This article pays great attention to the color changes of the landscape. For example, the purple spots in Purple Spots Clearing Frost, the Liu Dan in Gefei Liu Dan, the pine trees in the mountains, and the green finch Huanglong in the green finch Huanglong axis are all colorful and swaying. In particular, the phrase "flowing water is cold and clear, and smoke condenses into purple mountains" is not limited to the color of still pictures, but focuses on the changes of water, light and mountains. The former sentence is simple and elegant, and the latter sentence is dignified in color, which is praised by predecessors as "writing the scenery in September"
2. The beauty of distance change
The author uses appropriate methods, just like the shooting technology of a movie, from near to far, to form a panoramic view with a sense of hierarchy and depth. The scenery around the pavilion is written in four sentences, which is a close-up view; The second sentence "rivers and lakes in mountains and rivers" is the middle scene; Rainbow selling rain Ji below is a broad prospect of rice fields. This kind of writing is the most prominent feature of the scenery in the preface to Wang Teng's Songs, which embodies the author's three-dimensional aesthetic view and brings readers into the picturesque scenery of Jiangnan. Readers are integrated with the landscape, people are in the landscape, and there are people in the landscape.
3. The beauty of ups and downs
The four sentences of "mountains, green waters and green waters" are inseparable by changing the perspective, so that the upper and lower parts are in harmony with each other, and the heavens and the earth are in harmony with each other, which embodies the author's unified aesthetic view. And "The setting sun is lonely in Qi Fei, and the autumn water and the sky are the same color" is a famous sentence. Water and the sky are connected, forming a beautiful picture with bright colors.
4. The beauty of contrast between reality and reality
"Fishing boats sing late" four sentences, that is, relying on auditory association, convey the distant scenery with the method of virtual reality, so that readers can broaden their horizons and see Wan Li. The real writing and the imaginary writing are in harmony, and the scenery is described as much as possible.
The Preface to Wang Tengting is quite ingenious, with exquisite words, wonderful sentences and gorgeous chapters, which makes people feel like they are in a water town in the south of the Yangtze River. No wonder Han couldn't help but admire: "There are many scenes in the south of the Yangtze River, and Wang Tengting is the first."
(1) The strokes are magnificent. The article is extraordinary. The sentence "yu zhang is an old county, and Hongdu is a new house" uses a group of antonyms of "old" and "new" to write the historical changes of Hongzhou. "The stars are divided into wings, and the ground is connected with Lu Heng." With a majestic gesture, the geographical position of Hongzhou is explained. In the sentence "Hold the Three Rivers to Stop the Lake, Control the Wild and Lead Ouyue", the four verbs "hold", "hold", "take", "control" and "lead" indicate that Hongzhou is in a strategic position in the vast territory of China, affecting the five lakes and three rivers and connecting the east, the west, the north and the south. It is natural for a generation of outstanding men to gather at the junction of China and Yi.
(2) The description of the scenery is meticulous and varied. As the Qian Bie Banquet was held in Wang Teng Pavilion, the author described the scenery around Wang Teng Pavilion with exquisite brushwork.
"Taiqing, the sky is heavy; "Flying Pavilion, Flowing Dan, There is no definite boundary under it" 16 four words describe the magnificence of Wang Teng Pavilion. The "layer" sentence writing pavilions overlap and have a large scale; That sentence "Shang" is written high into the clouds; The "flying" sentence describes the shape of the pavilion, and the eaves are upturned, which seems to take off; The pavilion engraved with the word "Summer" was built on the riverside, and "Flying Pavilion" and "Flying Pavilion" made the static pavilion and dynamic pavilion reflected in the water bring out the best in each other, which beautifully highlighted the brilliant image of the pavilion. Crane Pavilion Zhu Fu, the lingering of a poor island; "Gui Dian Lan Palace, the Body of Mountains and Mountains" not only uses the technique of line drawing, but actually writes that the museum is built on rugged sand dunes, mountains and halls, and also describes the beauty, exquisite structure and vivid image of the museum with decorative words such as "Gui" and "Lan". In the following sentences, two verbs "embroidery" and "sculpture" are used to describe the magnificence of Wang Teng Pavilion in further detail. Then from a distance, it was written that houses were lined up, and boats of all sizes were spread all over the river. The word "jump" in "jump to the ground" makes luxury houses and tall houses of the rich look like low huts lying on the ground. If the word "16" in front shows the majestic beauty of Wang Teng Pavilion, then this word more powerfully shows the majestic beauty of Wang Teng Pavilion. "Green finch Huanglong" wrote in detail the shape of the ship and the beauty of its manufacture. The following description of the scenery is even more wonderful. The word "clouds selling rain, colorful" describes a magnificent scene of sunny days after rain. Then "the sunset is lonely in Qi Fei, and the autumn waters are * * * one color" is even more fascinating. In the same blue sky, rosy clouds are flying, solitary birds are soaring, and the deep blue sky is red and white with bright colors. What a beautiful and moving picture made by lifeless clouds and living Qi Fei! Here, the clouds are moving and the water is still, which is harmonious and wonderful. Fishing boats, battle lines, singing and wild geese add infinite vitality to the tranquil Wang Teng Pavilion.
In a word, the combination of long-range description and close-range description, front description and side description, dynamic description and static description is just right.
(3) Express delicate feelings and ups and downs. The third natural paragraph is a lyrical paragraph, and the author's feelings have changed from "one" to "all things wrong". From sadness to masturbation; From masturbation to self-motivation. The mood is ups and downs, and the writing is delicate and profound.
"Just often, easy. Cool breeze blows gently, fine songs are concise, and white clouds are restrained. "The banquet is a lively scene of singing, singing, dancing and playing wind music. Then, it shows that the banquet is like Liang Xiaowang's Garden Banquet, the wine is more abundant than Tao Yuanming, Ya is better than Cao Zijian's singing lotus flowers by the wild water, and his literary talent is better than Xie Lingyun's talent. This series of allusions vividly describes the unprecedented grand occasion of the banquet, and the allusions are used naturally and appropriately, adding luster to the article. Here and now, in the beautiful scenery, a happy mood of "doing all the entertainment in leisure" and "feeling the infinity of the universe" arises spontaneously. However, the thought that his father was killed far away in the capital, although he was outstanding in talent and morality, was not reused by the court, and suddenly he was "mixed." He thought of Qu Yuan, Jia Yi, Feng Tang, Li Guang and Hong Liang, and explained his predicament from various aspects through their experiences. But the author's feelings are not immersed in sadness, but encourage himself to be "old and strong, not to use his head;" If you are poor, you will be strong, and you will not fall into Qingyun. " "You will be comfortable when you are greedy for springs, and you will be happy when you are dry." "Although Beihai is on credit, it can be picked up; East corner has been lost, mulberry is not too late. "These incisive and profound dialogues mean: the old are not depressed, people are determined to be poor, and they still need to be optimistic in difficulties. The past has passed, and the future is infinitely beautiful. We should treat life with a correct attitude. The author describes inner contradictions with ups and downs, showing the spirit of a wise man who is depressed and unwilling to sink.
(4) Fasten the banquet and insert it skillfully. In the first paragraph, Gong Yan, the host of the banquet, and Yuwen Xinzhou, the farewell guest, are explained, and the antithesis of "Teng Jiao Qi Feng" and "Zi Dian Shuang Qing" shows that the guests attending the banquet are also some folk military commanders with literary talent and military strategy. Also use "Jia Jun for slaughter, and Tao is the name; What does a boy know? A few words explain the reason for attending the banquet, paving the way for the last paragraph to make this preface. The banquet time "September, the sequence belongs to Sanqiu" is interspersed at the beginning of the second paragraph. The third paragraph describes the grand banquet. It is rare to write such a grand banquet in the last paragraph to summarize the banquet. Close to the banquet, the time, place, people, scenery and grand occasion are written. The article is very cohesive, complete and not rigid, which can be described as ingenious.