Letter to Du Mu Unit 5 Composition of Chinese, Volume 2, Junior Two

The beginning of this article is extraordinary. Please see: "When the six kings are finished, the four seas are one, and Shushan is upright, and Afang is out." It's really abrupt and powerful, like the top of Mount Tai. Reading these four sentences reminds people of the beginning of Li Bai's Difficult Shu Dao. Think about it, if you cancel these four sentences and start directly from the description, it will not only make people feel powerless, but also reduce the meaning of this essay. The author doesn't know how much effort and intelligence it took to forge these twelve words.

Of these four sentences, the first two describe the spirit of the Qin Empire to unify the whole country, while the last two describe the grand scale of Epang Palace and the hardships of building it. The upper and lower meanings are connected, but the two sentences are independent. How magnificent and meaningful this spirit is! The situation of the times, the luxury and ambition of emperors jumped out together. This implies the author's sympathy for the working people and satire on the rulers.

These four sentences are hats, which are tightly buckled, but the picture has unfolded a magnificent picture. How to write such a large-scale palace is really a difficult problem. If we only use words such as "majestic", "magnificent", "towering" and "towering" on the surface, it will easily appear empty and cannot give people a concrete impression. On the contrary, if you describe it carefully, it will inevitably be cumbersome and lose the list of phenomena. This is the exhibition of the author's artistic generalization. He doesn't dwell on naturalism, and he doesn't talk empty talk. Instead, he shows the image, scale and charm of Epang Palace through concrete descriptions, giving readers a distinct and outstanding impression. You see how magnificent his description is: "cover more than 300 miles, isolate the sun, the moon and the sky." Mount Li is built in the north and folded in the west, leading directly to Xianyang. Erchuan dissolves and flows into the palace wall. " This is the way to summarize the whole picture. From these six sentences, readers can imagine the height of the palace and its vast territory. First, it gives people a majestic feeling, and then the author begins to describe it in detail. The victory of Epang Palace Castle was written in ten sentences: "Five steps to the first floor ... I don't know if it will fall by tens of millions." Next, the author wrote six sentences in a row with his vast amount, rich imagination and beautiful words, trying his best to describe them and connecting the two sentences with four short sentences. ..... The six sentences are cleverly arranged, the metaphor is novel, and the tone is sonorous, like flowing water. Here, the author writes a scene in two sentences. The first sentence is realistic, but there are also metaphors. The second sentence is written only by metaphors to enhance the impression of the first sentence. The last two sentences also summarize the first four sentences with sighs and lyricism. Further down, when we read some sentences such as "the platform is warm and the climate is uneven", poetry and the beauty of music come together, which makes us suddenly enlightened and refreshed, and we can't help but applaud it.