid to make the words as big as possible; second, don't use very thin and light pens, the written words will be understated, will not be very "strong", and will strain the reader's eyesight; third, write Chinese characters well If the structure and framework are good, the words will look good.
1. The title should be eye-catching. The criteria for a good title are "sophistication, accuracy, and novelty." On the basis of being able to express the intention, you may wish to draw it up. A light and lively title, such as "Integrity", the proposed title is "Let advertising regain integrity", "Auction "Integrity"", "Integrity" calls for injustice", "Notes of a profiteer", "Awakening Confidence with Integrity", "Integrity" , the bottom line of being a human being", "Integrity, please don't go away", "Integrity, the foundation of one's life", "An epitaph for those who abandon integrity", "Pure Natural Integrity Oral Liquid", "Wu Chengxin's Medical Records", "Integrity" "Ling" New Product Introduction Book", etc. Overly solemn topics.
Do not make people fall in love at first sight - such as using the ready-made topic center words provided by the materials as the topic (to be precise, copying the topic does not count Make up your own questions), or the common "** small discussion", "talk about**", "** feelings", etc. If there are subtitles, please use your brain to come up with a unique title. It is best that the number of words between several subtitles is equal, and it is better if a certain internal logical relationship can be seen from the title.
The topics can be eclectic, and can be adapted to imitate classic poems, lyrics, etc. The basic methods of formulating the topic mainly include: using figures of speech, arithmetic methods ("Doting = Harm"), asking questions ("Is opening a book necessarily beneficial?"), innovative word and syntax methods ("A gentleman uses his words as well as his hands"), and self- The method of contradiction ("Giving up is also a kind of gain"), the method of contradictory extension ("Feng Zikai is shameless in painting"), etc.
2. Use the title or postscript to explain the idea of ??the composition. The most likely way to get low scores is the kind of essay that the marking teacher cannot read out the center. It is very likely that the examinee does not highlight the center and writes I don't know what I'm talking about even after I write it. In order to help the marking teacher clearly understand the center at a glance, and also to remind myself to select materials and prose around the center throughout the article, writing a preface or postscript can solve this problem in a win-win manner.
For example, when writing "Miscellaneous", one candidate's inscriptions were "Miscellaneous - the source of creation", "It is rare to be miscellaneous but not chaotic", "It is really chaotic to be miscellaneous but not chaotic", etc. 3. The opening chapter should be engaging and engaging. The opening chapter should be “succinct, vivid and beautiful”.
What people often call "phoenix head" means that the beginning should be written in a colorful way, like the head of a phoenix. A good start is half the battle.
The rotating shaft plucks the strings three or two times.
There is emotion before the melody is formed - the opening line should attract people.
The beginning of the composition should be highly contagious, making people fall in love at first sight, and be gripping. Commonly used opening methods include: reverse tangent method, introduction tangent method, restatement tangent method, question tangent method, analogy tangent method, suspense-style beginning, poetic beginning (whole sentence beginning), etc.
The pen fell in the storm, but half of the text was good. Most good beginnings are far-sighted, concise and clear, setting up suspense and prompting people to think, with the purpose of giving people a clear and extraordinary impression.
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At the beginning of the composition, the rhetorical technique of parallelism and repetition is used to take the lead; at the end: Look at the longing eyes of the children, burden reduction is imminent! " 4. There is something wonderful in the middle *** The material is rich and eye-catching. The rich material is an important basis for testing the quality of the article. It can express the author's rich associations and imagination, and show the rich accumulation of knowledge and cultural accumulation.
You can’t produce good articles without good materials. The most eye-catching ones are the novel materials that no one has ever touched. The only way to create charm is to hunt for novelties and pursue small details.
The first is to rely on paying attention to the latest reports and latest achievements in newspapers and periodicals, and the second is to rely on on-the-spot screening, that is, to combine materials through association. Compare and analyze to find the materials that are most relevant, in line with the spirit of the times, that best reflect the essential laws of things, and that you are most familiar with that others may not think of.
Generally speaking, old and boring materials are not conducive to even writing. It will weaken the expression of the theme; while novel and appropriate materials are refreshing and make the theme extraordinary. The splendor of nature is nothing more than the sunrise. How to prevent this unique sun from being monotonous and leave a deep impression on readers. What? Ba Jin wrote about the sunrise on the sea, Xu Chi wrote about the sunrise on Huangshan, Liu Baiyu described the sunrise seen on the plane, Heine used the sea of ??clouds to set off the beautiful scenery of the sunrise, and Turgenev used light and color to express the beauty of the sunrise. Brilliant... Writers are always looking for new themes to express "the sun is new every day".
The highlights of language are also the magic water of composition.
"One." There is a paragraph in "A Thousand Zeroes Can't Compare One 1" that says: A thousand 0s can't compare to a 1; a thousand promises can't compare to a single effort; a thousand words can't compare to a single practice, see. It looks like a big belly, and the addition of "a thousand" gives people a seemingly powerful feeling, but in fact it still represents emptiness and hypocrisy; 1. Although it looks skinny, it represents reality and existence. .
As the saying goes: "A gentleman talks but never moves -", ??but in these cases, it is more gentlemanly to move his hands... Although this paragraph is an argument, it is due to parallels, metaphors, The use of personification, comparison, quotation and other techniques achieves a vivid and majestic expression effect, which is very contagious. 5. Write a 600-word essay with the title Vivid Repetition
Vivid Repetition
A colleague complained: "Our work is so monotonous, and we get one for every three years." I am a freshman. I have repeated the textbooks over and over again. I will have to repeat them for three years in the future, which is boring even if I think about it." After hearing what she said, I knew the textbook by heart. A retired colleague said: "I have taught all my life and I have never felt monotonous. Each class of students is different, and the teaching process is rich and varied. Even if the same teaching materials are repeated, the entire teaching process is different and the feelings are different. It’s different. It’s a kind of vivid repetition, which makes you more confident in teaching and allows you to work creatively on this basis.”
“Vivid repetition” is so well said. . For most people, work and life are repetitive. The job is fixed for many years and the days repeat themselves. But every day brings new changes. It is a vivid day and a "vivid repetition."
In life, there are too many interesting and vivid phenomena, such as sunrise and sunset, flowers blooming and withering, which may seem repetitive, but in fact, all the details have changed. Therefore, even if we have to repeat yesterday's work today, we must repeat it vividly, so that the seemingly ordinary days can be lived in a colorful and fragrant way.
I couldn’t help but think of a cooking encyclopedia that my friends circulated to each other some time ago - "800 stir-fried dishes, one a day will last you three years." In the eyes of many people, there is really nothing new about three meals a day. Over the years, it is just simple repetition. However, those who are willing can vividly repeat three meals a day, change it to a new pattern every day, and eat in a lively and delicious way!
Singer Tsai Chin said that she has sung the song "Just Like Your Tenderness" more than 80,000 times. If you repeat it more than 80,000 times, can you still sing with emotion? Tsai Chin said: "Yes! Because I like this song and enjoy singing it. I don't sing it helplessly, I sing it because of love."
Because of love, monotony can be made colorful and colorful. Let repetition flourish. Vivid repetition is a kind of creation. Many great discoveries are made through repetition day after day, when inspiration suddenly strikes and catches the flying butterfly of innovation. Because of love, even if you repeat the same work, you will devote yourself wholeheartedly and full of passion, and you will gain something different every time.
Because of love, the cycle of the sun and the moon, and the changes of the four seasons, will have richer connotations, and the background of life will be colorful and thick. Ordinary people's lives rarely have ups and downs, nor are they great sorrows or great joys. They are more repetitive and dull. However, even though the essence of life is dull, we still have to work hard to add colorfulness to life and make the life process a vivid repetition.
Let us enjoy life with love and repeat every day vividly