Liujiaxiyingmen
Xinxin xiaodengke
Dance happily
Love is surging.
Xi feng yin zhi ban
Jie fa Bai nian he
Good night, the song is popular.
Lifelong care of destiny takes a hand
Respect the original poem, fine-tune some words, and especially correct the word "Xiao", praying for your elegant appreciation.
Yu Yicun's point of view makes sense. Only rhyme can be fluent, which conforms to the so-called "poem" (even Tibetan poems are best rhymed), and the change is not bad.