My calligraphy, everyone comments! Thank you very much

Running script must pay attention to bone strength, otherwise it is easy to write weakly. The best word is "odd", and the rest are blunt. The font structure is reasonable, mainly because the brushwork needs to be strengthened. Most brushwork lacks a sense of rhythm, especially in the two links of starting and closing the pen. Please compare the two vertical hooks of "longevity" and "qi". For the vertical hook with the word "shou", pause for a moment after starting the pen, then quickly transport the pen down, stop the pen before the hook, and finally lift the hook. It can be seen that your writing is rhythmic, which is completely different from the spelling of the word "odd".