During the Warring States period, there were seven great powers, namely, Qin, Qi, Chu, Yan, Han, Zhao and Wei, which were called "Seven Heroes of the Warring States" in history. Of these seven countries, Qin is the most powerful. Qin often bullies Zhao On one occasion, the Prince of Zhao sent Lin Xiangru, the servant of the minister, to the State of Qin to negotiate. When Lin Xiangru met the King of Qin, with his wit and courage, he won a lot of face for Zhao. The king of Qin saw that Zhao had such talents and dared not look down upon Zhao again. The prince of Zhao sees that Lin Xiangru is so capable. He was named "Shangqing" (equivalent to the later prime minister).
The prince of Zhao valued Lin Xiangru very much and was furious with General Zhao Lian Po. He thought: I worked hard for Zhao and earned as much money as Lin Xiangru, didn't I? Lin Xiangru with his mouth open, what's the great skill, status is higher than me! The more he thought about it, the more unconvinced he became. He said angrily, "If I run into Lin Xiangru, I'll embarrass him face to face and see what he can do to me!"
Lian Po's words reached Lin Xiangru's ears. Lin Xiangru immediately ordered his men to meet Lian Po's men in the future, so they must make way and not quarrel with them. He went out by car. As soon as I hear that Lian Po is ahead, let the coachman drive into the alley and wait for Lian Po to pass.
People in Lian Po were even more carried away when they saw Shangqing let his master go like this. When they saw Lin Xiangru's people, they laughed at them. Lin Xiangru's men couldn't stand this anger, so they said to Lin Xiangru, "Your position is higher than that of General Lian. When he scolds you, you avoid him and let him go, and he will no longer take you seriously! We can't stand it like this. "
Lin Xiangru asked them calmly: "Compared with the king of Qin, who is better?" Everyone said, "Of course, the king of Qin is awesome." Lin Xiangru said, "Yes! I'm not afraid of the king of Qin, so am I afraid of even the general? You know, the state of Qin now dares not fight Zhao, because the domestic civil servants and military commanders are United. We are like two tigers. If two tigers fight, one of them will be injured or even killed, which gives a good opportunity to attack Zhao. Think about it, what matters is the country or the personal face? "
Lin Xiangru's men were very moved. When they saw Lian Po's men, they were very cautious and always let them go.
Lin Xiangru's remarks later reached the ears of Lian Po. Lian Po was extremely ashamed. He took off his sleeves, bared his shoulders, carried a thorn, and went straight to Lin Xiangru's house. Lin Xiangru hurriedly came out to meet Lian Po. Lian Po knelt down to Lin Xiangru, holding Vitex negundo in his hands, and asked Lin Xiangru to whip himself. Lin Xiangru threw Vitex negundo on the ground, hurriedly lifted Lian Po up with both hands, dressed him, and held his hand to let him sit down.
Lin Xiangru and Lian Po became good friends from then on. These two men, who are proficient in one thing and one skill, serve the country together, and Qin is even more afraid to bully Zhao.
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After learning the dialogue between the characters in the second act of the text, I asked the students to imagine the feelings and actions of the characters when they spoke and rewrite them.
Teacher: Please look at the illustrations in the text, read the dialogue of the characters in the second act, understand the movements, manners and moods of the characters at that time while reading, and change this scene into a narrative.
Health: (read the second act)
Teacher: Next, you can imagine any part of the second act and rewrite it into a narrative.
Student: (Some discuss at the same table, some begin to review ...)
Teacher: Everyone has changed seriously. Who wants to communicate with students?
Health: I changed the first part. Years have passed, and what happened in China in five thousand years, such as countless stars and endless roads, today, I will tell a story that happened in the Warring States Period! One sunny noon, there was no cloud in Wan Li. Lin Xiangru is pacing in the living room. After a while, his doorman, Han Bo, was as anxious as a cat on hot bricks. He rushed to Lin Xiangru and said anxiously, "My Lord! My Lord! " Lin Xiangru turned his head and said casually, "What is it?" Han Bo panted, "Even the general is here!" Big Lin Xiangru's face immediately became very surprised: "What, General Lian came to see me? Please even the general come in! " "Yes!" Han Bo answered and led Lian Po in.
Teacher: (Applause) You are so literary. Who else wants to show you yours?
Health: I changed the third part. Lin Xiangru beamed: "Ha ha ha, General Lian, I'm so glad that you can understand my mind! Bo Han, have the banquet prepared. I want to have a good drink with General Lian! " Lin Xiangru took a dress and put it on Lian Po. They held hands tightly and sat down to talk intimately. It is precisely because of the tolerance of the forest owner that the friendship between the two people has been achieved, and Zhao is therefore stronger.
Health: I changed the second part. Lord Lin was particularly surprised when he saw it. I saw that he didn't swagger in as usual, even without clothes and thorns. Adults quickly greeted him: "General Lian!" The words sound just fell and Lian Po knelt down in shame. Lord Lin was even more surprised: "Oh dear! General Lian, what are you-"General Lian lowered his head and said with a red face," Lord Lin, please give me a good beating with this thorn! "Lin Xiangru, when I saw that, quickly picked the thorns and threw them aside. He reached out to help General Lian: "General Lian, don't do this, please get up, please get up!" " General Lian still refused to get up: "Lord Lin, I am really sorry for you! Please forgive me for being such a stupid person! I often insult you in front of others. Now I know it's all my fault. At first, I thought you were afraid of me. Later, someone told me the reason, and I understood your pains. You are really a person who understands righteousness and tolerance! "
Teacher: Through the study of this class, the teacher found that students' imagination is really rich, and some students are still very innovative. Let's continue to use our bold imagination after class and rewrite the text into a complete story. Let's communicate together in tomorrow's class. At that time, I hope to see all the students' elegant demeanor.
Self-examination/introspection
Personally, I think the "blank" in the text means that some contents in the text are intentionally omitted or written simply, leaving room for narrative description. This kind of "blank" often exists in words, sentences, paragraphs and paintings, which provides students with space for imagination and thinking. Teachers can use the contents of textbooks to guide students to speculate and conceive in time and fill in the blanks in the form of exercises. This not only makes full use of the teaching materials at hand, but also stimulates students' inspiration and desire to write homework with the help of students' interest in learning the text, which is conducive to reducing the difficulty of homework. A good article, like calligraphy, is sometimes impenetrable and sometimes "scrawled", which naturally allows students to write according to the context of the text. Due to the need of expression, this textbook-style drama is quite simple in some places, even omitting or skipping the plot. Therefore, I encourage and guide students to grasp these "blanks" and make reasonable ideas, or supplement omitted plots, or concretize and visualize simple parts and recreate imagination. This kind of imagination is not blindly unfolding the plot, but around the center of the article, "adding branches and leaves" imagination. Therefore, I ask students to imagine from the aspects of character expression, language and psychology, so that students can acquire comprehensive knowledge and strong emotional voice.
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Lin Xiangru's words reached the ears of Lian Po. Lian Po calmed down and thought for a moment: Yes, it is precisely because our country has Lin Xiangru and our country has Lian Po that the powerful State of Qin dare not attack us; But if we quarrel, it will really weaken our national strength and attract other countries to attack! Peace will lead to national security, and discord will lead to national danger. We can't let the cunning king of Qin take advantage of it! It seems that I was wrong. Lin Xiangru, like me, risked his life to get the position of Shangqing, but he thought so deeply. Not only can I not look down on him, but I also apologize to him!
So he decisively took off his shirt, put on thorns, and knelt before Lin Xiangru to confess his sins. Ashamed, he solemnly said to Lin Xiangru, "I'm sorry, I thought you became a great official by your eloquence. I once held a grudge against you and tried to humiliate you several times. Now I realize how patriotic and witty you are! You are always clear-headed, considerate, generous, brave and far-sighted … I really can't compare with you! Please forgive my previous rudeness, I was wrong! " When Lin Xiangru saw Lian Po confessing, he quickly helped him up and said, "Please get up, I forgive you. You don't need to be modest. You are a battle-hardened and extraordinary general! From now on, let's stop caring about each other and be honest with each other! Instead of spending time in intrigue and letting the country be attacked, it is better not to quarrel and Qi Xin will work together to defend the country! "
From then on, the two became good friends, and Qi Xin joined forces to defend Zhao.
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Describe an apology with a humble apology
During the Warring States period, there were seven great powers, namely, Qin, Qi, Chu, Yan, Han, Zhao and Wei, which were called "Seven Heroes of the Warring States" in history. Of these seven countries, Qin is the most powerful. Qin often bullies Zhao On one occasion, the Prince of Zhao sent Lin Xiangru, the servant of the minister, to the State of Qin to negotiate. When Lin Xiangru met the King of Qin, with his wit and courage, he won a lot of face for Zhao. The king of Qin saw that Zhao had such talents and dared not look down upon Zhao again. The prince of Zhao sees that Lin Xiangru is so capable. He was named "Shangqing" (equivalent to the later prime minister). The prince of Zhao valued Lin Xiangru very much and was furious with General Zhao Lian Po. He thought: I worked hard for Zhao and earned as much money as Lin Xiangru, didn't I? Lin Xiangru with his mouth open, what's the great skill, status is higher than me! The more he thought about it, the more unconvinced he became. He said angrily, "If I run into Lin Xiangru, I'll embarrass him face to face and see what he can do to me!" Lian Po's words reached Lin Xiangru's ears. Lin Xiangru immediately ordered his men to meet Lian Po's men in the future, so they must make way and not quarrel with them. He went out by car. As soon as I hear that Lian Po is ahead, let the coachman drive into the alley and wait for Lian Po to pass. People in Lian Po were even more carried away when they saw Shangqing let his master go like this. When they saw Lin Xiangru's people, they laughed at them. Lin Xiangru's men couldn't stand this anger, so they said to Lin Xiangru, "Your position is higher than that of General Lian. When he scolds you, you avoid him and let him go, and he will no longer take you seriously! We can't stand it like this. " Lin Xiangru asked them calmly: "Compared with the king of Qin, who is better?" Everyone said, "Of course, the king of Qin is awesome." Lin Xiangru said, "Yes! I'm not afraid of the king of Qin, so am I afraid of even the general? You know, the state of Qin now dares not fight Zhao, because the domestic civil servants and military commanders are United. We are like two tigers. If two tigers fight, one of them will be injured or even killed, which gives a good opportunity to attack Zhao. Think about it, what matters to the country is personal face. "
Night, quiet. The stars in the sky are shining happily, and the moon is walking in silver gauze; The bright moonlight shone on the edge of the bed through the screen window. The moon climbed the treetops, emitting the light of handover and coating the earth with a layer of Yin Hui. The night is quiet.
Lian Po lay in bed, unable to sleep for a long time. He wanted to embarrass Lin Xiangru, but he heard others say that Lin Xiangru avoided himself everywhere for the sake of national interests. Lian Po calmed down and thought for a while, and felt that it was a big mistake that he ignored the national interests in order to fight for breath. So he was ready to tell Lin Xiangru.
Early the next morning, Lian Po took off his proud shirt with bare arms and a bundle of Vitex negundo on his back, and went to Fu Lin to offer a humble apology. Along the way, people were talking about the former commander-in-chief: "Hey, isn't this the invincible general Lian?" ""why is he dressed like this? " "Where is he going? "... a series of problems are hidden in the hearts of ordinary people. But Lian Po didn't care and walked on. So some curious people followed Lian Po.
Arriving at the door, Lian Po saw two servants at the door and shouted, "Please inform Lord Lin that I, Lian Po, have come to apologize to him!" Who heard that, and ran to report to Lin Xiangru. It happened that Lin Xiangru was preparing to read in the study. After hearing the news, he got dressed and went out to meet him.
Lin Xiangru arrived at the door of the mansion, and Lian Po immediately knelt in front of Lin Xiangru. Lin Xiangru saw it and said, "General Lian, please get up quickly." Lian Po still knelt on the ground and said, "Mr. Lin, I shouldn't have ignored the national interests in order to fight for breath. Just hit me with my thorn! " Lin Xiangru stepped forward, untied Lian Po's thorn, lifted him up and said, "Don't do this,' people are not sages, to err is human', as long as they know their mistakes, they will change." Say, get Lian Po a suit to put on. Lian Po said, "Master Lin is really a prime minister who can punt in his stomach. Please forgive my past mistakes! " Say that finish, they walked into Fu Lin together.
From then on, Lin Xiangru and Lian Po became good friends and defended Zhao together. Does it matter? "
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